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Reviews for Layers of Friendship

By : JBMcDragon
  • From ANON - tassa on December 15, 2008
    Wow, I really love this series! I really like how in the first installment you managed to portray how a pedophile manages to convince a child to become intimate with them by saying things like 'your so grown up' and stuff like that. Anyways I hope you decide to continue the series, It's been like what? two years since you posted this. If your stumped for ideas I can share one that I sort of thought would happen. Since Iruka is finally teacher, you could probably get him to come in contact with naruto for the first time. I think Iruka still hates at him at this point, but perhaps you could portray his growing affection for the boy but is deathly afraid of touching him in anyway, not to pat him on the back, ruffle his hair or the like due to his fear of being just like Mizuki's father. Technically he doesn't really know how to deal with the father/son relationship that develops between himself and naruto because his never seen a real one in action since you've never mentioned the father of Raidou, only the mother. And Mizuki, well... I think he'd either be jealous of naruto because of Iruka's attention or be drawn to him because he, at that point in time, be in what Mizuki has fondly called 'a bubble'. That's just an idea, but if you've grown tired of the series don't worry about it. Just email me back with your thoughts!!!!!!!!
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