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Reviews for Meld

By : JBMcDragon
  • From CrisNoWait on November 25, 2008
    You are evil not to add some smut in this!!!!! haha! I dont need reply backs just make smut Shino/Kiba fics XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!! I love the story its funny and feel good, thanks I will be following the rest, for this series.. *glomps&huggles*
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 16, 2006
    Hey, JB!

    Beautiful! I am never disappointed in your work! It had drama, angst, humor, love...you really had me worried when Kiba was like 'no' to marriage...but all in all, it's like that last bite of really good Dove milk chocolate that you savor 'til the last drop...MMMmmmm, chocolate....

    Great job, as always! ^-^
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  • From promise2003 on October 16, 2006
    awwwww...so cute...so very cute. One of the best Kiba/Shino stories that I've seen. Good job. I must go read the rest of your stories, especially if they are as good as this one.
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on October 14, 2006
    ps: It would be great for you to reply to reviews, but you said you didn't know how. I'm not registered on adult.fanfiction.net, but maybe it works the same way than from ff.net? Meaning that when you have a review, you recieve a mail alerting you about it and there is a link directing you directly to a review replies window (for registered reviewers)? As for non-registered reviewers, well, some of them give you their mail adress, I know I always do, use them? Just a suggestion, though, of course! XD
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on October 14, 2006
    God, I love your Shino/Kiba series. All of them. You're one of the very rare ShinoKiba author and without a doubt the best there is. They're both perfectly IC (and keeping both of them IC is clearly a hard treat). Your chapters are long and very interesting. The descrptions are just perfect. You know how to create an ambiance and focalize on feelings whitout having the need to use first person pov or even to give there litteral thoughts. The actions are clear. Everything makes perfect sense. All in all, your writting skills are some of the very best I've read so far and I'm not speaking lightly. It's refreshing. And when it's about one of my favorite pairing that's also so rare, it's just *that* great. I also love how human, different and umperfect they are without being stupid teenagers. Everything is perfect in its realism. I can't say more. To finish, I love the fact that it's Kiba that's the most confident in their relationship (hehe, he doesn't wear underwears!), but is still the bottom, entierely by choice. And while I clearly love all of them, 'noice' was the hottest not only because they had sex, but because it was one of the best lemon I've ever read, sexy and realistic. Really, there's nothing I can say to show how much I worship you. I really hope you'll continue those, and even if you don't continue this particular serie, that you'll continue to write ShinoKiba one shots or fics. *hug to death* Ja ne!
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  • From Hasu on October 14, 2006
    This is sweet, poor unsure Kiba. Thank Kami it worked out for them.
    Kiba scoffed. "No way. Could you imagine trying to mix the bug bloodline limit with my clan's traits? It'd be a disaster. Any kids from that union would be *screwed.*"
    The funny thing about that is I'm writing a fic where these two ARE having kids! [yes together]....This is going to be interesting. ^__^
    Chu!
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  • From ANON - lo on October 13, 2006
    I love this series, and this latest instalment was great. It was so sweet and funny. I was grinning the whole time. You are really a wonderful writer and I hope to see more work from you. Nice job.
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