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By : koea
  • From promise2003 on October 24, 2006
    After the festival...evil plan of Gaara's...oh dear. Hee-hee. Well, I'm really liking the interaction between everyone and the couple, its cute and interesting. Glad that you updated again, and can't wait to see what is in your evil little trick of bags.

    Oh, the only thing that I have to say that I didn't like is how you keep criminalizing Sakura...she didn't like Lee in the manga or anime (in fact she tries to run from the creepiness of his affections) so I don't think its necessary to have her be hanging on Lee or trying to flirt...its just not Sakura at all (and you are writing everyone else so well). I know that you are probably a member of the Sakura-haters club, but could you possibly lay off of the Sakura OCC for me? Thanks. Its the only thing that makes me growl at when I read your stories. You can just leave her out if its too difficult to write her being anything but annoying, I wouldn't mind that at all. Send the pink-haired princess on a mission for all I care. (Sorry about the paragraph of bitching...I do love your story a lot).
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  • From ANON - Rose )again) on October 24, 2006
    Just finished tha last chapter...I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From koea on October 24, 2006
    ~~~~Had to finish response like this because I ran out of room

    will help me be a better writer. But seriously thank you for the offer (I wish people would offer that kind of help with my assignments! *sweat drop*) Also I really appreciate you wanting my fic to be spread around more =^^= It means a lot to me that you are enjoying it! Thank you for your review and feedback! Its helps me improve my writing! GAALEE 4 EVER!!!! =^^=

    Koea

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  • From koea on October 24, 2006
    Heh I forgot about his weights! *Slaps head* But I would think Gaara’s sand would be strong enough to pick him up regardless of the weights or not. He did stop Deedara’s huge bird that was about to fall on the sand village with his sand and I would think that would be heavier then Lee even with the weights on. As for the errors I find that all fanfics have grammar mistakes in them I thank you for your generous offer but I think that fixing the mistakes myself (when I finally get around to it)
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  • From ANON - Rose on October 24, 2006
    Hello! *waves* HUGE GaaLee fan here.

    I'd like to thank you for sharing this fic...I like it very much...I'll try to show it to other fans...I don't think many people are seeing it yet. ^^

    Only one thing struck my attention about the story...Lee has those heavy weights on his leg, so unless he somehow had them off, I don't think Gaara would be able to pick him up (much less say that he's light) ^^ There were also a few errors...I'll help you correct them if you want ^^
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  • From ANON - Yay on October 23, 2006
    great chapter!!! update soon! LOVE GAARAxLEE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on October 23, 2006
    *LOL* Priceless! Lee copying Hinata in the aftermath! *muses* Where's a video camera when I need one?
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 22, 2006

    Lol, did people really get offended over you calling us perverts? Lol, well I think that those people need to get a life. After all, by some people’s standards...no actually now that I think about it, a lot of people would consider this entire site (let alone this section) extremely perverted. If you aren't mature enough to take a simple joke, then you really aren't mature enough to even be on this site.
    Aside from that though, I do think the story has been a little rushed so far. However if your goal is to focus more on Gaara’s and Lee’s relationship, as opposed to the building up to a relationship, then the pace is fine. I’m assuming that the chapters so far are more for setting the groundwork of the fic, as opposed to the “meat and potatoes” of the story. Regardless, I have enjoyed this fic and I intend to read the next chapter as well. Oh, and by the way, this pervert would like to thank you for chapter seven. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Anyway though, I would rather you spend your time writing the next chapter than read a review that’s gotten out of control. My best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From promise2003 on October 22, 2006
    two updates in one day, that makes YOU my hero. :) Hee-hee. I love your story, and think that Ten ten added a lot to this chapter, you write her well. I think its cute that she supports Lee and Gaara...maybe you could make a part with her and Gaara alone so they can become friends and Gaara can accept Lee's teammate. :) I think Gaara should try and make more friends in Konoha, even if it is difficult for him to do so. Maybe Ten ten can help Gaara prepare for his upcoming meeting with Gai...cause something tells me that might be a total blowout. I'm blathering on and on, and for that I do apologize. There is just so much that you can do with this story, and I'm really excited about it, especially when you update so often. :) Thanks again for the second update, you are awesome.
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  • From ANON - me on October 22, 2006
    Hey now, I'm not a sicko! I think thats what you said in the beginning of the 7th chapter! I personally could of gone many more chapters with just cute little things thrown out there like a kiss on the cheek, or gentle touches....etc. But hey, this was really good. I mean....it was a bit fast though.... I know you were being pressured to hurry with the lemon and junk but I think it would of been better if gaara had just let lee know that he loved him by the kiss and then maybe they could of spent at least a little more time together before getting to the good stuff. But thats ok. It was still excellent, and i'm glad its not over yet! Well please update soon! Thankies! :D
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on October 22, 2006
    Very sweet lemon, nicely done. So Lee finally figured it out. Now we'll have to see how their relationship develops from here. A note on spelling -- 'agenized' should be 'against'. Sorry, that was beginning to bother me. This a cute story. Thanks for the quick updates.
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  • From promise2003 on October 22, 2006
    hee-hee...naughty Gaara. It was a good chapter. I love lemons, and this one was good. :) So thanks for the yummy Gaara/Lee action. I do think that I definitely read this story for the warm fuzzy feelings, so I hope that the next chapter returns to the cuteness that drew me to the story (not that I mind action...its just not the best part about this story). Thanks for updating again so soon, I always love reading this story.
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  • From ANON - person on October 21, 2006
    more please.
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  • From ANON - LeeXGaara (is cuuute) on October 20, 2006
    Yes, please please, please! UPdate soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - me on October 20, 2006
    Now thats just not nice!!!! How DARE YOU! lol. Cruel, CRUEL, that is what you are! It was all beautiful and sweet and then you just stopped it! HA! I'm a writer myself, I know that your just trying to get more reviews you sly fox! Its probably working, well I'll be totally looking forward to tomorrow when I read the next chapter, please make it nice and long! pretty please? with a nice fat cherry on top? :D
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