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Reviews for A Better Fox Trap

By : desolatebutterfly
  • From ANON - Jane_lane on October 05, 2006
    OMFG you better keep writing!!!! oiehwiohgaiojh PPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!
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  • From ANON - SeveredWings on October 04, 2006
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...I want more! I laughed my ass off...really I did. I think I lost like six pounds in my ass. Please finish this...I need to laugh more pounds away! LOL...thanks for posting!

    SW
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  • From ZiriOkamiotoko on October 04, 2006
    That is an evil place to leave off. Looking good so far, and I'm liking how it's turning out. Update soon, please?
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  • From emeraldfire84 on October 04, 2006
    Aww, you stopped right when it was getting good! Update ASAP! This story is so original. I hope you bring some of Sasuke's slyness and intelligence into the next chapter because, while he may have moments where he isn't the brightest crayon in the box (like when it comes to girls), he's a genius the rest of the time with a snappy comeback (or the cold shoulder) for everything. Can't wait to see how this progresses. Good job!
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  • From ANON - eirisbadluck on October 04, 2006
    EEEEEE!!!!! Threesome goodness!! I love this story so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!
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