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By : terranigma11

From ANON - Teki on October 20, 2006
Awesome chapters!!!!! >< Please update soon!! >
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From ANON - DragonBlue on October 20, 2006
This is by far the most hilarious fic ive ever read. My stomach still hurts from laughing so hard. You're a really great writer and it would be a shame if you didnt continue this fic. I also love the fact that your grammar skills are awesome, there are fics out their that could be really good but have such bad grammar that you can bearly read them. But no seriously you have to keep this story alive, I know i cant speak for all readers but i really love this fic. I also hope that you can cheer up, theres no point in feeling depressed. Even if the day completley sucks we have to make an effort to keep a smile on our faces even if we feel like crap and all we want to do all day is lie in bed and sulk. I wont be able to surf the net for about a week so i hope you have an update for me by then. Well cya!
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From ANON - dramastarelf on October 19, 2006
I like this story it's odd but fun to read and it is a lot better then a lot of the trash out there ... I'm intrested in were the story will go from here.
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From ANON - Yessxzy on October 19, 2006
Oh dear god! please continue... I just finished reading the last three chapters and I just couldnt stop laughing, just couldn't!! I was laughing so hard my chest hurts... This is freaking amazing I hope you continue, this is too good
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From ANON - Taylor on October 19, 2006
*pant pant*

This is fucking hilarious....bwahahahaha...I'm sorry, I'm still laughing at that papyrus joke...fic is awesome. *high fives ya*
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From ANON - Sam on October 19, 2006
OMG All i can say is update!!!! I am totally loving this. Can't stop laughing my ass off.
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From ANON - Tohru on October 19, 2006
I love this story!!! I think it's really great, and you write really well. The only thing is that I would love to see some more SasuNaru. I can't waite for that. Also, I just want to thank you for updating so quickly - you rock
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From ANON - Angel on October 19, 2006
*wipes away tears of joy*

Honey I just want to tell you...I have never...and I mean NEVER laughed so hard. My friend gave me a link to your fiction and I couldn't drag myself away from the computer till I was done reading it. You've got one hell of a sense of humor. Don't lose it. It's brilliant and I am looking forward to more chappies < Take care of yourself, you're needed, I can assure you.
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From ANON - Carla on October 19, 2006
I dont like reviwing but since you seem to need it to lower your bouts of depression here it is. I like the story, am confused but that doesnt mean that i would like to be left totally in the dark if you where to leave this as it is or unfinished. So, get a clue and keep up your excellent posting skills. The making of the journal's entries are so hilariously funnny that i cant decide if i like the actual facts-events happening or when Naruto gives us his account of the day to have it be post at youtube without his knowledge of course. So, yeah; thanks for your prompts updates and dont you dare throw in the towel if you get flamed or the story is not reviewed as much as it is being hit on. You have a loyal reader in me even if i dont reviw so please keep it up and will be waiting for the next chapter as am very interested in the Gaara/Naruto date as well as Sasuke's reaction to the date. So please hurry up with the next chapter, ok?

Carla
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From ANON - chelzi on October 19, 2006
this is great. i really do love this... sasuke looking at the calvin klein model... hehe... i can't believe he tapped his phone!!

evermist: And /I/ can't believe it's not butter!

chelzi: that is SO rude, shika-kun!!! i suppose it's so no one tells him, but still... i wonder if gaara's seen the videos? probably, since everyone has, but... yeah, naruto is SOOOOOOOOO cute!! ^_^_^ YAY!!

evermist: Keep writing! =^.^= Shikamaru is so mean. But he rocks, he's mah favorite! *holds up sign reading: 'I Love You, Shika Please Bear My Children'* That was random. And not even true! I want /Kakashi/ to bear my children!

chelzi: uh... riiiiiight........................ anyway, she's crazy... i love shikamaru too, but he's being very very very very very very mean. please update soon!! i can't wait to see what happens!! ESPECIALLY THE DATE!!!! ^_^_^_& SQUEE!!~

evermist: DR. PEEEPPEEEEEEEERR!!!
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From ANON - Nekohime (Un-logged in and lovin it) on October 19, 2006
*Blink Blink.. Tears fill the Neko's eyes, and stream down her face in waves, not unlike those creepy disturbing looks between Lee and Gai*

AHHH! I can't even tell you how severely happy I am to hear that you're not going to abandon this story!!! I can't even believe such a thought would enter your mind! *Brandishes a supersoaker watergun filled with acid and banishes the evil FanFic killing Demon that is 'lack of confidence.' That'll Teach you!! Mess with one of my favorite authors will ya! *Shakes fist* No .. but in all seriousness.. if reviewing is all it takes to keep you writing this wonderful story, then consider yourself in for some long sit ins.. Cause I can seriously leave some long reviews when motivated and your story is just that kind of story that I'll sit and write a novel of a review for.. Thank you for this great Chapter.. My God! hahah.. I can't wait to see in what way Saske's brain explode once he sees this journal entry.. Heh sometimes I findmyself browsing the featured videos on Youtube, in search of those entries.. (This is how much your fic has warped my brain thank you!)

Keep up the fantastic work.. I know I don't need to tell ya that.. But do it anyways ^_^!!

With much love and enraptures appreciation...

Neko
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From ANON - innerchild on October 19, 2006
i love how u have characters from other shows in here. and you always make me laugh in every chapter. i can't wait to see how sasuke's gonna react to the fact that naruto's got a date wit gaara and the whole model crush thing.

tomorrow is oktoberfest at my school, whoop! i'm new here, so i've never heard of oktoberfest or had it at my old school, so its cool that i get to miss about an hour and a half of classes just to go around buying food and hanging with my friends.

yeah... don't know why i just said that. anyway, hope up update soon. it really makes me happy when i see this story updated. i need something to make me smile during the day.

-inc
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on October 19, 2006
I dunno what's wrong with me lately. Usually I'm so easily long-winded but I'm having more and more trouble lately. Oh well, here goes. I loved this journal entry, though I still feel for Naruto. But it is good revenge that all these people who aren't letting him know what's going on are being embarassed by him. I can't wait until he gets around to embarassing Ino-Shika-Cho, since they seem to be part of the brains behind this whole thing. Maybe I'm inferring incorrectly, but it seems like Shikamaru is doing this so the general perception of Naruto will change because people will be able to see him, the real him, and not what they want to see. But even if that is what he's doing, it's still a horrible thing to do. Privacy is important and I don't know many people who would be willing to give up their privacy so completely, no matter the reason or the possible result. Bad Shikamaru. Anyways, I can't wait until your next chapter to see all the reactions to Naruto's newest journal entry. I think this was the most entertaining (and embarassing) one yet.
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From ANON - Zrina on October 19, 2006
I really do hope you continue with the story. I find it funny and very entertainng! The idea is so cute!!! It is very rare that you see a high school au fic where he still fox's out :) Pls pls continue :D
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From ANON - J_10 on October 19, 2006
wow, i've been reading stories on this site for a little bit over a year now but never have I given any story a review. Your story is just so , uhm, how should I say this, uh, out of this world. yeah. I love the random crossovers. I love the part when Miaka and Kagome we're fighting. That was so funny. You need to continue this story. It's like an addiction for me. Oh, and you should write more stories. Your writing style is top notch. It's very addictive. Well, that's about it. Thanks for writing such a great story and please don't abandon this story. I know that I won't be the only one disappointed. Good luck with this! =)
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