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By : terranigma11

From ANON - Taylor on October 23, 2006
Surprise huh? I'm really looking forward to it.

I must say,this is one of the funniest and most original fics that I have ever read in my LIFE! And I've read alot of fics ,y'know. ^_~
CAn't wait for the next chapter. *high fives ya*
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From ANON - Jadebyrd on October 23, 2006
LOL!! I love your story, it's so funny!!! i totally look forward to it each day!!! I hope you do decide to continue the story cuz seriously it's one of the few ones that i'm enjoying reading right now!! i can't find anything better at the moment since i've already read everything out there it seems. Good luck with the story!!!
Yay for SasuNaru ALL THE WAY!!!!! (and some GaaNaru and NejiNaru fluff on the side)
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From ANON - Whoopeee on October 23, 2006
Im super excited to see the suprise, and I completly flipped when I heard about the fic taking a more emotional turn. ILOVE THAT IDEA, Im so excited for that. GAH, IM SO PUMPED FOR DRAMA AND THE NEXT CHAPTER. Gehehehe. Anyways, i'll leave ya alone now
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From ANON - Whoopeee on October 23, 2006
GAHAHA Holyman, this chapter gave me hot flahes galore! Hehe Although that could also be from the unlimited amount of coffee that I was drinking...At least I hope thats it *is way to young for menopause XD* Haha ANYWAYS..I LOVED this chapter. Damn, your fic truly needs some fanart. Sailor Sasuke XD, that would be lovely. Also, the humor was a tad bit cheesy but it fit in its own little lovely way
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From ANON - Whoopeee on October 23, 2006
GAHAHA Holyman, this chapter gave me hot flahes galore! Hehe Although that could also be from the unlimited amount of coffee that I was drinking...At least I hope thats it *is way to young for menopause XD* Haha ANYWAYS..I LOVED this chapter. Damn, your fic truly needs some fanart. Sailor Sasuke XD, that would be lovely. Also, the humor was a tad bit cheesy but it fit in its own little lovely way
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From ANON - coll33n3rin on October 23, 2006
Thank you so much for writing! I was laughing so hard I actually cried.
The way you weave the humor into the plot is brilliant.
Keep up the wonderful work - you're very talented.
Thanks again!
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From ANON - madd envy freak on October 23, 2006
LMAO Stalker! He's a stalker in my fic, too! Hell, Sasuke is a stalker to begin with... *sweatdrops* an evil, smexy, evil stalker... EVIL! *cough* Love the chapter! CONTINUE QUICK! n___n
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From ANON - chelzi on October 23, 2006
oh!! i love this story!! please don't end it!! i'm depressed too, but i still write like crazy. it's my outlet. actually, i think we determined that i like fan-world more than real-world. but at least i know the difference!! ............ that's the only thing keeping her from diagnosing me as psychotic. anyway. this chapter was hilarious! my sister and i read it together, we each read about half the voices, and i do the narration. it's pretty good.
i'm perfectly willing to be a beta! if you want, just e-mail me at feayrubia08@yahoo.com!! ^__^ i hate sitting, reading a fic and correcting it in my head. i'd rather have it right in the first place!! so i'll help you if you want. it might take me a couple of days, but i'll write you back as soon as i can!! ^___^
i can't wait to see who's stalking naruto, and i'm pissed at sasuke right now. bastard!! you just waited to long! you let him be happy!!! XP asshole... that's what i think of sasuke... LET NARU HAVE HIS HAPPYNESS WITH GAARA-CHAN!!!
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............ oh, god, gaara-chan... WTF?!!!? is he really that stupid? well, not stupid, but... that is gonna be embarrassing... he doesn't know how to use make-up. poor, poor gaara-chan... so please update soon!! i wanna know what happens.
and itachi... 'okay, don't forget a condom'. that was hilarious! and gai germs. GAI GERMS!!! that's great...

evermist: Yes, Gai germs. Who knows, he might have some horrible disease! The symptoms are terrible...
...First, you suddenly start having horrible cravings to wear green spandex. Then, you realize your hair is lying unnaturally flat. Finally, your eyebrows are replaced by large catterpillars, and when your teeth start blinding random passerby, you /know/ you've got it bad. Beware!! You don't wanna end up like poor Lee-kun, do you?
Keep writing! And don't use her(points to sister) as a beta. Her grammer is crap! 'you just waited to long!' no uppercase letters! even on names like sasuke itachi and gaara! You suck, aneki. =^.^=

chlezi: ok, i'm gonna defend myself!! bitch... FIRST of all, i catch stuff like 'to' and 'too' when i read, just not when i write. and i was typing fast. sometimes i hit too many letters at once. BUT WHEN I'M CRITIQUING (that's not right...) I KNOW WHAT THE HELL I'M DOING!! so shut up...

Evermist: *looks to ceiling* Shut shut shut...'chlezi'..? Case in point. And what you'll be doing in betaing is WRITING!!!

chelzi: WHILE I'M READING IT!! stupid. besides, i will capitalize and spell stuff right, cause i'll put it in microsoft word first. duh! so, terranigma11, don't listen to her. she doesn't know what she's saying. i know more arbitrary rules about grammar. and i can spell it. XP loser. so if you want me to beta, send me an e-mail. and i'm incredibally sorry about this review. it's poiintless rambling. please update soon though!!!~

Evermist: Fuck you. Anyway, keep writing, this story is hilarious. I love it. =^.^=
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From ANON - Carla on October 23, 2006
Good to know that the actual response for the fic has nothing to do with your previous madness about ending the fic. Sorry to hear you are having a bad patch in life but just hang in there. After all they do say that after the storm comes the calm or whatever. Anyway, what am trying to say is to take kife by the horns and dont let it run you over. Be strong and have patience.
That is so lame, sorry am just trying to show you some support but am not very good at it!

Be good!

Carla
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From ANON - Darling_425 on October 23, 2006
God! This is good! Can't wait for more!
Poor Neji and Sasuke! Noone will be honest to them self if coming out of closet brings such a misfortune!
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From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2006
WTF, I was gone for a week and there are like 5 chapters I just spent the last two hours reading. OMG, I have never laughed so hard in my life, truly and honestly. There were like eight million things I wanted to write down with lines that I liked starting with Hinata shaking like a vibrator and so on. Your similes and metaphors are a f'n riot. And yet it's intelligently written and it feels very authoritative, like you totally know where you're going with this. I love every single character, and I like all the Xover cameos even though I don't follow all of them though I'll die if Ritsuka and Soubi show up or something. Seriously, it makes sense that the story's so funny, cuz it takes a bit of sadness in one's life to really have a good handle on extremely funny humor. But don't even doubt this story, it's one of the best ones out here right now, and obviously the funniest. I'm totally looking forward to everything you've built up like Gaara and Naruto's date and what Sasuke and whoever are going to do to sabotage it. That bit with drunk Tsunade just OMG and Naruto's obsession with his bowel movements is priceless. Although really it reminds me of my sister.. hmm.. anyway I LOVE it. And if you still want/need a beta look me up, but I'm sure there's someone better out there for it than me! Keep up the great work!!! (not a demand, just encouragement) Cheers! ^_^
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on October 23, 2006
Dude, that's just insanity and I love it. Gaara with the makeup? OMFG!! Please update soon, I can't wait to see people's reactions to him.

*Sorry I don't have time for more, I'm actually supposed to be getting ready for work. Bad me
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From ANON - kiba1350 on October 22, 2006
U should totally continue because it's so amazing and hilarious. I love the crossovers cuz they just add to the stroy's craziness
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From ANON - castalvia on October 21, 2006
O.O I LOVE this story! I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder how Sasuke will react to his little naru-chan going on a date with Gaara. lol I love how you portray naruto's journal, I could honestly see him saying those things; most of which had me laughing my head off. ^___^ I wonder how Naruto will react when he figures out what's really going on. Almost everyone he knows is in on it, or they know about it. He might feel betrayed! Poor naruto! Well I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work!
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From ANON - OlinKuragi13 on October 21, 2006
yay! gaara/naruto please update!
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