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Reviews for Cloud on My Tongue

By : desolatebutterfly
  • From JigokuDayu on December 13, 2017

    This is so tragic! I could really feel Haku's torment in this. My heart bled for him, but also for Zabuza. Because Zabuza is suffering so much in this, too, feeling like he can't let Haku get any closer and trying to deny his love for him. Beautifully cruel fic! I nearly cried.


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  • From grinsekatze on January 23, 2009
    wow. incredibly well written and OH how SAD.

    AND it shares it's titale with a Tori Amos song? this cannont be a coincidence, can it? (I adore Tori Amos btw.^^)

    I really enjoy your stories though they are short ;)
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  • From oohshiny on December 02, 2007
    awwww..... uh 1 question, even tho i know why you put it like this, but if zabuza reeeeeeeally wanted haku like that wouldnt he've just... urr... TAKEN haku-kun? i mean haku im sure would be willin, but zabuza dun seem like the type of person to restrain himself from..... yeah.
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  • From AliceInuzukaAburame on September 02, 2007
    T__T poor Haku.......that was really beautiful wow...
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  • From ANON - emery on December 31, 2006
    guh.....drools......um give me a moment to compose myself. this is just too beautiful for words. great work and i hope that next time you will write a story will lots of smut between these two pairings.
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  • From ANON - Keba-kun on December 08, 2006
    OoOoOoOoOoO...i loved this! This is so sad, but i wanna hate it, but i love it. ~Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Kei on November 13, 2006
    Respect for the ending since most people would have had those two sleeping together pretty quickly after the whole reciprocal-feelings-realised thing. The characterisation was above average for the most part. Realism was a bit lacking in the masturbation scene and distracted me from the good points of the previous part.
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  • From ANON - Grey on October 22, 2006
    That's kind of sad...I thought they were gonna get together in the end :( Instead, he's moved from the room :P Poor Haku ::hugs Haku:: Great story, tho! Absolutely adore it!
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  • From on October 17, 2006
    More fic ._.
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  • From nekogirl1 on October 13, 2006
    I love your stories!! They are all so angsty! Poor Haku. *cries* Haku is my fav char other then Naruto. You should write a one-shot with them. Keep on writing!!
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  • From animekid on October 09, 2006
    heheh loved the ending...getting to like this pairing XD

    nice job on doing both men's characters; for a person that watches naruto as casually as kakashi, you did a pretty good job on showing detail and what not

    nice job..wouldn't mind seeing more of your work
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  • From Hasu on October 08, 2006
    *sniff, sniff* HAKU-SAMA!! He's so utterly adorable yet so sad.
    Sore kanashi.
    I like your style of writing too.
    Itoshii, lovely.
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on October 05, 2006
    Can't believe this hasn't gotten any reviews yet!

    it was so..... so... gah, no words, i tell you!!

    *glomps Haku-kun*
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