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Reviews for Zipper Sex

By : desolatebutterfly
  • From coolco112 on December 15, 2008
    That was an awesome story! Can u write a narusasu shower smex one? I would love it if u did.

    Thanx!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Curious beginning. . . . I like their argument, although I think Sasuke looks way better in black. . . . Heh. “Why couldn’t the bastard just relax and enjoy himself?” Because he’s a tightass, Naruto! ^_^ . . . Boy, you’re a pretty good writer. . . . Hah! Cute touch about Sakura stepping on the sash. ^^ . . . Mmm, zippers, yes. Sasuke, you should get some tight zippered clothing. ^^ . . . Ahaha, no, that wouldn’t be good. Watch it, will you, Naruto? . . . Interesting sentence: “Sasuke shot him a look that clearly called into question [. . .] all in one devastating blow.” I like it. . . . Ooh, another good one: “[. . .] to see Sasuke’s face start to close like a thundercloud.” (*Ahem* I like Sasuke, that’s why all the comments on him. *blush*) . . . Okay, this paragraph confuses me: “It had hurt him the last time he persuaded Sasuke [. . .] and a pissy boyfriend to deal with.” Huh? . . . (*snort*) Yeah, I would yell at you, too, for that, Naruto. . . . Boy, that is awesome. . . . I like Naruto’s thought: ‘Come on, bastard.’ . . . (*snigger*) “I am the Hokage of sex!” XDD Good one. XD . . . Ohh, Sasuke, you’re going to regret that promise; he’s not going to get you black, blue and/or white clothes. . . . Red leather? Uh, I . . . dunno, Naruto. Well, maybe. . . . Hah! Cute ending. ^_^
    Alright! I like this one! You should write more like this!

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  • From animeaddict666 on October 06, 2006
    Hahahahah! I read two great fics, then look! IT'S THE SAME AWESOME author. LOL! Another great job!
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  • From ANON - chelzi on October 04, 2006
    oh. my. GOD! that was hilarious. i can't believe he threw out his clothes, but the thought of sasuke in red leather with zippers... MMM! i love it! that was so hot. thank you. oh! i loved the 'i'm the hokage of sex' line. it was perfect!~
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  • From kaesaku on October 04, 2006
    haha~
    me likey!
    ..loves ur fic!
    so hot!
    sasuke in orange!
    kewl~
    i loved the idea that the fic's kinda about naruto trying to be bottom..
    ..couldn't help laughing when he said he was the best bottom ever and that he didn't complain 'bout shit like sasuke did..
    hehe..
    did i say it was hot?
    ^^
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  • From DemonBlaze on October 04, 2006
    That was great
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 03, 2006
    Ok... I must admit that the fic's title didn't drag me into it, it just didn't scream "Read me!" if you ask me, but the story itself was worth the time it took me to read it. Good job!
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  • From ANON - SeveredWings on October 03, 2006
    Oh...i loved it! I liked the way you wrote Sasuke holding back, it keeps his character real. But, that little 'Hokage of sex' got him to loose control...*smirks*...yet another battle lost to the fox!

    Thanks for posting,
    SeveredWings
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on October 03, 2006
    I like it !!!

    good job
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