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Reviews for In This World of Make Believe

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Timber on October 24, 2009
    Just wanted to know....is this story still on to be completed? Who are you putting Naruto with? Neji maybe??
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 07, 2009
    Just read chapter 5 ...this isn't really yaoi at all. I think I would call it a fluffy love story for girls with a hint of shonen-ai. In Somnium, Aveo Captore and Machi Yoko Naruto are my two FAVORITES!!! :) Just love them both and looking forward to how they develop!! :)
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  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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  • From ANON - Laura on February 05, 2007
    Aaaaah! I usually hate stories that are alternate-reality-but-still-in-the-Narutoverse based. But this one is excellent! I guess because you didn't change the past or have them relive the past, I hate that. Anyway, what's going to happen? Who will be evil? Probably his dad or something, or probably someone we won't expect, eh? Well, you must update soon because this is the best thing I've read in a while!

    --Laura
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  • From ANON - oztan on January 09, 2007
    I just read the whole thing. I’m not a very big fan of Sasuke/Naruto pairing but the whole Uchiha having a crush on Naruto that was good. I do love Hinata/Sasuke pairing. I also like the way you portrayed Hinata, Kakashi & Itachi here too. I love this story, the whole plot line and everything.

    I hope you write more stories. With Hianta/Sasuke pairing.

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  • From ANON - LapseRa on December 14, 2006
    Amazing, amazing work. I was absolutely blown away by how well you matched everything and made it so believable once he realized that his "wish" had come true.
    I can't wait for more. :3
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  • From ANON - Ladama on November 17, 2006
    As soon as you said "Not a sasunaru fic" I hightailed it out of there.Are you happy I wasted a good two hours on this?
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  • From ANON - Yersi Fanel on November 16, 2006
    I think this is interesting, I'm going to read it!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 16, 2006
    i am in love with this story. sigh. it makes me happy. especially with all the gore... but i'll move away from that subject. anyway, great chapter. though i agree with sasuke about not wanting to see naruto touch orochimaru that way.... ewwww. oh well, i'm glad kyuubi made a very strong appearance in here and he wasn't all evil, cause he's definitely one of my facorite characters. even if he's a big ass human eating fox, he still kicks ass. anywho, can't wait until the next chapter.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 12, 2006
    holy mother f* jesus on white bread, that was... hell, i don't know. i was hesitant to read this at first because of the summary, but i read a lot of your other stories and loved them, so i had to give this one a look at. i am so glad that i did. this is absolutely amazing. actually, amazing doesn't cut it. and i'm not just being nice. i'm completely serious. i've never read anything like this before and i don't think i ever will, unless its something else you write. i can't wait until they kill that bastard... and i hope something happens to sakura. whether good or bad, i want to see her. what do you have in store for her? at first, i didn't like the idea of sasuke and hinata, and i'm still a bit iffy on it, but i'll get over it. BUT only if naruto gets to be happy, even if its not with sasuke. at the moment though, i don't really care about pairings. i just want to see 'the Uchiha' get his fucking head cut off... maybe his heart cut out as well. okay, i think i've said enough... even though i just rambled. anyway, i love this story... can't get enough of it. so i hope you update soon.

    -inc

    p.s. i'm glad that itachi and sasuke get along... the way you portray their relationship is completely realistic and not fake at all. can't wait for more brotherly love(in a non incest way) :)
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  • From ANON - Mija on November 11, 2006
    omg I just find this fic and its at a cliffhanger??? Noooooooooos!....and ok I am not a SasuHina fan but oddly enough youve made it work and I like this fic, and I soo dont want naruto to be loenly, I want others to treat him right, for him to get his confidence back, for Sandaime, Kakashi and Iruka to love him like they do the other naruto..and yeeeeessssssss they get to kill the ebil bastid Sasuke together Yay! Oh I dont like that one at all...and poor poor Naru his virginty taken by HIM??? urrrggkkk uuuugghh, gonna be sick, ok ok enough babbling for me, Im half asleep stayed up late to read your fic, but tired now, update soon please?? ty ty ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on November 11, 2006
    Ok, I can do this. I can read a story with Sasuke and Hinata as a couple. Why? Cause I am enjoying the story so far. And now that I have ranted(sorta),I've gotten over it. All will be good. Keep up the AWESOME work!
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  • From Kiishii on November 10, 2006
    gah, I missed the updtes again stupid, albeit lovely- yaoi webcomics...mmm...yaoi...^^ But I have to say...Hinata is a /deviant/, I don't know if i've ever liked her so much! Now if only some of the guys were more like her...^_^ I still adore how this whole mixture of the characters keeps me guessing with the pairings, and it was way suprising when it turned out that Sasuke(the good one) was the one with feelings for her. *sigh* I guess this means no deliciously sinful paths to getting the former rivals hooked up...^-^ and the part with Kabuto, I wasn't sure whether to gawk at the screen, love Sasuke's manipulation, or laugh/smirk at Kabuto. Most of all though, I'm wondering at Sasuke's double...He didn't seem like the type to let him win, plus, having a bit of a sense of what snake bastard's like, I thought for sure he'd have come in to stop them some how, or at least have a way to watch his 'minions'...it almost makes me nervous.^^; Alas though, I may have to stop for the troubles of delayed housework are calling me, and I /don't/ like the look of that moving spot...^^;; till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - goldnflame on November 09, 2006
    This is a good story and all... but I think you might need to move this to another section. Usually people come to the M/M parts expecting the lead couple to BE just that, M/M. Your story would be better suited in the 'general' or 'AU' section I'd assume. Great story, but wrong section. ^^
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  • From ANON - ss on November 09, 2006
    I'm confused. Who exactly are the couples of this fic? Is it just that in this world there are these couples, but if/when he returns to his own he goes after someone else?
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