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Reviews for In This World of Make Believe

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Nyuchan on November 09, 2006
    Nice, i know this'll be a good story. ^.~

    buuut..i'm confused..is this now a Yaoi (sasunaru ?) story or SasuHina ? I like both..for me it doesn't matter.. but it's very confusing at the moment where this is going.. erm..nervermind ^.^
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  • From ANON - jane doe on November 09, 2006
    Luv ur story! And Luv SasuHina, the should have some 'private time' together ^^
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on November 09, 2006
    Ok, Sasuke and Hinata together is creeping me out. What about Naruto?
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  • From Kiishii on October 08, 2006
    This is evolving into a completely awesome story!^^ We had a NaruxSasu kiss /and/ the new twist with a Sasuke 'clone'..... And I nearly fell over laughing at Sasuke's 'sexy-no-jutsu', i've been waiting for a good story with it. *laughs again* It seems like it'll be fun to see how the new Shikamaru x Ino pairing will end up, not to mention the new the-alternate-Sasuke-worked-for-Orochimaru plot. It kind of makes me wonder... will they fight? And which will win? Especially since it seems that the alternate Sasuke never trained with Kakashi and didn't have the friendships that strengthend the first Sasuke. whoops, I think I may have gone on too long.^^;; But one more thing I wanted to say, those interludes, "Uchiha Sasuke, just your average fifteen-year-old…whose entire life has been turned upside down. He is the puppet, the marionette dancing on strings. The puppeteer laughs, making him dance ever faster. What happens when the strings snap? The lines between friendship and love blur, and discoveries are made. Hating himself, and fate, the young man’s heart sees double..." I really like those, they give this a nice touch... Well, Ja ne until your next chapter.^_^
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  • From Kiishii on October 08, 2006
    Maybe I should get on more often so I don't miss chapters...^^' Anyway though, this is a pretty interesting development, I mean, hinata+sasuke=love?? Not to mention the whole KabutoxSakura spy thing. *shivers* I agree with what Sasuke said, scary image. It's nice to see Sasu-kun has an ally in all this so far, it sounds like he's in for trouble.....
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  • From ANON - YaoiLover D.J. on October 02, 2006
    I like it so far. It's actually quite good, I myself usually read yaoi most of the time, but this might be an exception. If it's not a yaoi SasuNaru story that is, I might actually continue reading this story. Cause you have a very interesting plot going on there, and I would like to found out what happens next. And yes I would like to read some graphic sex scene if you don't mind, but your're the author, you should make the decision whether or not any of that will even be in the story. Anyway, like the story so far, please update soon :).
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on October 02, 2006
    Interesting plot so far!

    Looking forward to more ^.~
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  • From Kiishii on October 02, 2006
    Wow, I love this so far.^^ The setting for this is one i've never seen before in the fandom, not to mention it's pretty interesting to see some of the characters acting so differently than they usually would. *naruto + blushing= kawaii!!* I'll be waiting for when you get out the next chapter.^_^
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