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Reviews for Here's to the Fox

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on November 05, 2006
    “Hush, little Sasuke, don’t say a word. Daddy’s gonna give you a summoning bird. And if that summoning bird doesn’t fight, daddy’s gonna buy you a sharp kunai. And if that sharp kunai doesn’t pierce, daddy will protect you, strong and fierce. Should daddy fall, no need to cry. You’ll be a strong ninja by and by…”


    ........That. Was. So. Cu~te. ^x^ I couldn't stop laughing. I just assumed that Sasuke was struck speeches when Naruto started singing it. Definetly broke the ice well. Good job.

    ummm, from what you said at the end, your reviewers not digging too much of the angst, well.......from the angst stories that I've been reading lately, I have to say that I agree with them. So many are filled will sick material that make you wanna vomit. (It's more of a violent, Gore without Plots that I've come across) But yeah, yours is great. I haven't had to worry about grabbing a puke bucket of anything. Aren't you proud?

    I agree that the chapter was short, but not at all rushed. So it worked very well. And besides, atleast you do update. I lost my lastest chapter from Distractions (over 15,000 words) by accidently deleting it from my computer (and I had no other backup)and so I restarted it by rewriting the chapter (one with over 12,000 words)....ONLY to want to restart that chapter b/c I don't like it. In other words, the last time that I updated my story was the week before school started back in August. Isn't that horrible? T^T Now I feel like crying.


    Good luck with your next chapter ^.^



    ~Ria ^_~
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on November 05, 2006
    That one way to calm down the Uchiha. Very cute :D
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  • From ANON - dut on November 05, 2006
    wah~ so sweet... its very touching~ I am throughly excited with whatever plans Naruto and Gaara has... what is their plan?! hurry update soon pls~~~
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  • From ANON - Donedin on November 05, 2006
    I loved the lullaby, I sent it to my husband (cause hes a weirdo and is positive he is a ninja) and he will probably be sining it to our kids right now! HAHHAHAHA anyhoo, that was really good, kinda curious about what is going on with Naruto but suspence is good, so is posting! Ill be waiting ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on November 04, 2006
    Goodness gracious, how interesting. Although I do absolutely love angst, I'm glad that you've decided to tone it down a bit from this point on and include a little more action. The angst was actually starting to make the story suffer by taking away from the great plot line you have as opposed to adding to it. I would say that the delightful mix of angst and action you had in your story before Gaara and his siblings arrived was perfect. The action kept the story moving and exciting and the angst (especially the cute parts) kept the story engaging and tender.

    However, this is not to say that the chapters with Gaara in them are terrible, quite the opposite really. I am more so just agreeing with your choice in direction for the oncoming chapters.

    Although it may be a little late to give my opinion on the matter, I would really prefer it if there wasn’t a love triangle. Love triangles always leave me feeling bad for the person who didn’t get to be with the one they were in love with, and I’ve found that in certain situations, love triangles take away from a story as opposed to adding to it, and it is my firm belief that this is one of those situations. However, the choice of course is yours in this matter. I will continue to read “Here’s to the Fox” regardless, I just thought I’d give a little input on what this reader feels about that subject. My best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Carla on November 04, 2006
    Ahh...Naruto is soo soo soo cute. He cant even describe his *friendship* with Sasuke. God, that is going to be a hard one. I do *request* a happy ending. (nods head and waves fist in the air) Sasuke has to get his fox and stop being so sad. You made Sasuke *cry*! Oh God! Please, no more Uchiha tears and if he must cry they better be happy tears. Ok, is Gaara feeling something other than friendylike towards the blonde or is he just feeling left out with Sasuke and Naruto's closeness? For a moment there I could have sworn that he felt like something similar to love for Naruto but then he realized that Naruto felt more than friendship with the teme and totally changed his attitude. Oh well, please update soon! Wonderful chapter, I loved it even if I did find it a little short.

    Carla
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  • From ANON - HellKat on November 04, 2006
    Really loving this story, it gets better as each chapter is updated. I reall hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - lo on November 04, 2006
    Nice job, a lot of drama in this last chapter. Well done.
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 04, 2006
    ah, that was cute. and i could so totally picutre sasuke cussing like a sailor! that was good. can't wait for the next chapter!

    -inc
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  • From ANON - Loqui on November 04, 2006
    I like it. It was easy to get into this at first and now I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From LadyKind on November 04, 2006
    You of course know that I demand that you update!! bwahahahaha its soo good please update soon pweety pweease!
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  • From ANON - Hikari Manganji on November 03, 2006
    I love it... it brings tears to my eyes and i dunno if im gonna be happy that its so realistic and the way u developed their relationship or cry bcoz its so angsty... but hey.. that's the way it goes so if it weren't there, it wouldnt be the story that i have came to love. Im glad i found this story. Keep it up with the wonderful updates. The story is so heartwrenchingly true and sweet with a right amount of angstyness that must be present in a war torn land and messed up pasts... YAY~! :D
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  • From ANON - Chrys on October 29, 2006
    Loving the orginality of this lil plot bunny. Cant wait to see where it goes, and Im seriously looking forward to the next chappie

    *Lifts a wine cooler and yells* CHEERS!


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  • From ANON - Tara on October 28, 2006
    Damn you Nomme!! Why sooo short?! *scowls*
    Another good chapter!! Please update-SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - dut on October 28, 2006
    T-T wah~ another cliffhanger~ Sasuke better confess to Naruto soon so that he won;t do away~
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