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Reviews for Here's to the Fox

By : BishounenKrazed

From littleolmee on July 13, 2007
Crap, just me again. I put my email on that thing and it hide it . . . well here it is: littleolmee2002@yahoo.com

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From ANON - littleolmee on July 13, 2007
Yeah welcome back to the world of writing . . . yes, I know I can't say anything can I? Great chapter, they finally have one another and this happens? Wow, talk about some bad karma . . . those two are trouble magnets aren't they? Oh no Sasuke! That sucks, just get some loving and then get stabbed. Oh yuck did Itamaru (hee, hee) watch them while they were loving? Well I'll take a stab at what you meant (oh that was a bad pun) did you mean that Naruto was going to kill Itachi, that he was worried that Sasuke would not love him anymore if he took his brother's life when Sasuke was determined to be the one to kill him for the clans revenge?
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From ANON - lo on July 13, 2007
I am glad that you are working on this again. It was a nice chapter but it lacked any transitions from event to event things just seemed to pop up and happen.
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From HumanInfiltrator on July 13, 2007
I've just re-read this. WOW, this is really good, please keep it up!!! And if Sasuke dies, so will you! He, I get a bit carried away, sorry.
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From ilovenaruto on May 05, 2007
I must say I am really loving this one. It really pulls you into the story line. It has become one of my top three favorites, including Chasing Naruto, Spiral Fall, and now this one. Not in any specific order though. I cannot wait until the next installment on this one! Keep up the wonderful work.
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From ANON - eirian on May 04, 2007
Yay! I haven't checked this fic in a few months and I return to find a couple of updates. I can't wait to see Sakura and Akira react to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. I also love how their romance has a instant connection, sorta like soul mates. I hope to see more soon.
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From ANON - Keyblyder on May 02, 2007
Its about time that there was smut in this story!!!!!!!! I've only just read all the chapters in one night and I was starting to get rather frustrated!!!!!!(hehe^.^) Besides that the story is absolutly wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapters!!!!! Can you put me on the list to tell me you update?????????

Kepp up the good work!!!!!!!!
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From Loquora on April 30, 2007
Awwwwww... I love this story and I hope it gets its conclusion some day. Thank you much for the smut!
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From Gwyllion on April 22, 2007
Uuaahh! A cliffie! O__O This fic is absolutely wonderful! I hope you will continue with this. Will be waiting patiently. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
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From on April 20, 2007
*cheers* i'm just working my way through the stories slowly, but steadily. bwah ha ha! okay...

you know... i think i might love you. *plots kidnapping demise* this chapter... damn! i'm so glad that sasuke's okay, it's a relief (but kind of something we knew would happen since it is an eventual smut story and all... ) damn. the sense of anxiety as we awaited sasuke's awakening, the anguish we felt with naruto over sasuke's unconsciousness, his anger with everyone around him who refused to help him. his anger with neji... (how hot would it have been for naruto to have thrown him against the nearest wall and proven his dominance?) and his belief in sasuke. all beautiful, poignant things that help add a heightened level of emotion to this story.

the creativity behind it is beautiful. you write with such poetic expertise that it blows me away each time i click on one of your stories. i'm always impressed with your work. your characterization is amazing. your plots are always so deep and thick and twisting that one can't help but become engrossed within them. and your smut... so hot!

and you know, as much as i want to read naru/sasu smut (best way to have them, btw. naru-seme ahoy!) i like that it was just that little bit. i think a full out smut scene would have been far too quick for them. they needed the slow pace, and now sasuke has something to look forward to. ne?

this was a great update. you did a beautiful job and i can't wait for the next one. *i'm late, i know. but... forgive me? .:puppy eyes:.*

ja!
~hanyou-elf
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From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2007
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Yes. I read this at work. Haha. I got paid to read this. Um anyway, so... despite the angst. I can't even handle that. *sigh* Naruto is leaving!!! I do not envy the work required for future chapters if there's a big ol' battle coming. Action can be soooo difficult to write, but I trust you completely with whatever you want to do. I sitll think it's fascinating the idea of Oro finally getting his hands on *cough* Itachi's body. I mean that would be Oro's ultimate goal. It'll be interesting to see how Sasuke interacts with said Itachi!Oro without fainting all over the place.

Mmm. I was really touched by the moments with Naruto, but omg I kept confusing this Naruto with the one in kitsune no yomeiri. gah that just means you should update this story more often *pokes* oh but dude. dude................. the narusasu moment. wow. yay. i'm glad they took that step further. and i liked it better that they didn't go "all the way." honestly i have become so pr0ned out lately that i prefer a slower pace. so take your time really. i'd like things to settle down and then they go at it like rabbits >.< who can think about full out sex when itachi's out there somewhere wanting naruto and gaara and then maybe after sasuke? but still. i really liked the detail of naruto brushing his hand down to sasuke's knee. i just thought... that was easy to picture, romantic and just... this sasuke here is so fragile it seems. or maybe vulnerable? that i love naruto being that rock sasuke needs. and like sasuke, i just don't want naru to go away at all. i just want them to stay in bed, listen to rain falling against the window and occasionally have naruto say random things like "do you think it makes much sense that in order to get the sharingan you have to save your friend but in order to get mangekyou sharingan you have to kill them? what the hell is the point of that?!?" (honestly that took me 10 minutes to come up with)

mm and you know what else i miss? Naruto's village. I hope that we get a chance to revisit there. I just loved the way you described it. Yes, and thank you for always telling me you updated. I just don't come here as often as I used to, so I would have probably missed it :(

*hugs*
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From ANON - Mitsuko on April 09, 2007
Oh.My.God. When i first clicked on this, i wasnt expecting much. (No offense, just not usually my thing.) And yet im reviewing, after nearly four hours of reading the whole thing, on perhaps my new favourite story! I love the whole idea so far of this, and i really enjoy your writing style! Please update soon, i really wanna know where this is gonna go!
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From VRon8899 on April 09, 2007
ZOMG! I love it! I can't wait for more!! Please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Ras on April 08, 2007
Dude, dude. ZOMG. Dude. I just got your note on DA. And gah I have to go to work on freaking Easter, so I'm emailin' it to myself and I'll review when I get home ;p

But I didn't want you to think I'm some right unappreciative bastard. XD XD I still just... LOVE this story to itty bitty bits. I'm glad you haven't forgotten. Be prepared for an extremely loooooong review later. *chu*
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From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2007
That was sweet! Please continue!!
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