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Reviews for Here's to the Fox

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 07, 2006
    Well, I can certainly understand an artist’s need for perfection, but to be honest, I rather liked the fourth chapter. It was sweet, and teasing, and definitely set up the plot very nicely. You did a wonderful job with foreshadowing and I look forward to see what surprises you still have in store for us, your beloved readers. I will without a doubt be reading the next chapter, especially seeing as you said it will be getting into “the meat and potatoes” part of the story. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 07, 2006
    aye, it was worthy. me liked it very much. especially the scene in the blacksmith's shop... and shower. hehe... please update soon.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - oraday on October 07, 2006
    Your story is great! It's a very original idea and I love the incorporation of AU aspects with the Naruto world. I also liked chapter four. It was definitely something that parallels Naruto... Minus the limey Sasuke scene. Honestly, having those two hug each other and be friendly without straightforward implications of an actual amatory relationship seems like something from Naruto. Awesome job^.^
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  • From ANON - Stacy on October 07, 2006
    I just love Sasuke's "visions" of a hot submissive Naruto!! Please I need an update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Teki on October 07, 2006
    I love it!!!! Gosh why'd Sasuke run away? Because Naruto was the fox or because Naruto hadn't been telling him the truth?
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 06, 2006
    gah, you just had to stop it there, didn't ya?! man, i want to know what sasuke's gonna do now that he knows. please update soon. this is really good. i espcially like how sasuke's 'emotionless' mask is falling.

    can't wait until the next chapter!

    -Inc
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  • From ANON - ChrisKazzy on October 06, 2006
    Wow, this is an amazingly well written story, and I would love for you to see it to its end. It has so much potential to become a really grat story, not that it's not one already. How could you leave off on such an excruitatingly tension filled moment? Boy, what a cliff hanger! I love this story so much! It's very original and new, and I love how you've portrayed the characters! Naruto is slowly melting Sasuke's heart, and he barely even knows him. How sweet! And Sasuke's mask is slowly breaking, but only around Naruto. Even the little thoughts Sasuke has about buying his teamates gifts was expertly woven in there to show how much he's come to care for Naruto in such a short time, even moreso than his teamates who he's known for 10 years! A question, though, about Naruto. If he had met the blacksmith before when he saved him, wouldn't the blacksmith recognize him when he became his apprentice? Or does the blacksmith know he's the Fox and helps him keep his secret. And will we find out more about how Naruto came to end up in Rehei and how he left Konoha? I hope you have something planned, because I would love to know what happened. Anyway, awesome start to your story, and I hope you make this a long one, with lots of plot and character developement. You could have Sasuke and Naruto work things out here, and then get Sasuke to convince Naruto to come back with him to become a shinobi, and then you get lots of angst and tension and character developement as Naruto, with the sealed Kyuubi, tries to fit in with the people that would most want him dead. Just a thought. Oh, and what's with all the ninja's after Naruto? Will we find out about that too? I can't wait, so please update soon! You can't leave me hanging there! This story is amazing!
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  • From ANON - KshLee on October 06, 2006
    ....Um Sasuke cant use Kagemane No Jutsu. Im pretty sure its a secret technique only taught by the Nara family that cant be copied by the sharingan. But the storyline is interesting so update soon.
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  • From ANON - lo on October 06, 2006
    That was great. I love what you are doing and this is wonderfully written. I can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 06, 2006
    Again an awesome chapter, I wonder what will Naruto do now that he knows that Sasuke knows, and what will Sasuke do too. I wish that Naruto became a ninja of Konoha though... and for the book, if you can, you should totally write it!
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  • From ANON - Nekohime (Un-logged in and lovin it) on October 05, 2006
    Ya know what I HATE about your story?

    Pssh.. yeah right.. as if anyone with any miniscule half of a braincell could ever find anything wrong with this story I'll personally shoot them myself. But seriously though.. I hate it when I find stories like yours... Oh you know what I mean... friggen brilliant in so many ways, in depth in description, fresh in it's new spin on the Canon plot, characterizations still in tact all the while... But the one thing I hate the most is that I was unfortunate enough to catch this lovely little ficlet at it's beginning. I really wish that I had found it when it's like.. five chapters or more in... Or I daresay.. even COMPLETE? O_O *Hears imaginary group of people gasp and shudder* I know it's so hard to find a good complete fic that isn't a one shot.. I my self am no one to talk.. *Looks over shoulder warily, hoping no yu yu or inuyasha fans jump from the shadows and torture me.*

    Okay.. the point I'm getting at is... I LOVE this story.. but I HATE pining for updates.. Yours is the only one that has me coming back to the Naruto section.. A section that I until very recently have sadly overlooked.. So please.. please. please.. PLEASE DAMMIT!!!!!

    Would you please in the name of all the Naruto Fandom.. For the Sake of ALL crazed yaoi fan girls and fan boys alike! UPDATE this story... You've got something briiiiilliant going here and if you don't want this poor ol Neko's brain to splode in her head you'd take pity and keep those chapters coming!


    Am I being over dramatic?


    Neko's Rate:: 5,000 STARS!

    So how many people click on stories based on the rate stars?
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 04, 2006
    Goodness, I haven't found anything worth reviewing in a while so I hope I'm not too rusty. First of all, interesting twist to the normal storyline. I think I could really like this fic. I already like the contrast between the way Naruto is normally treated in Konoha, and the way he is treated in the other village. I'm curious to see how AU this story is and where you plan on taking the plot, so I definitely plan to read the next chapter. You might really have something here. I look forward to finding out just what exactly that is.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - STARR* on October 04, 2006
    This is a very interesting fanfic. I really like this. Do you have it on fanfiction.net too? I suggest you put it there too.
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on October 03, 2006
    Kawaii!!!!! very very sweet!!!!! Give me some more ne??
    UPDATE SOON! (I'm becoming yonki)
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  • From ANON - lo on October 03, 2006
    this is so sweet. I love it.
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