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Reviews for Afterall

By : CrazyToffee
  • From animeaddict666 on February 23, 2008
    The delivery was exquisite. I've never read this moment executed so perfectly. Five stars. Unbelievable.
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  • From ANON - ... ;) on November 19, 2007
    oh my god... fucking awesome... right on the point, right with the words... right with everything.
    congrats
    greez
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  • From Sendrine on November 13, 2007
    I really enjoyed this story. I misplaced it somewhere in my links for a while but I finally found it again >_< Even though it's just a short fic, it captures a lot of emotion and I could really empathize with Sasuke. I think all of us have been in a position where we want to atone for a mistake but just can't for one reason or another. I know I have and I suppose this is why I like the story so much. My favorite part is the ending:

    "Sasuke opened his mouth to say something scathing, but Naruto’s eyes were the bluest thing Sasuke had ever seen. I’m sorry,” was what came out instead."

    That was just beautiful. Thank you!

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  • From Jes148 on September 08, 2007
    Aw. i really like this :) ur amazing
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  • From ANON - Suna on August 01, 2007
    OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!
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  • From ANON - sutashii on February 25, 2007
    Wow. I really love these kinds of fics! this one was perfect!
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  • From ANON - Signed as tears on ur other team 7 fic on February 06, 2007
    Well. I liked this too, very much. For me it didn measure in the same way as that masterpiece over there did, but it's ofc not the same type of fic either. I really liked it... It's well worked through, and writing this in SASUKE's ( of all ppls ) point of view, and making this kind of result is fantastic.

    Couldn u lend me some of that writing skill you have? it seems to be utterly natural
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  • From nekochannya on February 04, 2007
    Me likes it! a lot.. very well done, hopeful and sexy... all rolled into one... with the normal wariness of a betrayed but loving naruto and a repentant sasuke...nyah! great!! write more!!
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  • From ANON - celticfx on January 09, 2007
    Loved it! You really did a wonderful job leading up to Sasuke's apology. Is this a one-shot or do you plan on continuing? *crosses fingers* Please say "continue"!
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  • From ANON - Shoko on January 09, 2007
    Nice work. Angsty and surreal, yet realistic. I don't usually read anything yaoi, but this particular fic made the entire Sasu/Naru grotesquery acceptable.
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  • From ANON - conquerors star on January 09, 2007
    AWWW!!! you are sooo amazinggg you REALLY dont get enough hits as you deserve, that makes me sad :(
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  • From ANON - Quirk on December 27, 2006
    It was an awesome story. A little angsty, very touching, and excellent with the struggle that it always is to say 'I'm sorry'. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Spawn of Hell on October 12, 2006
    wow. this was hot and as rofound as a one-shot can be. i loved the ending of it but even more than that, the interaction between the three, between the two. nice job.
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  • From ANON - sharingan.swirl on October 12, 2006
    Aww!! So sweet!! I'm in love with your writing! Generally, I don't very much like one-shots, I like to get involved in the fic, but your stuff is addicting. I'm anxiously awaiting your next project!

    sharingan.swirl
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  • From DemonBlaze on October 04, 2006
    That was great! I loved the little complexity to the relationship.
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