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Reviews for Tangled up in Lace

By : CrazyToffee

From ANON - Kimra on October 06, 2006
I had to look up occidental, since you thought the trial was thus... and now I'm a bit miffed because I'm not sure which definition you where leaning towards. Anyway. If there was anything, anything at all wrong with anything in your most recent update (6) then I am failing to percieve it. That must mean that either there IS nothing wrong with it, or I am incapable (by act of ignorance) to notice anything wrong with it. As I am a perfect genius (or something like it) I refuse to believe that there is error on my part. Which means the only feasable option is that there is NOTHING wrong, or missing or 'occidental' (whatever it may mean) with the whole thing.

So far, honestly this fic is supurb. You have a level of skill and class that outranks anything I've read in the Naruto fanfiction section. You make me cry more in one sitting than I have in the last two years combinded. This is amazing work, fantastic, psychological, and just god damn brilliant work. I can't even be in awe of you, because I've been in awe before and this far surpasses that. This is the kind of emotion that can not be defined because it's so beautifully rare that nobodys had a chance to grasp and name it. I think I might call it 'Sponge' just because I have a naming fixation. Yes that last sentance was random, but I felt that I needed to break from my seriousness for a moment. Probably just made you frown... well tough it's all your getting.

Okay. Back to my thoughts on this whole piece so far. Being a wordsmith by nature (or at least I'd like to think of myself as such) I find it almost incomprehensible that I can not truely express the way that your story affects me. I imagine that my words will hold little relevence even, but that will not stop me from trying (as I have).

Amidst the rambling I believe I've lost the plot (my own - not yours) and I should therefore sign away as if this is all I have to say about your amazing work of art (because it IS a work of art).

I wait with baited breath and strained emotions for the completion of this story.

Kimra Lelanst
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From ANON - Sunset Serenity on October 06, 2006
It was beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. I'm angsty to find out what'd happen next. =D. Maybe Sasuke can learn to enjoy life in Konoha, can't he?
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From ANON - Sas-uke on October 06, 2006
Oi, you must be good because you had me -terrified- that this was going to be a character death fic o_o.
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From ANON - Redcloudangel on October 06, 2006
How do I like this fic? I thought I told you already. I don't like it. Not at all. I LOVE it. I LOVE IT!!! I absolutely love this story, your reasoning for the happenings, the details you used to add depth, angst and interest, your ability to bring to live the charactors' emotion. For example, in this chapter, I like the reasons you had for the council's decision not to execute Sasuke because Naruto might get so angry to the point that he might harm Konoha. It makes sense. How could Naruto continue to love Konoha unconditionally if Konoha killed his mate?
I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter. I hope Sasuke will come to terms with himself and Naruto and Saki. There's still hope that a happen ending is possible, isn't it? Have Fun wherever you're. You know that I, and we, will miss you.
-VTY, Redcloudangel
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From ANON - x-poe-x on October 06, 2006
cried again. much, much harder.
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From promise2003 on October 05, 2006
What do I think of the fic so far? Dear Lord I'm obsessed. You have a knack for writing angst that is unrivaled, and damn you for making me squeal with joy every time that I see that you have updated. And I LOVE the way that Sasuke was in chapter 6, like he finally found himself again. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Shosuro on October 05, 2006
Good JOB!!!
I love the fiction so far!!!!
Thanks for the update!!!
Yeah!!!
Can't wait until Tuesday!!!!

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From ANON - Carla on October 05, 2006
This story is heart wrenching. The facades that you have given Sasuke are painful. I just hope that it has a happy ending because that would make me very upset. I know everything that Sasuke has done but I still couldnt see him condemed for his mistakes. Besides, what would Naruto do without Sasuke? Just update soon so I can see what your veridict is. You did mention that you had the whole story written already. Just post soon please.
Am sorry if am coming on weird but am very unerved with the way this fic is going and unfortunetaly, I am a very sensitive person. This is causing me to feel like crying and wish for some kind of plot twist where things do come all right in the end.
Anyway, thanks for the fic. It is very good if a bit dark for my taste. Please post soon.

Sincerely

Carla
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From ANON - emdog on October 05, 2006
Usually when I start reading a story and cross-dressing is involved, I stop reading right then and there. But I am so glad that I did not do that with your story. And I know it wasn't just coincidence that I didn't click away, it's definitely your writing that kept me reading. I like how we get to see a psychological breakdown of Sasuke, and surprisingly Naruto as well. When Naruto first finds out that he's being "supervised", he realises that Sasuke has become his only focus and he has been blind to everything else. And the great thing is that I, as the reader, felt the same way, that I should have known that something else had to be going on behind the scenes, but I, just like Naruto, was too wrapped up in trying to figure out Sasuke. It's a really great story and I will be eagerly awaiting the next update!
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From AkumaKawa on October 05, 2006
Absolutely love it. So powerful emotionally and thought provoking, it was just amazing and I can't even imagine what is going to happen next...and to think I have to wait three more days for the ending. At least you update daily. :D

Keep up the brilliant work, coolsa.
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From ANON - Redcloudangel on October 05, 2006
You are an amazing writer. Your fiction pulled my heart, especially this chapter (Ch. 5). I know it's a fiction but it feels so real. It hurts so much. I always have a soft spot for Sasuke and I hope he'll do fine, he and Naruto. Maybe Sasuke wanted to get killed, as he was weak (or he felt weak), and he could not face himself. Maybe Council would grant his wish, killing him but not Saki. But Saki is Sasuke. I don't know. Please save him, them. Please let them live. - VTY, Redcloudangel

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From promise2003 on October 05, 2006
Wow! The latest chapters are oh so good. I thank you very much for sharing your wonderful fic.
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From ANON - x-poe-x on October 04, 2006
basically. I started crying.

This is not just smut, it's perfect, it sounds like love. Like... real. It sounds real. It is laced with emotion and it pried tears from me. I haven't cried in months, it feels good.

please ... update soon

( x-poe-x is my penname on AFF )
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From ANON - KeairaxSeiaa on October 04, 2006
I will have you know that I skipped all of my classes today to continually check this fic for updates. XD It's THAT good. (Of course, if my grades suffer and I lose my scholarship, I fully intend to blame you.) I also have to say that it was very, very much worth it. I truly adored this chapter. It was just so... PERFECT that I can't really even think of anything to compliment specifically. The overall mood was so right, and even though it's all so sad, at the same time it's so hopeful, especially this chapter. The quotes you add to the beginning and end really help with that feeling, too. This story truly is amazing; probably one of my favorite SasuNaru fics I've ever read, and that says quite a lot considering the fact that I've been reading them for two or three years now.

And as such, while I am generally annoyed by those pushy reviewers who try to force a writer into providing them with the ending they want, I must say that if this ends badly I WILL COMMIT RITUAL SUICIDE.

...Okay, not really. But I'll be sad 'liek woah.' And I know you've got this all written out already, anyway. I think I'm just going to hope for a semi-happy ending, with crazy ol' Sasuke getting to live and staying with Naruto, Saki or not. If I can't have that, then I'm going to hope they at least die together, because with the mood that this story has set, the thought of Naruto living on without Sasuke is just... devastating. Of course, he had hope for a moment in this chapter, thinking that even if Sasuke died, he still had people around him who would make life worth living, but... still. Considering his overall mood throughout the fic, the way his happiness just very much depends on Sasuke's presence, I can't see him ever REALLY living with Sasuke gone.

One last thing, and I'll leave you alone. Shikamaru is my asbolute favorite character. I adore him. And you are one of the few fanfiction writers who gets him right. Dead on. I like to think that his personality is more complicated than most people give him credit for, so being able to not only write him well, but excellently, is definitely an accomplishment.

And that is my long, annoying, rambling review. Hey, don't complain. You deserve it.

...That's a compliment, I swear.
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From ANON - Hellagoddess on October 04, 2006
Amazing. Just...amazing.

I actually cried...in the scene where Sasu/ki is in the bathroom, telling Naruto about Orochimaru...and that he used to call him...Itachi in bed sometimes. Just so...so... heartwrenchingly tragic. I think i forgot to breathe.
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