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Reviews for Tangled up in Lace

By : CrazyToffee
  • From ANON - DK on October 11, 2006
    What an amazingly well written chapter, thank you so much for this, I really enjoyed reading it :)

    The words that Naruto said to Sasuke were so true, the love those two share is so intense and yet it has to deal with so much hurt too, can't wait till the next update.
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  • From ANON - Redcloudangel on October 11, 2006
    I don’t really read a lot of stories these days. I’m quite busy. For fan fics, I don’t even have time to update my one or two stories, or follow up with the stories I put on favs (FF dot allows favs). I wonder why I have been loyally following this story, from the beginning, and reviewing every chapter. I don’t usually read angst. *sigh * Your writing made me do it. You are good. Your writing’s good. The story’s intriguing. The way you described Naruto, Sasuke and even the secondary characters’ emotions has been amazing. You can’t image how much I admire you, your talent in writing and you ability in gasping the characters’ psyche, and that of the readers as well.

    For once, I want to be specific. For chapter 7, I like how you described Naruto’s reaction to the verdict and his decision to give Sasuke the space he might need to come to terms with himself.

    Sasuke’s challenge to Naruto was a surprise – a nice surprise for the flow of the story. Your reasons for his anger were solid and believable.

    Naruto’s response to Sasuke’s challenge was well handled. He knew Sasuke. He walked even if he wanted so much to just hug the bastard.

    One last thing, you use flashbacks effectively.

    By the way, this must be my longest review ever. *smiles * Ja ne.

    - Redcloudangel

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  • From AkumaKawa on October 10, 2006
    Still love it. And I have no idea how this will end. Will Sasuke come back? Will they begin to heal their pain?

    I have no idea, you could have this end tragically, and it will still be as ic as it would be if it had a happy ending....

    Keep up the brilliant work, coolsa.

    P.S. when this is done, what next do you have planned to write?
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  • From ANON - KinOfDragons on October 10, 2006
    ARGH! ARGHARGHARGHARGH!! I'm mad at both those idiots! THEY SHOULD JUST LOVE EACH OTHER, SHAG, AND SHUT THE HELL UP!!! *pouts* But nooooo~ It's always so emotional! Which adds something to the goodness but my GOD! *sighs* Anywho~ It was still a great chapter. Though, I kept thinking Naruto would just let Sasuke kill him to be happy. O.o I have no clue why...=o I hope you post the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Talakailover on October 10, 2006
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I can't take the supense!!!!

    I think your story is gorgeously written and the characters more real than I've ever seent them written before. You are amazing.
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on October 10, 2006
    Oh my!
    I think my heart hurts.
    There is only really one other fiction that made my heart hurt and want to cry,
    this is the other one.
    It's a good thing. It shows you know how to draw on the readers emotions.
    Thanks for updating!!
    Can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 10, 2006
    Wow... it was just... wow! Naruto telling Sasuke that, trying to make him react. I hope that it works in the end... as much as I hate seeing both of them hurting like that, I loved this chapter so much, it makes you think about so many things... please keep updating, don't rush yourself, but don't take to long ok? Because the wait will certainly kill me
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on October 10, 2006
    *bites her lips frantically*

    Happy end.. please let there be a happy end ... *hold her thumbs*

    Gnargh.. this is too much to handle.. i love this story!!
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  • From ANON - x-poe-x on October 10, 2006
    crying.


    Again.


    Fuck you.


    I love you ;-;
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  • From ANON - burr on October 09, 2006
    aww i almost cried! this fic is really great, but sad, too.. sasuke's my fav character, and everything that's being done to him is just so unfair. now i hope he could run away with naruto and embark on a new life.. :P :)
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  • From ANON - sharingan.swirl on October 09, 2006
    I LOVE IT!!! OMG.... I like how you gave credit where it's due. I read Lace and Strawberries and I loved the Sasuke/Saki character so i can completely see how you'd be compelled to write a story like this. I love angst, and I love complicated plots, and this is certainly filling my appetite for the moment. I do hope you have a good trip and I'm looking forward to your next updates. ^-^

    Until later,
    sharingan.swirl
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  • From ANON - Talakailover on October 08, 2006
    You know, I always thought Sasuke looked kind of feminine. I think that your plot is ingeniously crafted,intertwining and connecting different aspects of the story line with true finess. Sasuke's motives were not only beleiveable, but also surprising. I honestly didn't see it coming. You set it up so that the unveiling was like a pulling a rug of from under my feet. You're a genius and I adore you.
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  • From ANON - antilogicgirl on October 07, 2006
    Oh...I have to say that for some time this was not my favorite story. But the concept was interesting enough to keep me reading. Then, the emotion started swaying me at right around the end of chapter four. And by God and everything that's holy, the suspense was killing me in chapters five and six. I breathed the proverbial sigh of relief when the pronouncement was made, and I now have a firm belief that Morino Ibiki is an entirely horrid jerk. I hope that the last chapters will be as good as these past few. Thank you for your wonderful work.

    a/j
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 06, 2006
    Okkk... I like this so far, but it gets me kinda depressed to see Sasuke in such a state, scratch that I AM depresed, but I'll keep reading and hope that I don't get to masochist with myself, jocking jocking, that was a long time ago. Anywas keep updating and please make it a happy ending
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  • From ANON - CluelessIdiot on October 06, 2006
    Sweet!! More!! Very nice fic
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