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Reviews for Shadow Leaf Dance

By : GenocideHeart
  • From Ehlonna on December 02, 2012
    love it, it would be great as a multi-chapter fic
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  • From metallurker on April 18, 2011
    Excellent fic, a pleasant twist to a classic pairing with a nice dose of plot. Other than a few spelling errors none of which were too distracting great job. Keep this stuff up.
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  • From NuitTombee on October 19, 2010
    It was really good. I loved reading it all the way through, not just the smut scenes.
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  • From ANON - Mahaad on March 21, 2010
    Okay, so, you don't really need to worry about writing lemons, because you are made of win. Awesome work! Up there in my top 10 fics from this site! The fluffy bit with Hiashi(and his subsequent revenge) was my favorite part, outside the sex(which was great, too). No one ever uses him in a NaruHina, unless they revealed Naruto's lineage. And this is the first time I've read a story where Naruto only had an average length for his age, rather than an obnoxiously large, oh-god-I-want-to-kill-him-so-bad, hell-this-guy-is-HOW-old?!? dick. lol So thanks for that, too. If you ever need a proofreader, I'll gladly help. I'll shortly be making an account(kinda silly not to have one, what with how much I frequent the site) and it'll use this e-mail, so just drop a line if you need one! Keep up the good work!

    ~Ja ne!
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  • From Shawndra on September 13, 2009
    wow im surprised at myself for reviewing considering i dont like to. oh well on to critism. This story has some great potential as well as some flaws. I loved the fact that this isn't just another naru/hina smut. I thought that the idea that she would of gone and seen anko in the first place was a little OOC but i quickly got over it with graphic sex. I liked how you did hiashi's reaction it was not "IM GONA KILL NARUTO DIE DEMON" yet it was still cold hearted hiashi. I really hope you continue this story.

    With much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From Prism0467 on August 15, 2009
    John Johnson recommends this fic. It is extremely hot and very well-written.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 30, 2009
    Could you please write a sequal?
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on September 07, 2008
    Oh,My God.

    That Was SO Beautifully Written.And So HOT!

    I'm Not A Fan Of Moresmes,Yaoi,AND Yuri...But I Loved What I Loved.

    You're Incredibly Skillful At Writing. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2008
    My god, i can not read this story enough times. One of my favorite stories of my favorite pairing, excellent work!
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  • From ANON - jojoma-kitsune on August 11, 2008
    i wish you did make this a longer fic cause this one is stinkin awesome
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  • From Archfiend on May 26, 2008
    Gigantic! Gorgeous! One of the best stories I`ve read in quite a long time. Of course there was a lot of smut (and tahnk god there was) but the story was overall framed by a beautifullly told story of friendship and romance, with lots of humor in it.
    P.S.: The Miroku clan you mentioned who excelled at sexy jutsus, did you get the idea of naming them for their trait from Miroku the leecherous monk in Inuyasha?
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on March 26, 2008
    Please write a sequal for this!!! Also please e-mail me to let me know if you are going to or if you aren't.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on February 18, 2008
    Please write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cyraxr on February 05, 2008
    Wow that was good a little long for one chapter but good none the less. Signed a fan of Hinata and Anko.
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  • From ANON - Jonakhensu on September 25, 2007
    This was a great story. The ending was the perfect set up into a sequel. I hope you write one. Also, when is Naruto going to learn Kage Bunshin? Then ANko and Hinata could have even MORE fun! MWAHAHAHAHA!!! Actually, I could see Anko teaching him that for specifically that reason.
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