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Reviews for Hinata Comes of Age

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Sanee on February 27, 2012
    This is 4 years after your last review for this story but I wanted to let you know that I've enjoyed your stories so far. I gravitated from the ShikaNeji stories (especially Worth The Trouble) but this story intrigued me as well. I hope that you didn't give up from the rude reviews you've received. (I agree with Crimson Embrace's point - the stories are free, why criticize if you can still find the cookie-cutter fics you want elsewhere.) my hope is that you continue someday, but I will understand if you are just too busy to write or lost interest in the Naruto fandom. (or perhaps you are regular on ygal or another source?) I just wanted to say your work is appreciated and that we miss you!

    Btw if you get this same review 3 times, please excuse it. AFF and my itouch were having issues
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on October 24, 2008
    Wow.

    This Is ... Different.

    A Very Unique Blend.

    Let's See Who,Actually,MAKES Her List.

    Shika Would Be Awesome.It'll Be Utterly Surprising If It's Lee! =D

    But...Shikamaru...*Sigh*

    Also,You Have A Nice Writing Style.

    Update Soon! ^_^
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  • From bgreenwivy on June 21, 2008
    I can't wait until you update. I wonder who will be next.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on April 08, 2008
    I love this concept! I’m a big fan of sexual exploration… no such thing as a slut or whore, they are just girls who like sex and do it often just like a boy… trying out everything/person that interests them, I see nothing wrong with that or anything ‘sexual’ as long as both/all people involved are consenting. Too bad you won’t continue, it would’ve been fun to read… I'm interested in if Hinate ever stops being a prude! I can understand you not wanting to continue after those rude flames, I can’t say I blame you.

    CHAPTER 5: Awwww… Nartuto setting up a special seduction for Hinate’s first time… so sweet! I had to laugh at your warning at the top of Chap. 5… so sad to have to warn people! It’s funny anyone would think Hinata a slut, I think she’s a prude and can’t wait for her to loosen up! As for Naruto he’s every girls dream stud (not for a first because ouch 1st time sucks seriously), soft and gentle is seriously over rated… gentle is for romance… this is SEX, sex is for fun… besides he’s a teenager, still most gals would be thrilled for such a enthusiastic lover! He actually got her off first, wow… that’s something most guys can’t do once much less before they come! Seriously wow, she’s got nothing to complain about!

    CHAPTER 7: Kiba and Shino together, perfect! Lucky girl, two hot men at the same time… that’s seriously hard to make happen, guys are so weird like that… too bad she didn’t take advantage of the opportunity… but then some girls really don’t like sex that much, it looks like she’s one of them… looking for love through sex… bad idea, rarely works... but definitely very in character for Hinata! If she was comfortable with her sexuality it wouldn't be in character for her.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on April 07, 2008
    OUCH! Some of these people reviewing are brutal! People these are stories that are written for free for your enjoyment, not liking the story... don't read it.

    Hestia,
    Your writing is beautiful and I would like to read any type of pairing you'd like to write... Het, F/F, M/M, Shouta, Beastiality, urine play, feces play, anything... no holds bared. While some types don't normally appeal to me I would love to read them simply because you write so well and it's facinating to see how you handle them.

    Don't let a few bad apples drive you away from Het! This site is for ALL forms of 'love' including some that maybe disturbing/distasteful for some readers... that's why there is ratings and warnings! People don't have to read those stories if they don't like the types of pairings! Gentle 'I wishes' or 'Aw, I wish nots' are one thing... slamming someone is another. All those who flame should look at thier own writing... if they even have any, and ask themselves if they were being fair, how they would feel if they were the ones being slammed.

    Sorry, you can remove this review after you've read it... if you even dare to read reviews from this story, I hope you do. I was just so very angry when I read some of these comments and don't want you to suppress your writing or feel you have to tailor it to 'fit' what people say they want. Tackle it all, it's fun!
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  • From ANON - G on January 30, 2008
    I really like this story, please don't give up on it! :)
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  • From serenagold on December 17, 2007
    "But it sort of made sense—Shino the virgin and Kiba the whore—both looking for what they couldn’t find in women—looking for each other."

    ^This is the best line ever.^

    I really like this story. Hinata's horrifed embarrassment at awkward sex is just hilarious. ^^ Keep up the good work!
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  • From pats on October 14, 2007
    poor hinata.....still looking for 'the one' huh?? kiba & shino?? wow....never thought of that.....i wonder who will be next?? or when will it be neji's turn?? hahahahaa....nice one.....
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  • From Aquamarine415 on October 06, 2007
    wow. this story actually has depth. i loved the part where hinata runs over the names on the list. it's so...real! other stories are just boy decides he like this girl, girl gets with him, they have sex, blahblahblah...but this is different. i like it.
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  • From ANON - R on May 25, 2007
    Love it so far! Please consider finishing this after you are done with D/s naruto.
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  • From iLikeAngst on March 25, 2007
    I love this. Thank you for continuing.
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  • From MoiyaHatake on March 25, 2007
    Poor Hinata......I wanted to laugh and cry for her. But way to go Kiba and Shino!
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  • From iLikeAngst on March 05, 2007
    Yay, it's back. I love you, i love , i love you! Platonically of course. Wohoo. I like how you protrayed the break up. I look forward to reading more, especially the one with Shikamaru
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  • From AnimeLover999 on January 20, 2007
    I love the story! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - yaoifan01 on November 25, 2006
    Again you are the only hentai writer I would read from(narusaku and naruhina, believe it or not thats the first naruhina I ever read EVER. so props to you on that.) Well I do LOVE naruto with anyone and every one so hopefully you will do a narutoxevery one in the series fanfiction? I know I would read that -giggles-
    from you NUMBER ONE FAN _yaoi-san
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