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Reviews for Hinata Comes of Age

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Angst on October 04, 2006
    Wow, that was just wow. I'm rather breathless with that chapter. I enjoyed all of the lemony goodness. Wow!
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  • From ANON - logohobia on October 04, 2006
    naruhinanaruhinanaruhinanaruhinanaruhina
    YAY. very good sex scene, great detail and insight. keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - tasukigirl on October 04, 2006
    Actually, neji is rather prissy and I could totally see himself being crazy protective over hinata. I'm glad he did get interrupted before raping his cousin, cuz I don't think this fic was meant to take such a dark turn. I do love how you made Naruto so obedient though. He *is* such a sweetheart, though I imagine he'd be a noisy one ;) Please do include more Naru/hina in the future. They're so cute together. Btw, I *love* how you wrote Sai in the earlier chapter. I literally laughed out loud at his lines. I like the fic so far. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kyubi_teaser on October 04, 2006
    *giggles* ooooooh... something else just came to mind... how about a Kiba/Hina/Shino three way?? ACK! *giggles* ok... 12 hour overnight shift makes me loopy... but still...think about it, ne?
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  • From ANON - kyubi_teaser on October 04, 2006
    yes! you must use gaara! I mean come on... if she truly wants to experiance everything before she gets tied down and married, she has GOT to be the one to sleep with Gaara. It would probably piss Neji off like you wouldn't believe *giggles*
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  • From ANON - Angst on October 03, 2006
    Wow, that did shock me. I'm glad Neji was unsuccessful. I dislike most nc fic's because they're horrible unrealistic or pointless. This wasn't. I'll be happy to read whatever you have up on thursday or friday. It there like a mailing list to know when your updating fic's. I'm not quite used to this site yet, so I really don't have much of a clue.
    Also, this story deserves a much higher rating then what it's gotten. I think most people don't really think of Hinata as being sexual. As a human being she's bound to be though, unless she were psycho. Besides, don't they always say you should beware of the quiet ones.
    Also, I really look forward to some ShikaXHina action. Remebering the first chapter, I think that one could be deliciously kinky.
    Thanks for the chapter.

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  • From ANON - VL on October 03, 2006
    Eh, not much to say I suppose.

    I suppose I wonder how Naruto took the talk with Neji, and what really happened to him that night.

    Glad he was taken out of the picture, Neji I mean.

    I really don't think I will be reading much more of the story though, not if it just going to be Hinata/every male in Konoha or who ever the author wants to bang her. I was kind of hoping for a good story, but it's turning into somehting else.
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  • From FoxyBlue on October 03, 2006
    Whoa! -fans self- That was a awesome first lemon-snipet of this little smut saga! And I am not even a Naruto-Hinata fan and I enjoyed it! That proves all the more how good it was. More please? ^ ^
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  • From ANON - QJD on October 03, 2006
    Plz Keep lee on the List, that would make me such a happy camper. And make Neji die plz. He's Such a Bastard1
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 03, 2006
    Damn, son! having read this and your other fic, "make me forget", i can say you're one hell of an author.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2006
    Very good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Al on October 03, 2006
    What compelled you to make Hinata the village bicycle anyway? It just doesn't seem to fit her. Er, anyway, your writing style is quite good. I just wonder about your story ideas. But whatever floats your boat.
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  • From ANON - Darkness lives on October 02, 2006
    OMG! please have a hinata/gaara part! In my opinion their the best pair ever. I like naruto and everything but I like a good gaara/hinata or even a shino/hinata story just as good since they are a bit harder to come by. I like how you don’t have hinata stuttering all the time too, not that’s there’s anything wrong with it but it’s a bit of a rarity and well I guess I just like that kinda thing. Hehe cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Time Shifter on October 02, 2006
    Hey, I wouldn't have a problem with you wimping out and keeping it NaruHina. With his Kage Bunshin and immense stamina, there's plenty thosee two can do by themselves. Besides, it's near impossible to find a strictly NaruHina fic.
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  • From ANON - Angst on October 02, 2006
    Wow, I liked this chapter. The interaction between Hinata and Naruto was very intense. Sai was also very funny. He's always such fun to read when he's in character, and you got him completly ic. As for suggestions, I'm fairly clueless. Sorry I can't be much help. Thanks for the chapter!
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