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Reviews for Hinata Comes of Age

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - yaoifan01 on November 25, 2006
    Wow Neji-san is so mean here. But I am lovin this >
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  • From ANON - Jayman on October 09, 2006
    You changed it!? Why did you do that? Because of a few whiny reviewers? I'm a Naru/Hino fan but I loved chapter 5. Perhaps you can repost it as a oneshot with a series of other pairings like someone else suggested. This site is suppose to be about being free to write whatever you want. If these people are too fragile for the original chapter then they can go somewhere else or reader any of the other fics on this site. You should never feel you have to change your fics because of some bad reviews. I look forward to your next story.
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  • From ANON - mel on October 08, 2006
    Very nice. I hope you decide to continue this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    *scoffs* phht. quitter. i don'tlike any of your stories now
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  • From ANON - kyubi_teaser on October 08, 2006
    awwwww....*whimper* but.... but... but... WAAAHHHH!! *bursts into tears* I was hoping you'd go through the list more *sniffle* stupid whiners
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  • From ANON - Angst on October 07, 2006
    That was then end? ;0; Noooo! Ack, I understand though. People can be so damn uptight about certain things and characters. I guess this is one of the reasons why there aren't so many Hinata lemons, people can jst be so anal. Of course, I am a hypocrit as well. Gah, I hope maybe you'll consider that oneshot idea. Of course, I'll understand if you prefer to keep Hinata a nun from now on. Gah, oh well at least you'll still be writing TP. Thanks for the story you have given us so far.
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  • From ANON - ashez on October 06, 2006
    Naruto is all ooc... Sure he's dense but when it comes to people's feelings he usually has pretty good empathy. It was defniitley creepy... like someone was disguising themselves as Naruto and doing a distorted impression.

    If you want to write Hinata with a bunch of different guys, why not just write oneshots? You can use the same set up as this one, but just say that each chapter is its own continuity. That way you can write variety but Hinata doensn't become an ooc slut.
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on October 06, 2006
    Damn that was lame. I was reading this thinking it was gonna be Naruhina, now I feel all disapointed...
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  • From ANON - Al on October 06, 2006
    Well, if I wasn't already teetering on the edge of losing interest in this, I've certainly gone over it now. Sorry, like I said before you're a pretty good writer, but this just isn't my cup of tea. Good luck with it though.
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  • From ANON - nonengel on October 05, 2006
    honestly i'm not horribly thrilled by the premise of this story. I can understand a person in hinata's position wnating to break free and experience all of life but what has been set up seems to be a pretty extreme path for her to decide upon.

    however i have to grant you this, not matter how much i can see the merits and hinata and naruto as a couple (balance each other, etc...), its hard to aruge against your interpretation of naruto as a lover in this considering his upbringing
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  • From promise2003 on October 05, 2006
    At first I was thinking "what the hell?" but then I figured it was the perfect out for her to go on through her list. And yes, I can actually see Naruto being so damn ADHD in bed, but being talented like he is at the same time. I am REALLY awaiting the Kiba chapter (because darn your foreshadowing, it sounds like he's gonna give her exactly what she wants).
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  • From ANON - Angst on October 05, 2006
    Wow, that actually would seem kind of realistic. Naruto could be very overly optimistic and the fact that he has unlimited Stamina could be simply too much for some. Any way, it was still kind of creepy but tingly. Wow, this was excellent.
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  • From ANON - solar phoenix on October 05, 2006
    This chapter was beyond disturbing. It didn't sound like Naruto at all. Part of me hopes that this chapter was some sort of joke, but that seems unlikely. If you don't do something to fix this, I will have lost interest in this fic.
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  • From promise2003 on October 05, 2006
    I hadn't realized that you'd updated and got to read the last two chapters in a sitting. I was sad that Neji was such an ass, but you need a antagonist in a story like this...someone to get us pissed off. I love Naruto in this, he's just so darn cute with Hinata and smultry hot as a whole. I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 04, 2006
    now that's what i'm talking about. i love hinata/naruto! i may not have enjoyed the neji chapter, cause who enjoys rape? but that doesn't mean i'll stop reading. i look forward to the next chapter!
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