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Reviews for Where is God?

By : Innerchild

From ANON - ladywolfTerri on November 24, 2006
Okay... I'll be honest.. I thought about reading this fic for awhile.. but kept deciding not to... then today I said screw it and clicked the link..

And I'm damned happy that I did!!...^.^

This is a wonderful fic and I look forward to reading more!! Especially now that Naruto's mom saw them... I had a feeling when you mentioned a car slamming on their brakes... I'm really enjoying their awakening feelings... how they are realizing them and Naruto's search for answers!

I was taken to a church 3 times in my life and forced to go to a youth group meeting once... those that made me go never made the same mistake again... XD.. but hey.. I had fun..and that's what matter, right??... umm... yeah! Right!... ^.~
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From ANON - Rasengan22 on November 24, 2006
Holy crap, so I had been reading the summary for this and had been so busy I didn't get to read it until tonight. And by read it, I meant I just finished the first chapter. And I was gonna wait until I read all chapters before reviewing, but I don't want to BECAUSE THIS IS AWESOME. It's so different. And so many pairings, and so many different stories... I'm excited to see how they all come together (LOL once I click on next chapter) but I just wanted to say this is already awesome, and even just at the end there (though I'm used to reading about petitions being signed so that gay marriages won't be recognized by states; sidenote: if a state can ban gay marriage then that can lead to gay couples being unable to adopt children because stupid legislators can rewrite laws to say kids can only be adopted into a household w/ two married parents. This happened in lots of states! And so yeah, if you can't get married, you can't adopt kids. And that's really what evil legislators are doing when they go on about gay marriage, becuz once they can outlaw that they can do a whole bunch of under the table things! *was journalism student* I really like the Sakura/Hinata subplot idea... this is amazing!

So what I was saying is that this story is going to f'n rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really really cool.
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From ANON - dace on November 23, 2006
so yah I had this whole rant typed out, but then i wasnt sure if i should post it, but after reading ur other reviews, neh, here goes nothing:

yeah, religion. I so totaly live in the bible belt, where there is every church in the world. I HATE IT!!!!!!!! OMG i swear if i have one more person come up to me and give me the gay marriage debate one more time i am going to rip their heads off!!!!! Personally if they have a problem with it, than just give it an differnt F***ing name! the bible says (dont ask how i know this, never read the thing) that marriage is a union between two people. its the constitution that stated that marriage is between a man and a woman, and its the only one out there that says it to, because I know for sure that the german law book has no mention of a specific sex, nor the italian or the french, stinkin british and their old rulers. Now im not saying im gay, although almost all of my friends are, i personaly like the opposite sex way to much. but these issues bug me! I mean why cat they addopt? because thats what I am going to do, I believe that one needs to take care of the children already on this earth before bringing in more that could suffer the same fate. and as for my church, after the priest pulled a shotgun on my friend for taking a walk through the parkinglot ( the church is in my neighborhood, yeah like 6 houses down) at about 7 or 8 at night, it was still light out mind you. I opted for NOT going there anymore. we had the same sermons there to and they bug me. but yah government? I love government! if you have any questions about it let me know! sorry about the rant but things, like the ones ur talking about, piss me off.

if i offended anyone im sorry, im just a german who was always to told to fight for what they believed in. please disregard if you do not agree. thanx
dace
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From ANON - dace on November 23, 2006
I liked it, and I can totally help with the government questions! let me know what you need!
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From ANON - Meg11 on November 23, 2006
I agree with you 100% on the part with Naruto's dad.

Where he discriminates males but not females. i go through that every day... Boys wanting to kill gays but not lesbians. its so retarded.

But Wonderful story nontheless. =3

It made me smile
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From Hestia on November 23, 2006
The Zabuza, Haku, Kakashi subplot is really interesting/hot/romantic. I like Jiraiya's role too. The whole gay rights and religious hypocrisy aspect is well done too, but sadly not really that interesting to me--I want the romance, and I'm liberal and pro-gay rights and in a blue state, so I'm not surrounded by political tension, but it works excellently to add to the angst. I like the way you adopted Sasuke's life--very clever. It's impressive how many characters you've worked in! Great job! Thanks for sharing!
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From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2006
Ooooh.... you left it at a cliffhanger... how did I know D=

please update as soon as your able to. ^^ I hope you have a wonderful thanksgiving!
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From ANON - Saphire Dragon on November 23, 2006
Oh hey Whoot for agnostic people! (I'm one as well) Yeah... I would kind of like to have a religion but... yeah... I personally really am not to happy with the christian community. The whole their way or the highway thing. (Yeah only some but still.)

ANYWAYS!!! Enough religious talk. So far I really like your story. Its very interesting and I haven't had to stop at a mispelled or bad grammered word. ^^ The plot is great as well! I really can't wait to read more. Thankfully there are still a few chapters before I get left off at either a finished story, or a clifhanger... or just a spot where you left off that is a good place to leave off yet still leaves the reader wanting more. xD
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From ANON - Yue on November 23, 2006
Oooh. Nice story >< I was reading all five chapters so far at once and when I finished I was like damn, no more chapters XD Keep it up
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From ANON - ladygizarme on November 23, 2006
ah, i'm loving this story. the way you're approaching these issues is really well done in my opinion. i also like that you're doing things a bit differently for each character's back story, than what is normally done. that's refreshing. um, there's a lot i wanted to say but having read 5 chapters in one go i forgot a lot of my comments :p but i liked what you said/naruto thought about being surrounded by people but still feeling alone and what caused that feeling.. it was simple but really insightful and so true

anyway, like i said, loving it, keep it up.. i like the way things are developing between the boys (the part in this chapter--ch. 5--with sasuke realizing he liked cuddling was so sweet to me ^_^) and also i like the bits about sakura (the fact she and hinata obviously have feelings for each other and naruto is friends with/has past "experience" with neji makes me curious about future run-ins) eep but now that naru's mom saw him kiss sasuke, i wonder how long she'll hold off telling his dad and what will happen in the meantime *bites nails*

~ lg
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From ANON - DancingKitsune on November 23, 2006
I KNEW IT WAS ONE OF THEM THAT SLAMED ON THE BRAKES!!! Oh, I'm good xD And greatful for Naruto's sake that she didn't tell Arashi O.o;;;

I love this fic so much, good luck with the next chapter!!
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From ANON - urban mystic on November 22, 2006
wow, this story actually makes me think a bit, I really do love it. A nice break from my drama actually. Reminds me of a fanart that said SasuNaru: my anti-drug. yep, good times. can't wait till you update next.

luv ya
*Mystic*

p.s. fell free to email if you find yourself bored, I've nothing to do with my life.
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From ANON - Tarra on November 22, 2006
EEEEE!! sorry, cant help myself.. its amazing to find someone who also questions things. Im really happy this is such a well written story, i was afraid it would be like some of the others.. A really good idea, yet written so badly nobody can take it seriously. keep it up!
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From ANON - Star on November 22, 2006
Awesome story. I luv it. I can relate, thank you.
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From ANON - Mimi Hyuuga on November 22, 2006
First of all, let me say that this might go on for a bit, so I apologize ahead of time ^^;

I love this story, I really do. It's not just because i love Sasuke and Naruto together, or because I really like you're writing style, or even because the lime in chapter 2 was damn hot. Well, it's all of those things as well, but something else too. See, I grew up in a family that is catholic all the way, my dad is so religious it's scary. Scary because he is one of those catholics that preaches on the streets but goes home and abuses his family. Luckily I no longer live with him, but he still goes to church each week and finds new ways to put me down for not going. I used to go to church when I was little, with the family. Now, at 21, I haven't got to church in years. I believe in god, but I refuse to believe in what the bible says, and I don't think for a second that those priests and the pope are saying god's words. I leave that to god.

I love reading your story, because it puts things in perspective and makes me feel like there just might be more people out there who are trapped in religious families and can't just say "I don't believe in the bible." and be done with it. Although these characters are fictional, it gives me a sense of comfort, so thank you.

Now, onto a few notes about the story itself. I adore how you've portrayed Sasuke's feelings for Naruto, how he just seems so completely lost without him. And how Naruto is letting go and falling in love with Sasuke as well. I didn't see that whole thing with Naruto's mom coming, and I can't help but wonder how she's going to deal with it. I doubt she'll think about it and decide to be accepting of her son's feelings, which is a shame, but that's how these things go.

I hope Naruto gets the hell out of his parents place and moves in with Jiraiya, because the kid deserves a bit of happiness. He isn't gonna get it at home, considering his dad is such a complete and utter bastard. Oh, that reminds me, thank you SO MUCH for not making the Yondaime his father in this fic. Don't get me wrong, I personally think that he is Naruto's dad (and completely smexy - on that note, have you seen the latest chapters of Naruto? He's turning into one hot little piece of ass ^_~ now if only Sasuke would come back...*grumble*) but if my precious Yondaime was that prejudiced asshole I think I'd puke. So thanks!! I hope Naruto's dad gets mauled by a pack of rabid kittens >_<

Well, I'll keep reading this story, thanks so much for writing it and please keep giving us the good stuff :D later!
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