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Reviews for Where is God?

By : Innerchild

From Hestia on December 16, 2006
Oh my the evil father! So "American Beauty"! I like that the mom is getting some spunk. Love the Marmelade bookstore--I hope Naruto does move in! Good stuff! Thanks for the update. Sorry that weirdo spilled out their ugliness on you--you're brave to get back into writing so soon. It really is depressing when that happens, like a slap in the face. Congrats on breaking the writer's block! Thanks for the update!

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From ANON - Baka Hanyou Rahvin on November 27, 2006
Hey, nice chap. I can't wait for more. I think I'll like this website too.

Please update soon! And a belated Happy Thanksgiving!
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From ANON - kiba1350 on November 27, 2006
Hey I just wanna tell you how much I love your story. I love it because I can relate to it cuz I'm a religious person who comes from a religious family and now I'm dealing with issues about my sexuality and it's nice to read something that is kind of similar to my current situation. Anyways, you rock and I can't wait to read more of your amazing story.
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From ANON - Donedin on November 26, 2006
Alrighty, I just started reading this story and it freakin ROCKS!! Man, your freakin awesome! I can't wait for the next update! ^_^ and really, wow. I am really impressed with everything in the story so far, but I thought you were going to make Sasukes aunt Tsunade, and then get her and Ero-senin together and all happily ever after crap, but it's still good! Can't wait to see where you are going with the whole Haku thing too. Please post soon, ill be waiting!!
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From ANON - Krickets on November 26, 2006
HEY!
I just wanted to write and say what a lovely story this is, you bring up alot of questions that alot of teenagers and even older people have issues with. I myself am agnostic cause i dont discount the Idea of god or a higher power i just dont feel organized religion is the way that i chose to devote myself....organized religion...dosnt that sound a bit like organized crime to you? Like churches are mafias or somthing, very sinister if you ask me.

I remember living in the south when i was a kid, i actually lived in Georgia and i didnt really like going to church. Thankfully my parents are evry understanding people, they never go to church themselves but they always let me know that whatever decision i made was ok with them as long as i didnt hurt myself or other people. ITs nice having aprents like that although sometimes they really question my logic.

I recently actually took up some missionaries on their offer and went to their church and did the tour...and you know what? it wasnt that bad. I actually live in washington state now and the churches up here and pretty much all along the western coast are pretty open about things like this. I mean there is a city near mine that acutally has an openly Gay minister. Alot of four square churches or free churches where people just get together and talk about their feelings toward god or just pray together. Its really kinda nice and they dont even mind agnostic people like me joining in, they are just happy to say hi and give you a cup of punch and sing or read the bible if you want. Its really diffwerent from what i was used to in Georgia.

As far as i know the adotpion agencies throughout the country are run by private orgainzations even though they are regulated and funded by the goverment. Therefore its up to the standards of the individual group on whether they adopt to a homosexual company...some are cool about it most unfortunatly arent. But on the other hand alot of couples just go out of state or to china not to mention invetro and contracting. Many couples now go through private lawyers to find mother willing to directly adopt their children to couples, if its the mothers wish and she is a full participant then their isnt much the state can do besides constantly sending out child protection services which they cant do without legal and just cause...even to gay couples. But i have to say its much harder down south then anywhere else....thats the plain truth to it.

You know i have been thinking of setting up a Peer counseling group on MSN for a while now. There are just so many people who wish to talk to me about things and i think that somthing like that would be a benifit to alot of people. If you would be interested in somthing like that feel free to send me an email.
Krickitat@hotmail.com Or my AIM is krickitat same for my Yahoo
You can find all that on my author page as well

Heh and you can feel free to ask me alot of these questions...having lived in the south and gone to church and then gone to church up here and living all over the united states i bet i can clear up quite a few things

Well happy writing and thanks for the wonderful story
Krickets
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From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 26, 2006
oh man! let old people sleep, nomme needs her chapters! this one was soooo good, though i would have felt better had naruto punched kazuma one before bolting. and telling his mom off. you are going to write that in, right? he needs to, geez.

anyway, great chapter, and i can't wait for the next one! update soon!
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From ladygizarme on November 25, 2006
ack! half chapter or not, this was really powerful to me! i gotta say, i was proud of naruto for tryin' not to lose his cool with how angry he was at his dad right then--that's something i had LOTS of troubles with myself when fighting with my dad about stuff (religion just being ONE of the things) so i was like *squee* go naru for being mature!

and oh my, naruto's big scene in the street with the rain and the asking god where he was and what he said about if they hate him because of god he must exist.. just.. wow, that was so powerful, and top it off with the lightning and tree and it pretty much saving him from getting run over, ne? aah i hope you can work through your block and keep these awesome chapters coming (oh and congrats on the tongue ring, funtimes lol)
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From ANON - Briryan on November 25, 2006
Great chapter! Oh I can't wait to see how Naruto's parents reaction will be to his running out on them. That should be interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - sadistickiss on November 25, 2006
HeiyaZ I just found this story XD. It's uber awesome! I love SasuNaru stories to do with religion ^^. Sasuke sounds way cool. Naruto sounds adorable - and trapped, poor thing =3. His parents piss me off but kssh, they're his parents... Anyway, AWESOME story. Update soon XP!
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From ANON - Rasengan22 on November 25, 2006
Guess I picked a good time to start this since you updated already! XD I almost should have waited to review here because this chapter was like amazing! And yeah, darn, I wanted it to go on a little longer, but if you're tired, you're tired! Hmm... I hope you were able to eat something if you got your tongue pierced! I couldn't eat for days! O_o But keep it up! You're like my favorite new author; I really enjoy all the raw emotion in here. And that scene where Naruto was running out in the street... just, I could picture that so easily with the rain and everything that was going on with him. It was just an awesome action sequence. That's really hard to do!
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From ANON - urban mystic on November 25, 2006
wow I f;ipped when I saw you updated. short but swet I like. oh and if my email doesn't show up again it's klt.girl@yahoo.com I really need to stop being lazy and get an account, ah well.

luv ya always
*Mystic*
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From ANON - Izzy on November 25, 2006
omg!!! ur doing so great!!! the point of views are very nicly done as well, i havn't been confused yet, and it seems u don't need a beta at all!!
i love how at first naruto and sasuke where just sex-buddies but now there something, more, a more develiping(how u spelll dat?) relationship, it is very, very touching, i will be checking back!! update soon, and i hope school works out for you...and what are you thinking about having for your tatoo? i just have a little "I" you know...something simple...oh man i'm tried...wow minue(french for midnight[i hope i spelled it right])
have a good nights sleep!! g'nite
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From yeagerbomb on November 25, 2006
thank you for finally and at last updating!! i was so happy to see this! i was just updating my own fic when i decided to check the m/m section for the eighth time in twelve hours. i do that all the time. so yay for updates, ne? hope to see more soon, i love this story a lot! i hate naru's dad, but i get the feeling that's the point... anyway, i hope you update soon!!~
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From ANON - Angel on November 24, 2006
I wasn`t gonna reveiw until I got to chap 5, but somethin` really got to me.

Ok, I`m a Christian and proud of it. DON`T GET ME WRONG! THIS IS NOT A FLAME! I PROMASIE! But If I were to ever meet Naruto`s dad I would say, "what do u think of gays and lesbians?" if he were to say that it was a sin or some other shit I would punch him in tha face. Then get out the bible and read the part where God wants us to find love. If he were to read a part where it said that it is a sin (which is in the old testiment) I would bitch slap him with tha bible. And say, "No duh! I`m straight and I was born a sinner! God knows we`er gonna sin. He knows exactly what sin we`er gonna make. Your a Christian! You belive that God knows all and we`ll forgive and loves us no matter what! ANd anyways that`s in the old testiment stupid! We use that to make desions! But the old testiment is over! We don`t make sacricfies any more no do we? No! That`s because He The ALl powerful one payed tha price! We`er free stupid! We can like the oppiste ex or the same sex. We just have to offer our selfs up to him! He loves us no matter if we like the same gender! I swear! Your so ignorent!" and the punch he just for good mesure one more time.

Sorry, for the rant. That just pisses me off. If you read the bible you would know god wants us to find love. He knows what we`er gonna do before we`er even born, So he just wants us to ask for forgiveness. That`s how it comes out to me. BUT, yea. I like your story so far! ^-^ It`s really good and well writen! I was just so pissed at his dad. Cause to me he gives Christians a bad name. So like I said I really like it! update soon!

~Angel

P.S: If something bad happeneds to Naru`s dad plz put a person in there that comes up and points and laughs at him in his face then walks off! ^-^ Cause that`s excatly what I would do! and it would be funny!
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From ANON - Rasengan22 on November 24, 2006
Oh my, weird, I read the A/N for the last chapter, like not the chapter that is the A/N but the last written chapter... and what's weird is how I stopped reading this cuz it suddenly did the downtime thing and I was saying to an author friend how I was going to email you and say the exact same thing that you said to all of us... strange...and I'm gonna kick Mirandler for not telling me about this story. I hope your block isn't too bad, it sounds like this story is a pretty good way for you to vent, and you may or may not realize that it gives your story a special quality. Special is vague, but there isn't another word for it. It's got a lot of feeling in it... and it's not just angst. And I think that's what I like the best. I was just kind of thinking how I like how it's kind of haphazard. I'm not saying you don't seem like you have a plan for this story, but just that ... the funeral for example... I mean, it's not necessarily relevant and it is, what did we learn out of it? We see Jiraiya, and Naruto's mom is vulnerable/emotional... but it was just like... writing life, you know? Bleh. That didn't make sense. And I'm finding that as much as I love Naruto's POVs in this because there's so much going on, I really really love Sasuke with every chapter. And the last chapter, from the shower scene on was really touching. But yeah I suppose all hell is gonna break loose, but if all else fails at least Naruto can go to his uncle's. And I wonder what will happen w/ Sakura and Hinata... now that I finished I can go to bed! Hope you had a nice holiday! ^_^
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