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Reviews for Where is God?

By : Innerchild
  • From ANON - Nathaniel on December 17, 2006
    Hello!

    Your story is really good because beside most AU-high school fics this one gets a lot more depth by embracing the religious aspect. In a pretty critical way but I'm sure in a lots of areas there are people like Naruto's father in this fic. And because you are doing it good you should stop apologising every chapter anew. It's a little bit like you would apologise that you made Naruto and Sasuke gay - it's a fic and you didn't start a torrent of hatred against religions in general - you just denounce intolerance caused through bigoty or fear of the unknown.

    One thing I see in almost every high school fic is the following: it seems that the characters get tons of homework. Looks like it is tough. But then again it looks like they drift off every second lesson - on a regular base. Okay, I attended school too (it's some years now) and wasn't concentrated every minute of every lesson - but the time I paid attention made homeworks lots easier and less time consuming. I would recommend to try this once :D

    On another note: You wrote you were once a Christian and lost at least your faith in the Catholic/Evangelic church but still believe in a supernatural/superior power. And you are looking for the right way to name and/or grasp it. In my opinion that perhaps is the failure, though it is only human. Why do we have to name or describe everything. I never was religious but I developed over the years the idea that perhaps there is a "cosmic force" out there that make things possible we cannot explain. Perhaps because we are not developed enough to understand way it works or perhaps because there is no way to really understand it (one thing that falls in this category is women's logic :D). And the thing I now can't really follow why people start to squeeze this idea into a corset of a religion. Why give it a name or a shape? Why start practising strange rites and knit narrow and absurd rules of what to do and what to prohibit? I don't think said force even has a consciousness.

    Okay, I stop spreading weird ideas :-) Just keep writing this amazing story!
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - Mika256 on December 17, 2006
    I love it. Please update soon. I love it so much. So PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!!
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  • From ANON - Psylocke on December 17, 2006
    I really, really hope that you won't quit/hand the fic over to someone else! :( A new author would mean a whole new style, and it's not often that's a good thing.

    Naruto and Sasuke seperately were so sweet, and I like that Naruto's mother has some sense. Never cared much for Hinata or Hanabi but the direction you've taken with them is actually quite interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2006
    have yet to review but /love/ your story. IC and always engaging. more soon please!
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on December 17, 2006
    That was a good chapter! So Sasuke has found himself an unexpected ally! That's awesome. I feel bad that she's gonna get drilled on by Naru's old man but i think it was worth it! And Jiraiya's Naru's uncle, ha! He does make a cool one huh. I hope Sasuke gives Naru a good birthday present *gives devious smile*. I'm rooting for those two. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on December 17, 2006
    omg, i was so excited to see you updated!! yayayay!! i totally cried during hinata and hanabi's part *sniffle* it was really good though, pulling at the heartstrings is good and comes with the territory here anyway, ne.. i wonder what exactly their father died from, though? suffocation of some sort it seems; was he choking or.. will it be explained more later? as for naruto, i hope he's able to stay at jiraiya's.. now that his dad saw his mom talking to sasuke, though, i'm sure things aren't gonna go that smoothly (like they really could before?) but it's nice to see that at least his mom seems accepting of naru's relationship with sasu, if only for the simple fact that she wants to see her son happy. i wonder how she's gonna handle a face off with her husband though.. will he figure out the truth himself or will she feel guilted to tell him? ackkkk this story is so good, you just keep pulling me in deeper and deeper--so i really hope you don't have to pass it on! even if it takes longer to put out chapters, i'm willing to wait for your work; although obviously i don't know what personal problems you're dealing with, and i'm sure they're much more important than writing for our sake, but i hope whatever it is you don't let it take you over and somehow find a way to get through things (whether you have to pass this on or not)

    well so for now, until next time, it was another awesome chapter, thank you ^_^
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  • From ANON - dancing kitsune on December 17, 2006
    AAAAAAAAAHHHH Please dont kill Nadine!! I was just starting to like her ;_; And I definitly DONT like Kazuma....= =;;

    Yay for Jaraiya! And yay Naurto for saying no!

    I cant wait for the next chapter, good luck with it!!
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  • From ANON - Disgraceful_soul on December 17, 2006
    Hey! I just wanted to say that this story rocks! You actually captured my thoughts about religion completly! Nice job! I hope you update soon! ^^ And I hope Naruto's dad goes to 'sleep' or something, he's a total ass.
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on December 17, 2006
    fucking yay!! another chapter! oh man, i love this story to bits! you have to keep writing it. i don't think anyone else can do it justice.

    anyway, to the actual chapter. i'm glad naruto finally went to jiraiya, and i'm glad nadine isn't all "my baby's gay! *tears*" but i sure hope when kazuma confronts her, she grows a backbone and tells him off. or maybe just enlightens him on how he's making their lives living hells, ya know?

    as always, keep up the good work, and i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - animehead on December 17, 2006
    I have to say that I really enjoy your story. I like everything about it to be honest. The flow of the chapters is great, and...well I don't know what else, BUT I know I like it. Check out mine if you ever get the chance. There not all that great, and no where near as good as yours, but I odn't know, you may enjoy them. Take care. I will be awaiting your update.
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  • From ANON - GypsyRose on December 16, 2006
    Yay for Naru's mom she should divorce Kazuma I wonder what he's gonna do.
    I love that you put Hanabi in there; she's very in character (maybe a lil bit crazier).
    please keep updating ^-^
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  • From ANON - severedwings on December 16, 2006
    MOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.....*blinks*...pwease.

    SW
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  • From ANON - Star on December 16, 2006
    Update please! I'm luvin the story!
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  • From ANON - Riahna on December 16, 2006
    WOOOO i love this fanfic its awesome! keep up the good work i appreciate it so much m'dear
    x
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  • From ANON - ?????? on December 16, 2006
    awesome new chapter, cant wait for the next one!!!! :]
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