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Reviews for Into The Desert

By : kyubiteaser
  • From ANON - spiritwolf on November 17, 2006
    Well I thought this chapter was good about time you updated ok well please next time don`t bore ppl with the junk you wrote before your finally and I mean finally got to the story PLEASE don`t take as long to update as yo did this chapter its a good story
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  • From ANON - BlackDragon on November 17, 2006
    I have to say that these chapters just keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - logophobia on November 17, 2006
    it was smuty!!! yay raven will be elated!
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  • From ANON - Gyousan_Maindo on November 14, 2006
    Good so far, but would like to see the ending, wouldn't mind seeing the ending.

    Although, the thing with the woman at the end, I'm betting that she is either a victim of Orichimaru right?

    Try throwing in a couple unexpected twists into the story. Other than that good writing so far. Into the woods was great, but as I said you still need to finish Into the Sand. Maybe throw in a oc that can move gravity or something like that, maybe a guy that has a multiple personality disorder with chakra and moves with each personality, play around with those ideas if you want, although in my own story on fanfiction.net I am going to be introducing characters like that, just throwing some ideas out there for you to work with, I got more.

    Well as I said. FINISH THE STORY you haven't touched it since october while the last time you updated Into the Woods was on the 6th.
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  • From ANON - John on November 02, 2006
    I loved into the woods, and it looks like the greatness will continue. I hope to see an update soon-John
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  • From ANON - BlackDragon on October 26, 2006
    Huzah greatness in a story. I loved the work that you did in both Forest and Desert, keep up the amazingly awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Megumi on October 21, 2006
    Stupid Clifie :P Great story! Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - MaginMan on October 19, 2006
    Alright, so I'm not usually one to take the time for a review, but this was a great chapter. The story itself was little more than an intro for things to come obviously, but the way you handled the characters to get them to that point was fun. I loved "Forest" and I have a feeling "Desert" will be equally enjoyable. Thanks for the memories!
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  • From ANON - Mahha55 on October 18, 2006
    Omg my new favourite Fanfic right now! Keep up the awesome work!...... Is it(the girl) Rin?
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 18, 2006
    I managed to read all the chaptors of Into the Woods in a day, quite some time ago and was completey absorbed into it. The next part you've started gives me the exact same feelings. Thing is, is the girl at the end of chaptor two have any connection to the girl in the beginning of chapter one? I don't understand who those characters were or what their purpose is but i hope you fill us (and of course me) in on it. Please continue on with this story to the end, i couldn't stand it if you didn't. Thank you for writing such a kick-ass story.
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  • From ANON - Snidne on October 16, 2006
    One word:

    Genius.

    Enough said. xD Ok maybe not enough. Really good chapter this one too. I like your style.

    ......Yeah ok, I'm done. XD Not much to say that already isn't said.

    Snidne out.
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  • From ANON - Josh on October 16, 2006
    Well that was a great update and I will be glad to see another update soon.. But if you don't update I understand from work and school... Well Talk to you later.. E-mail me cuz I want to know a few things at JTB8834@aol.com or RedDragonSTL19@yahoo.com either one will do
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  • From ANON - preston on October 16, 2006
    More plz plz MORE you are the best fewer then five series have ever made me this exited this is one of the best series that i have ever read it's helarius oh and i LOVED that opening disclamer you did in the first chapter if you ever dicide to turn this into a official fanfic book then i would like to reserve my copy now and lastly i would like to thank you this is beautiful i've read so of the other shorts on this site and none of them do there charactors as well as you do
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  • From ANON - Fay on October 16, 2006
    ACK!!! Sooo good!!! Can NOT wait for more! Plot twist and mystery already, romance in full bloom again! *squeals happily*

    LUFFS IT! Waiting for an update with baited breath!

    ^,^
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  • From ANON - JasonC on October 15, 2006
    freakin awsome. You haven't lost your touch, you chapters are as amasing as always. I only found one or two grammar problems but after I read the sentence again I found that they are only of the utmost minor. But I really can not wait to see the next chapter. I just know it is going to be awsome. And what the hell are they doing to the poor girl huh??!! Well its probaly major to do with the story so Ill just keep on guessing until you come out with a new chapter. So seeya when you do.
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