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By : ladywolfTerri
  • From ANON - phoenix on April 28, 2015
    you know if it did strike the prostate hard or as you said with a tinge of pain it probably damaged it that would cause getting a erection either extremely hard and difficult to maintain or not even get one
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  • From ANON - AJ on May 02, 2012
    I know it's PWP, but the premise was too lame, even for a PWP. For one thing, Naruto didn't think Sasuke had any kind of a personality at the beginning of the fic, but then by the end, and in the space of what? 3 or 4 hours? they were promising to never ever leave each other. WTF. Given everything that happened in this fic, did we really have to have the gratuitous twu luv 4evah thing at the end?!

    For another thing, I have to say the idea of Sasuke as the school's willing cumdump was disturbing. So any guy whatsoever who felt like getting off could have a go with Sasuke, eh? Even some fat, smelly otaku who just wanted to brag he'd gotten a piece of him? Naruto wasn't any better than the hypothetical fat, smelly otaku since he just wanted to use Sasuke as a convenience--unlike a prostitute, Sasuke doesn't charge!--and wasn't entirely sold on the idea of them being boyfriends. Oh yeah, I can really feel the love between them.
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  • From bloodshound on September 16, 2010
    wow...i'd jsut like to say...um wow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2010
    (I review as I read.)

    Lol, the exchange. ____ “Sure Sasuke was hot, but was it worth risking his life to be certain of his sexuality?” GREAT LINE. ____ Alcohol is never to blame, buddy. You’re gay or bi. ____ “It’s really easy, just hit on him, telling him want to fuck or go for the really direct approach …” LOL, as if that wasn’t direct. XD

    Oh boy, I know who their PE coach is. XD ____ Aw, Kiba, you jerk. XD

    Busted. ____ “Go get ‘em, tiger.” Lol, I’ll betcha Sasuke heard that. ____ The blunt way Sasuke’s talking to Naruto is really hot. ____ Heh—one rule broken. (Sasuke’s not going to be thrilled once this is over.) ____ Heh—quickie in the shower, then not so much as a goodbye. Yet I can see there’s a long way to go in this story, so I’ve no doubt that they’ll speak again. ____ Oh jeez. KIBA! You could’ve mentioned that earlier! (*headdesk*) (Even though I’m pretty sure that Naruto’s going to be Sasuke’s exception.)

    Nuh-uh. Sasuke groped you, didn’t he, Naruto? ____ YEP! XD ____ Oh jeezus, Naruto, at the rate you’re going, you may as well tell the school that you screwed him. XDDD ____ Hmm, Sasuke or Shino? DEFINITELY SASUKE! I HATE SPIDERS! DX ____ Jeez, Sakon, that sounds scary. ____ Yay, Sasuke likes him. =) ____ Well. Sasuke’s given up the no-kissing rule. ____ The sudden jump to Sasuke’s POV while he’s giving head was kind of awkward. Up until this point, the story’s only been in Naruto’s POV, and the jump wasn’t only so startlingly sudden, it was also confusing because at first it sounded like it was saying that Naruto was the one who had given head before. Still, the description in that paragraph is very erotic. ____ Boy, that’s awkward. Sasuke leaves just like that. I wonder why he doesn’t linger. Maybe he’s working up to it. ____ All this mouth-covering is really funny. ____ “I didn’t know the sex was an audition for anything!” XD ____ Oh man, that’s rough. Sakura gives up on Sasuke and starts paying more attention to Naruto … WHEN NARUTO’S TARGETED BY SASUKE! XDDD ____ Aw man, another tough choice. Sakura or Sasuke, Naruto? ____ I wouldn’t say Sakura would be pissed just because Naruto didn’t sit down next to her. A little hurt, maybe. It shouldn’t be much of a big deal.

    Man … all in one day. This is going incredibly fast. I swear, if Naruto’s not the one, I’m going to be very disappointed. ____ Lol, making out in Laser Tag. ____ Yay, Itachi’s still around. And travelling. =) ____ And there goes rule two. ____ VEEEEEERRRRY EROTIC. GREAT JOB. ____ Lol, he wore Sasuke out. That must be a first. ____ Aww, cute.


    Very nice! I enjoyed it! I’d call this mostly a PWP, but not entirely because there was just a little bit of a plot in there. I get the feeling, though, that the plot wasn’t the main focus of this story, so good job!
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  • From ANON - G.S. on April 12, 2010
    Wow, very porny and very hot, kind of OoC though (but for once I don't really care). Thank you so much for writing this story, write more oneshots like this? Please?
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  • From ANON - Masochistic_Uke1098 on May 16, 2009
    WWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    That was GOD! You are GOD! I freaking bow to you and this ultimately and sinfully SMEXILICIOUS STORY!!!!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE Make a sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - Nisha on September 14, 2008
    Hey! I really liked Tormented and I was wondering if you'd possibly consider turning it into a chaptered story. I just had this thought as I was reading of Naruto Telling Sasori, Gaara, Kiba and Deidara who it was they ended up kidnapping and what their reactions would be. Also Sasuke said he wanted to keep Naruto by him forever basically so I was thinking it would be cool to see how they would interact outside of the the Saviour/Victim scenario.

    If you'd like to use this suggestion that would be awesome. If not, no worries.

    Thanks for reading my review,

    Nisha
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  • From Ikippiki on July 31, 2008
    One word: HOT!!
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  • From ANON - DaveyLockhart on July 28, 2008
    Crazy awesome. That's how my lover and I are. xD Damn, you're good.
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  • From Imagy on April 05, 2008
    HOT DAMN
    now that was sexy
    I wish there was more of this
    even though I know that it would be kind of hard to fit in
    but still
    it doesn't need that much of a plot line to keep it going
    just a sight hint of one
    and more sexiness
    but o well
    it was still so amazingly good
    I loved every minute of it~!
    ^o^
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  • From RyuuOokami on March 20, 2008
    I really liked the way you putted their relatioship. Naruto topping but Sasuke dominant in public. That was pretty cool.

    And I'm sorry if this seems totally random but:
    “My brother. He called three months ago, I believe he was in France at the time.”
    That just made me laugh a LOT. Don't ask why. *scratches back of head*

    Well well. Thankyou for the entertainment. *wink*
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  • From ANON - Malice In Wonderland on March 17, 2008
    Congratulations you have just written the best NaruSasu lemon ever...I normally don't enjoy NaruSasu and stick mainly to SasuNaru but this one takes the cake
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  • From on February 21, 2008
    *splashes face with ice water* SO. DAMN. HOT.
    I love Sasuke-Slut.
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  • From flaircat on February 04, 2008
    bravo 10 out of 10
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  • From bloodstone on January 23, 2008
    That was HOT! To bad its a one shot. *pout* But hey, it was fantastic. I love it. I am going to go now and read more of your work. *stupid silly grin on face* FANTASIC WORK! ^___^
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