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Reviews for Nobody Move

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From toastybagelwithcreamcheese on October 11, 2017

    It would be great if you still have a copy of this story and could reupload it again. I am not sure if I would be allowed to leave a review here again on the same story but if it doesn't work, I can leave a comment on AO3 on one of your other stories.


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  • From ANON - Kira on October 16, 2016

    I don't know what happened when you edited it, but the whole story is gone after the first paragraph! I haven't read this in years and was really looking forward to rereading it! D:


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  • From GudenMulle on September 12, 2009
    That's so sad! So incredibly sad..
    I feel my heart breaking for all of them, but strangely, mostly for Tsunade.
    She might have been drunk, but those words were true.
    Poor poor Sasuke.. You go tell them!
    Thank you veyr much for this fic, it was touching and moving.
    A little bit of character-death can give us a perspective on them: Why are they important?
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  • From hsbs on June 03, 2008
    The interesting angle here is that, in the manga, it could happen! And Naruto might be consumed by the demon to protect the village!

    ...Only now we know it may be Sasuke he has to protect the village from......402 spoiler
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  • From gaara89 on October 23, 2007
    That was so sad. I really do like your stories. I hope to see more from you soon.
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 18, 2007
    ahh... every time i read this it hits me all over again. it's so sad. i actually skipped the lemon for the angsty pieces. it's so powerful. you did a great job. way to go.~
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  • From ANON - Chris on July 14, 2007
    I just had to leave a note on this. Very powerful story. I found myself tearing up several times, just being able to imagine the pain and loss they were feeling. The guilt, the fear, the hatred, the worry, and above all the love. Thank you. :)
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 16, 2007
    Wow that was sad, but strangely I liked it. It seemed like it could seriously happen. And Tsunade being drunk and saying all the things that were true. That was kewl. The title was what cought my attention and then having 'Nobody Move' at intervels w/ different descriptions, I liked that alot.

    ja ne
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  • From on June 14, 2007
    goodness. this is just... *takes back kleenex* this is incredible.

    the way you wrote them, both of them, was amazing. of course, there's nothing surprising about that, but still, you did a beautiful job with this. you captured their emotions, playing them both, all of them like violins and what beautiful music you made.

    and as much as i love a good smut scene in any story, i think it added to the poignancy of this one to have the smut non-existent, merely alluded to, you know? the fact that sasuke gave into naruto is also something is quite keeping in their characters.

    this is so moving, very sad and beautiful. you did an amazing job with this story and i'm torn at how much sasuke loved naruto. and i really loved the added dimension of reality when sasuke commanded the villagers to stay, to meet the very man they had hated so very much, the savior of the village and their hero. it added to the pain in my chest as i read through this. amazing. beautiful and sad and wonderfully well written, like everything you've done.

    until the next time!
    ~hanyou-elf
    *sniffles*
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  • From animelovergirl on June 14, 2007
    You kow, I got online to read a few more nice Naruto fics and relax after a looong day. Now I sit here, crying my eyes out and cannot believe that you wrote this...It's so beautiful and sad...and beautiful...and saaaad...waahhhh *runs off to get a handkerchief*
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  • From setsue on June 14, 2007
    WOW!! this kicks ass!! i love it so much. i haven't seen one this good that was only one chapter in a long time. major gudos!!
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  • From manicandyshumway on March 27, 2007
    *speachless*
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  • From ANON - severely_depressed on March 26, 2007
    gawd...i liked so much!
    i had to fight back tears...i really loved
    thank you for sharing, it was a lovely story
    xxx
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  • From ANON - animehead on January 08, 2007
    Aww it was bittersweet sad, but written beautifully. I admire you so much.
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  • From ANON - Maru on November 23, 2006
    Oh my gosh that was sad. I have tears in my eyes and all that sentimental crap. How could you write this? It was so good, but I get all upset when I have to kill off any of my fave characters. DAH!! You have me freaking out on this.

    I loved it all, beginning to end. Naruto was so anxious, I thought at first, "Ah, he's just hard up for sex" but then I read more and I was like "Why couldn't he just be hard up for sex?!?"

    This was very nice. Well written with an original plot and stirring themes. Namely you made me cry. At the end I was still drinking my coke but I had tears all over the lid of the can. And I was very pleased at the end when Tsunade was talking, and shaming the villagers. I was like "Yes! You tell those scummy bitches how crappy and stupid they really are!!" I was very satisfied with it. Good closure. I was kind of hoping for her to go on a rampage, but that would kind of ruin the effect of the story. So her bad-mouthing the moronic villagers was good. And yay Kakashi for more or less saying "Get the fuck out of here". Someone had to do it, and I am glad it was him.

    But ohh!! Sasuke! I felt so bad for him. Because he finally knew how much he loved Naruto but he also knew what Naruto meant to do but he couldn't do anything about it and was helpless and that made me so frustrated! And I liked also, how you said "Nobody move" repeatedly. I found that very effective, especially when Sasuke said it at the end as well.

    Naruto was a hero, he has a great legacy to leave behind, and Konoha will suffer because of it. That's what I say. I don't know how to close this so I'll say Kudos to you, and Ta for now.
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