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Reviews for Nobody Move

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - KinOfDragons on November 10, 2006
    This story was so sad!! But it's hard to be depressed for long with the freakin' gay erotica ads from AFF.net running. AH! ;o; It was wonderful~
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 02, 2006
    I would have to say that this story is now up there with only two other stories that have moved me to the point that I was choked up and teary eyed. I liked the way you used "Nobody Move" through out the whole story, even though the reader doesn't know what it means until the end. I like the way you had the love scene in there but it was not overly done. Overall I just wanted to let you know that this story was a heart wrencher to read and I will have it on my all time heart breaking Naruto stories.

    I look forward to reading more of your work.

    ~wipes tears from corner of eyes~


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  • From ANON - Kage no Tenshi on October 29, 2006
    Ah gez, this wasn't the most saddest SasuNaru fic I've read... but it still got me near to tears. This fic is really beautiful, yet sad. Bravo!

    KnT
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on October 28, 2006
    2 words can describe this piece of art.
    Beautifull, and Sad...

    What made more painfull, was that Naruto knew the end was coming. Sasuke, found out at the same time... Painful, Beautifull and Sad.
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    And I really want to kill you for doing this... (cries)
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  • From promise2003 on October 25, 2006
    Sad monkeys...lots of sad crying monkeys. They are like evil flying monkeys, but they just sit there and pout and cry at the VERY sad fanfics that I force myself to read because they are beautiful and well done. Darn you and your well-written stories, now I have to bookmark you so I can read the rest (because I sadly don't have time at the moment to sit and read...which is the real reason why I'm pouting).

    Really lovely one-shot. I appreciate you posting it very much.
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  • From ANON - Pixagi The Alien on October 23, 2006
    Okay, this is my second time reading this and it STILL makes me cry. TT__TT I love this story so much, the repitition is great, the way you perpertuate that one phrase... Beautiful
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  • From ANON - Mukki on October 16, 2006
    This is such a beautiful story... It made me cry ;_;
    It's perfectly in character, the plot is believable, and it was very well written.
    Now if you'll excuse me I need to go cry in my bathroom.
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on October 03, 2006
    i liked nobody move alot, cause well i really don't know why at the moment, but i do know that i liked the "nobody move". it was very sad poor naruto giving his life for the village that didn't respect him, but he loved anyway.

    ja ne till next time.
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  • From ANON - innerchild on September 28, 2006
    man... that was sad. but it ended very well. i love it. i'm gonna go check out some more of your work cause your style is amazing.

    -innerchild
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  • From ANON - ann dragera on September 27, 2006
    Amazing!

    Sad, but amazing. nice affect with Naruto's words.
    truely an act of a hero.
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  • From ANON - Pixagi on September 24, 2006
    Ooo, it's been awhile since I read a good one of these. I loved it. Yes, you kill off a beloved character, but it had to be done or the plot wouldn't exist. Short, and too the point. Very economic use of words, and prefect pacing. Didn't drag, but didn't leave you lost in the flow.

    Great piece.
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  • From ANON - chelzi on September 24, 2006
    that was so depressing. i am SO ready to cry. thank you for making me sad. you had very good delivery of this fic. i have a hard time finding that sometimes. but this was good. and awful. but good.~
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  • From ANON - Clemen on September 23, 2006
    That was so sad. Very good. Look forward to your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - HerBeautifulLie on September 23, 2006
    That was so sad! Lovely and amazing, but sad nonetheless. Beautiful job, really. The wording and the emotions shown were so powerful. Truely a beautiful piece.
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  • From ANON - DreamWyvern on September 23, 2006
    Oh my goodness. Wasn't that a tiny chunk of perfection!

    Like a yummy little candy. Not too big, not too small, but so damn good while it lasts.

    Primo. Refine this a zillion times (well that's what I do, lol) and cross-post it everywhere from here to like, Jupiter.

    - DeeDubbya
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