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Reviews for Party of Three

By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - savvy on November 22, 2009
    Awesome awesome awesome. the kunai added to it was definitely something i had not heard of even thought of. points to you lol.
    loved the writing. though i must say....i rather like narusaku lol.
    keep writing!!!

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  • From KdaAnimefan on February 12, 2009
    excellent story, at times its hard to read because of constant smut and thoughts about " when will she end up pregnant" but over all its quite a good series ^^
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  • From JediSpiceGissia on August 03, 2008
    OMG chapter 5 ~ Kakashi knows!! Can't wait to read the rest!! *clapping*
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  • From JediSpiceGissia on August 03, 2008
    Chapter 2 and the sex with Naruto up against the wall was the best! Always my favorite description and you write it very well. They were both very in the moment, and it was tender and loving, just awesome! Really liking your Naruto stories, and it makes me hope you write Bleach stuff too! ^__^ Thanks!
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  • From JediSpiceGissia on August 02, 2008
    I didn't think I would like a 3-some of the Naruto characters, but I do! Good job with the 1st chapter, I can't wait to read more. I would also like to post links to fan artwork of how I was picturing the older Team 7. Not sure if you have seen these before, but beautiful artwork should always be shared! *thumbs up* Also the images and the images in your story make a great impact for me when reading! *clapping* Thanks, going to read the rest!

    http://sakimichan.deviantart.com/art/up-against-the-wall-85495817
    http://sakimichan.deviantart.com/art/Sakura-love-me-73741096


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2008
    Great job!
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  • From ANON - whoeverIamloves- on June 17, 2008
    Awesome fic! I noticed a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing major.
    It was very sweet and very sexy all at the same time. I'm super impressed that you were able to balance the, um, "sex" part of it with the "sweet" part, because either without the other wouldn't have been half as good. I would have liked to see maybe just one more chapter, not necessarily lemony, where the whole team (Kakashi included) goes on some mission, so that we could see exactly how their new closeness works. I also would have liked to see Kakashi's acknowledgment of the situation and their improved teamwork, as well as his reaction to it. I think I would probably die squealing if I got to be a fly on the wall for a whole-team discussion of the new situation, and that's the only thing the story really leaves me craving. :)
    Again, AWESOME job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2008
    Wow! I am not one to read these, especially if Sasuke is involved...I don't like him. Anyway, it worked and it was just awesome. It gave me ideas....
    Excellent writing! Keep up the good work on future ones!
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  • From bgreenwivy on June 06, 2008
    I really want to write a sequel for this but my god you set the bar higher than...I don't even know. It was a pleasure to read this.
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  • From ANON - zfam on May 19, 2008
    this is absolutely wonderful! great length too. very satisfying i must say. like what the others have said, thanks for keeping this yaoi-free. i also love the idea that they really really love her. i guess it's just in-character for sasuke to deny his feelings & it's good that naruto knows what he really feels deep inside for sakura; thank you for letting your hopelessly-romantic readers know that :) i suppose it is just in-character too for sakura not to say 'i love you' to naruto, but at least she knows & she seems to love him even as well even if she didn't say it; her crying simply implies it. another thing, you just described naruto here in a whole different light! perhaps in the near naruto future he really is going to look as charming as sasuke *crosses fingers*
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  • From ANON - kate on April 27, 2008
    i like this story but it doesn't feel complete
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  • From ANON - Panda-chanf on April 13, 2008
    definitely the best fic in the whole entire world, or at least the greatest fic that I have ever read. lol and this is my second time reading it.
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  • From JAKKAL on March 21, 2008
    Very well written smut. Even without a plot, it was a joy to read. I think if you wanted to, you could make it into a romantic plot-driven story.
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  • From ANON - Xand dagger on February 24, 2008
    Love this story to pieces, truly a masterpiece. WELL DONE!
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  • From ANON - eileen on January 24, 2008
    I think it's the BEST lemon I have ever read from now. It's amazing how you describe them making sex, it's full of smex, passion and lust and that the same time, it's sweet and cute. Besides you keep well their characters, I love how you portrayed Sakura, innocent and yet naturally sexy at the same time, Sasuke, sexy, badass and hot, Naruto hot and gentle at the same time... thanks a lot for writing this story and keep writing, you're really talented.
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