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Reviews for Party of Three

By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - me on November 03, 2006
    i DEFINATELY think yu should make a sequel..ya kno..with a more intense lemon..cuz right now, yuv left me hanging and im still waiting for more
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  • From ANON - me on November 03, 2006
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
    Gyaddamn. That was amazing. You're now my new fave lemon writer.
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  • From ANON - A Commenter on October 24, 2006
    Muahahaha, Kakashi with them, hmm? >:3 That would be interesting...


    That was hot
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  • From ANON - Belle on October 24, 2006
    Jesus CHRIST! that was the best smut fic i have ever read...EVER! oh my god you are a smut genius! YOU should be writing the icha icha series, my god, i dont think there was a turn-off scene in there! and every time i finished a page and saw next chapter i did a little jig haha. you write so well, you most certainly know how to 'capture the moment' -- i'm kinda torn about the adding kakashi thing - i mean i do indeed want you to continue and yesm, kakashi is indeed one hell of a man (giggle) and i do support kakasaku, but, idk i felt some sort of deeper connection between the three that makes it sort of less meaningful if another were to be added to the thro. but, as you are the author and have constructed thus far an incredible story, i trust you completely - cuz we all know kaka-sensei is a mad hottie hehe.
    once again, FANTASTIC job.
    i really hope you continue!
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  • From ANON - not telling on October 21, 2006
    this is the best story on aff. there's nothing better.
    great job and i hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - xxept0 on October 19, 2006
    Oh. My. God. This story is so damn sexy!!! God, I just.. I.. INTRODUCE KAKASHI!!! -clamps hand over mouth- Oops..... My emotions got carried away. >.< Anyway, this story is just hot!!!

    On the standpoint of introducing Kakashi, it'll be hot. Definitely. But realistically, the way things are moving for this story, it's not realistic (but you, being a smut writing genius, will probably find a way to defind all odds. Mean that as a compliment!). I can't see Naruto and Sasuke sharing Sakura, even with their sensei. Plus, Kakashi is around 15 or so years older. You can't forget that! Plus, I imagine it's hard to write Smutty!Kakashi wihtout him seeming OOC. Won't it be nice to write a giggling school girl Kakashi having sex with a screaming sakura without getting sued by fans?

    However, you can take it as a challenge. In fact, if you can do it, more power to you! You;re officially a smut writing God!

    Anyway, this is a great story. Well writen. The characters act in a way that I can actually imagine it all happening! It's that good. =P Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - Geddian on October 17, 2006
    Not quite the porniest thing I've ever read, but close. 'Tis only second to Teamwork - The Night. Great writing, and there had better be a sequel!
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  • From ANON - Gypsy_Willow on October 16, 2006
    That was some of the best smut I've ever read, threesomes can be hard and to make it all work it was amazing. You don't need to add Kakashi personally I think it would be awkward with their teacher, why not give Kakashi his own seperate story.
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  • From ANON - arichang on October 12, 2006
    introducing kakashi? you're kidding right? that's just... crazy. it'd be interesting how you manage THAT but... it'll be a challenge... >_> anywho. yeah. for the most part, it was hot. but seriously. quoting sakura: "haven't you boys had enough?!" or whatever it was she said. XD DAMN. oh. and i'm a SasuNaruSasu fan... so the whole thing with Naruto being emotionally attached to Sakura annoyed me JUST a little. but I'll let it slide. it was strangely satisfying for four chapters of pure and intense smut.

    my only problem is... i read it all in one sitting. =__=

    *cough*
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  • From ANON - chelsea-chee on October 11, 2006
    I really liked all the smut. And I have a question for you. Which pairing do you like more? Naruto and Sakura or Sasuke and Sakura? I prefer Naruto/Sakura, but I still like Sasuke/Sakura too. hehe! Anyway, LOVED the story. Thanxs! :) :p ;)
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  • From ANON - Dino on October 09, 2006
    oh WOW i loved that! it was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the three of them were soo good! you balanced them all out all getting equal atention and man are u creative! i hope we somethig soon!!! and no Kakashi i like it just with the three of them!
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  • From ANON - Random Crazy Person on October 09, 2006
    Wow awesome job this is like the most erotic story on this site!! I wonder what Kakashi would say if he found out what his students had done? It is a good thing that Sakura is on birth control because I highly doubt she would not get pregnant after all that sex (but Sasuke and Naruto would make good fathers thought). I wonder what other kind of kinky stuff Sakura is into. Hopefully Sasuke and Naruto will get more chances to experiment.
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  • From ANON - Grandma18 on October 08, 2006
    That was one of the most erotic stories I've ever read. Naruto and Sasuke talk about stamnia. And poor/lucy Sakura she had them at once.Threesomes are such a turn on!
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  • From ANON - Nelly on October 08, 2006
    Although Im satisfied with the ending, there's plenty you can ass to it if you wanted to! Great fic!
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