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Reviews for Hot Sand

By : promise2003
  • From ANON - Daga on November 14, 2013
    Absolutely amazing... I laughed and I cried... The main love story was sweet and beautiful but I especially loved KakaSasu pairing - for the first time I've read a story which made they're relationship convincing (and very hot ;) I'm glad that you've incorporated some of NaruSasu cause whether someone like it or not it's almost canon pairing so obvious in manga, it's hard to create a believable story without any hint of their closeness.
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  • From ANON - toni on July 21, 2010
    This was an amazing story! I read the whole thing before reviewing so here goes...this was great on sooo many levels. It always seemed a little more than brotherly love the way that naruto chased after sasuke and you conveyed that well in the story. How gaara and Naruto came to fall in love wal well written too. enen in the anime, you just cant help loving thge silly blonde guy and gaara really never had eyes for anybody else. You wrote really great tension, just the right amount, in every scene and it drove the story well. I was glad you mentioned about the guys ( all the guys) getting surrogates because it just wouldnt have made sense at all that four major bloodlines would die out, or that the guys would just let them. Thanks for the story, again it was great!
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  • From ANON - Harlita on January 18, 2010
    GEEYAH!!! I just reread Hot Sand as it is by far my favorite fanfic ever. And upon finishing the last chapter, I realizes you called out my cheering you on in the after-notes!! I didn't realize you had even observed my joy in your writing!! So of course, I had to post back. Again, a great and satisfying story you have written, justifying each relationship while steering away from losing the cannon characteristics of each person.

    Absolutely one of the best.
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  • From ANON - poofjuice on April 15, 2009
    ..............that is the single most awsome thing i have ever read in my entire life.
    im laughing and crying at the same time right now and im not particularly sure why but that was bloody brilliant!!!!!

    gonna email me when yoo put up the sequel coz i do NOT wanna miss that!

    BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!


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  • From sheastar334 on September 20, 2008
    I'm late for a job, butI had to finish!!!!! Awwww, so pretty. But what about Ino? It has been eating at me. She's bitchy, hell yes, but she deserves some happiness, too.
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  • From hsosborne on August 27, 2008
    I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this and your others, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - sidhechaos on April 20, 2008
    is there just a general all around "please email me when you post anything new, including updates" list? :)
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  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on December 10, 2007
    Haha! Ah-hah! Ahhhh... I loved chapter ch. 11. Absolutely loved it. Especially Sasuke's response to his first blow-job. Yup, that'd be what it tastes like. I can't really imagine women really, I mean REALLY, liking the flavor. It's why they haven't made it into one of Baskin Robbin's 21 Flavors. Sooooo... I'm still not really into the whole man-on-man thing. Geez, I sound like Sasuke. Leaving reviews that parade you on your fantastic writing and then saying something like, "Yeah, sssss... not really getting into the "action" sequences, but keep 'em coming!" Sorry, I sound really bipolar. At least I admitted to a "bi"-something! There's a start!
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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on December 08, 2007
    Aww... I was hoping for a little more detail in the Sakura/Kankuro department. Good het Kankuro lemons are so hard to find and I'm sure this would have been a good one if you had continued. I'm not really into homosexual relationships and find it kind of hard to really feel anything when I read them, so normally i just skip right over anything labeled M/M, but you are such a good writer that the plot more than makes up for my squeamishness with same sex partners. And THANK GAWD you didn't make any Sakura/Ino yuri-ness.
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  • From charmpit on November 03, 2007
    OMFG I loved this story SO much! GaaNaru where they switch up; this is a first for me! One of my fave pairings! And I f-ing LOVE the way you write Kakashi-sensei! You freaking rock! Please write more fanfic! This one is one of my favorite fanfics EVER!
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  • From ANON - super_nuku_nuku on October 27, 2007
    Wow....just....wow, that was wonderful. It was beautifully written I cried throughout the entire last few chapters....and giggled incessantly throughout. Good Job and UBER KUDOS!! By the way all the links to the fanart are broken. I'd really like to see some of them, so if you know where they are could you post them on the LJ community or something PLEEEEEASSE!! *puppy dog eyes* And on that note I bow to your great fanfic writer-ey-ness, and humbly beg for the aforementioned spin off stories, and/or continuations.
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  • From gaara89 on June 13, 2007
    this story was amazing! i don't review often, but when i finished reading this story, i felt like i was obligated to. you did a great job developing the relationship, presenting, and resolving problems. all of the side stories were perfectly woven in. all of the side romances were carefully thought out. i really appreciated this story. good job, i can't wait to see more from you.
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  • From Satrana on May 10, 2007
    kay before I read your other stuffs: I glanced over a couple of your other more recent reviews here an they made me wanna say I really love the way you've given each person different ways of dealing with love and emotions. It makes it feel more real to see that where one person might be able to handle loss another is not. Anyway, great job.
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  • From Satrana on May 10, 2007
    I have such love for your fic! I just finished reading what you've done here and it's so great. I was already a fan of Gaara and Naruto but I think you've hooked me on Kankuro and Sakura too ^^! I shall eagerly await the promised lemon XD. Anyway, I just adore this fic so now I'm off to read some more of your stuff. ^__^
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