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Reviews for Hot Sand

By : promise2003
  • From ANON - Karasu on April 18, 2007
    ~scoffs~ saying that you can love someone after your lover's death is sad. saying that the love is 'different' and 'unique' but 'no less strong' are just excuses. love is love. you really think that romantic love is that unique that you feel a different one for every person? some love (when it's true) is meant to be shared with only one person; that's loyalty. sure there are plenty of people who move onto others, and luckily some that don't, but still...
    (sorry, this rant isn't directly focused at you, but to some of your other reviewers and people in general, definately)
    you're a quite decent write though, even if your subject matter contradicts itself sometimes.
    i mean you have so many people moving on from others; what if naruto or gaara died in the future? would it be the same if you had one of them find another love? (even if you said it didn't mean that they stopped loving each other...the love just 'faded' and 'changed' and it's okay to 'love again'...i doubt it, or else you wouldn't have put the love beyond death thing in the wedding vows...and it's more personal to us cuz the story focused on their relationship...well it would be a million times more personal in a real life situation (which is what everyone tries to relate to in a story)...
    just saying is all...i know it's just a story and stuff, but i'm trying to get some opinions straight, is all.
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  • From ANON - hink on April 18, 2007
    hmm, love how you ended the wedding wiht them knowing they'll love beyond death and all that. i think it's awful that you had to leave sasuke out in the cold though. it would have been very simple for you to make them all happy without unrequited love...but that is how you chose it.
    all in all, this story was quite unrealistic (thankfully), cuz as bad as people actually are, they're not actually this promiscuous about love in real life (not many people i think, to this great extent at least...i hope). but the story was a good read ( i have to admit i had to skim over a lot of parts to enjoy it though). i'm glad you did end up with a happy ending at least, more or less. but perhaps you just like emotionally unstable stories (hope this isn't a reflection of your own life or anything) :)
    anyway, happy writing.
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  • From ANON - Hink on April 17, 2007
    ack! how could you do that to Sasuke? ~sobs~ evil!
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  • From ANON - Hink on April 17, 2007
    hmm...well, like i may have mentioned, i dislike stories with multiple pairings (of the same character), adn people moving on to others after their true lover has passed or died or whatever..cuz loyalty beyond death is something precious...and all that said....i can't help but like your story. :)
    well, parts of it atleast. ironically i can't really stand the sakura/kankuro pairing even if theirs is the only one without backround angst. but i do like sasuke/kakashi and gaara/naruto on their own. and i suppose your style of writing has something to do with it as well. :)
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  • From ANON - Hink on April 17, 2007
    aw, i wish you hadn't added the naruto/sasuke complication. i'm actually a naru/sasu fan and believe they make a lot more sense, but i love gaara as a character adn the friendship he has with naruto. but you're obviously mixing up pairings all over the place, and that's fine since you specified, but i wish you'd kept it less uncomplicated that way, i hate sasuke with a broken heart and missed opportunity.
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  • From ANON - hink on April 17, 2007
    hmm....not a bad story. everyone's rather promiscuous, but that's fine. i don't like sakura though, in general and in this fic. one of the boys should give her a good knock in the head, just once, honestly. it would do her good.
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  • From NinPao on April 13, 2007
    do you have any idea how happy you made me when I saw the words "Part II" ?!?


    *squees*

    YOU ARE A GOD. A GOD!!!


    A GOD!!!
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  • From ANON - Lirin on April 12, 2007
    the way this has started i have no doubt it will be just as good as the original. i wait you next update. Lirin:-p
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  • From ANON - Nessy-Chan on April 11, 2007
    I re-read the whole thing again anyway the fic was THAT gewd, hmm yumms:} It brought a smile to my face, I just love this family (in some ways...O_O) chapter...more!~_~
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  • From kagomegirl on April 10, 2007
    OMG this was such a wonderful fic!! i love the thought of gaara and naruto adopting and getting a surrogate mother and starting their own family. i never thought of sakura and kankuro as a couple or kakashi and sauske, but somehow you made it work lol. i kinda wish there was a small sequal to this with them learning the ways of parenthood and how to be good uncles. if i was good enough to write anything i would ask if i could write a sequal myself lol. anyways awsome fic!!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on March 20, 2007
    Jut finished reading. It was so beautiful. I read the whole thing through in one sitting!! now my eyes hurt but oh well. It was amazing, everything about it was amazing. What can i say i can't wait to read more of your work. You have an incredible writing ability, i can't wait to read more
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  • From BloodyWolf on March 16, 2007
    That was soooooo good! Can you do an epilogue? Saying if they got there children, and if Sasuke and Kakashi got together more and such. Why didn't Sasuke just tell what happened? That Naruto was hallucinationg and though he was Gaara? Or maybe Naruto remember? Sasuke saw how much it hurt Gaara and Naruto, because they didn't know the truth. You have done a fantastice job with this story. Happy Writings!
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  • From JuliaXiaoyu on February 19, 2007
    The ever so stubborn Sasuke has fallen xD And boy, did he FELL hard...

    I'm curious as to how this story will go from here on. :O Will Sasuke try to rape Naruto to release his lust and jealousy? Will he secretly travel to Suna to "fetch" his blond teammate? Or will he--

    OKAY ENOUGH BLAHBLAH !! >_< *jumps quickly onto next page*
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  • From JuliaXiaoyu on February 19, 2007
    Holyfuck... x_x *nosebleed*

    This story is GOOD! GaaNaru is love. And..... they're both seme?! xD

    Lol, I used to think Gaara was the dominating type, but seeing how he's much more.. *cough reserved *cough*, I guess he needed Naruto to take the lead =)

    You, should make this into a movie! x3
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  • From ANON - jen on February 08, 2007
    well i loved it how it "ended"!!!!!

    lemons were great at the end!!!!!!

    hey i hope there is more kankura sakura stuff!!!!

    keep going!!!
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