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By : promise2003
  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 07, 2006
    I think you forgot to put the word "you" in this sentence:
    “I don’t know, your voice just hinted that were,” Kakashi teased.

    Chapter 10 WAS good -better, even, than the last one.
    Kakashi's sadness was well written. I was flabberghasted to learn that Iruka died!
    Me: O_O... DX "WHAT!!?? ...that's really sad..." ;_;
    This does make up for his man-whore-ish-ness**. Neh--But I never really had a grudge against him anyways.
    Two tenseis, being idiots -it's sadly funny ^^; (Of course, I always knew Sasuke was really an idiot... XD kidding! *cough*sorta*cough* *pets Sasuke "there, there..."*)
    At least Sasuke realizes he loves Naruto now...
    GEEZ, Lemon Drops! Are you trying to depress me forever! XD

    This might be my favorite chapter now! =D
    Off to read chapter 11! *kid in a candy store here*

    **that is most definitely NOT a word. XD tee, hee


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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 07, 2006
    O.O
    omg! Chapter 11 just popped up before my very eyes!
    GAAH! *loves all over*
    I haven't even finished chapter 10 yet!
    *tackles you and huggles*

    (Random note: I just got the strangest suspicion that Kakashi and Sasuke are gonna get together...o_O weird... I will read on and see.)
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 07, 2006
    I'm tired from work ^^; but this woke me right up! Aaaaand, since you were nice enough to give us TWO chapters--you lovely little author you ;D--I'm leaving you TWO reviews. *gives myself a cookie*
    I just read chapter nine. I though "Oh! Yay!" when I saw what it was about. I'd been wondering what had happened during that time.
    The thing I love most about this chapter (and it's what almost the entire chapter is about so, yay! I love the whole chapter! ;P) is the Kankuro and Temari interaction. their sibling relationship is cute and, funny and, much fun to read! You write character conversation so well! ^_^ It flows smoothly- even when they aren't talking at all (like when Kankuro pointed to his chest).
    Why DID Temari move to Konoha? Maybe she just forgot about the whole "freezing her ass off" thing, eh? XD Kankuro's suggestion for her to live in Suna while Shika naps in the sun seems a lot more pleasant. XD And the fact that she's mad at him because he won't fight with her is absurdly funny! Shika's tensei brain is probably reasoning that, if he fights with her once, he'll have to do it again. I can't believe he was so lazy-ass about her going to Suna; for a genius, that doesn't seem so smart of him.
    >=D the image of Temari "putting those dignitary bastards in their place" was hilarious! It seems like something she'd be good at XD
    Okay, I'm gonna read the next chapter now. Another review will be forthcoming. ^^ This one seems kinda long. My brain always has so much to say when it's tired -which seems completely absurd to me. O_o

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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on November 06, 2006
    Loved the 2 chapters, especially that last one with Sasuke and Kakashi chatting. Sasuke sure can be a dumbass indeed at the strangest times. I wonder what'll happen next. I really hope Sakura will give Kankouro a chance, and I love seeing Naru with Gaara, yet at the same time i like him with Sasuke. Grrr, they should probably just have one big threesome and live together lol. Wishful thinking. Anyway, tight work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kay-san on November 06, 2006
    Well, now I feel bad for Sasuke and Kakashi. (Even though Kakashi started out as a pervy idiot.) But I like Sakura with Kankuro and I like Naruto with Gaara. Maybe a little Sasuke/Kakashi later on? Hmmmm. Different but it could make everyone happy! Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be wonderful. Can't wait to see more! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From ANON - Angelofinnocence on November 06, 2006
    I like your story so far, but now I want to know what will happen. I usually like Sasu/Naru stories, but I like your's with Gaara and Naruto together. And now you've thrown Sasuke in with feelings for Naruto. Dear god, what will come of this. Update soon please!

    Angel
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 06, 2006
    Yay! Another chapter! You're such a sweetie for getting this chapter out so soon! :) *smuacks* Iruka is dead?! *wails* He's one of my favourite characters (I have so many in Naruto) and he's also the one that I see as being most suitable with Kakashi. No wonder why Kakashi turned into a manwhore. I'm glad though that Kakashi realises that he can love again. Although he would love again, it would be different from the love that he had shared with Iruka. However, it doesn't necessary mean that the new love is any lessor than the love that he shared wit Iruka. Just different and each unique in their way. Oh my Gosh, I have totally went off on a tangent. :P

    Love this chapter. Love the fact that Sasuke has finally realised his feeling for Naruto. Now he has to decide where to go from now. Whether to try to win Naruto, or to let him go for his goal of reviving his clan.

    The sign of a good story is that although it has no smut, it still captivates you and reels you in. I think that you wrote an awesome story and I hope to see more of your writing. Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 06, 2006
    Damn it!!
    How can you do such a thing!!
    I am always first a Sasuke/Naruto kinda of girl.
    My second is the Gaara/Naruto.
    This story is tearing me apart,now!!
    Now that Sasuke realizes how he feels about Naruto, I know that he is going to have to tell Naruto how he feels. Then you know that Naruto will always have feelings for Sasuke because its just the way he is. Argh!! But he is in love with Gaara!!! Argh!!! Why can't they just have one big sandwich with Naruto in the middle. You know what I mean, but that doesn't sound like something that Sasuke and Gaara would do.....ARGH!!
    Can you tell that I love this story?!
    Just wanted to give praise where praise is due.
    Can't wait until you update again!!

    ~Shosuro~
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on November 06, 2006
    Oh my, You killed Iruka? That's...that's actually kinda brillant. I mean I can't think of anything that might cause more emotional upheaval(barring Naruto's death) and while not something I could ever bring myself to do killing off Iruka is really a good emotional springboard.
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  • From ANON - Jenna on November 06, 2006
    Is this gonna end up with Sas/Naru? I love that pairing, but I don't wanna see anyone hurt. Please let me know.
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  • From ANON - Stagoya on November 06, 2006
    Another great (two) chaptres! I especially like the last one, very much drama-filled. I hope you're not gonna turn this into a SasuNaru, that would break my heart. Anyway, I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chaptre! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mako-chan on November 06, 2006
    Wow! 2-chapter uptade! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 06, 2006
    It's always nice to see a man pining for a woman at times. Just been a little down recently and this chapter just made me smile. Not because it's humerous. But just because it's heartwarming to see the sibling love as well as the development of true love. Excellent chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on October 30, 2006
    I just got back from vacation and was feeling a little down from recent events in my life. To my surprise I found this chapter waiting for me :) Love reading this chapter even though there wasn't any smut. Loved the conversation where Sakura finds out that Kankuro is waiting for her too. Now if only I could find someone like that for me. Another excellent chapter! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Kay-san on October 29, 2006
    AAAAHHHHH! I love it! I didn't read it for awhile since I was on a GaaSaku kick and couldn't stand the thought of Gaara with someone else. But this is just too good and I love, love, love, absolutely love the Sakura/Kankuro pairing you're doing. I've even warmed up to the Gaara/Naruto deal! Can't wait for the next update! Hugs & Kisses!
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