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By : promise2003
  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on November 13, 2006
    Well since my last review got cut off for some reason Here it goes.. OHHH MAN I LOVE THIS STORY! Cant wait for an update! Please dont break off the Gaara/Naruto Its too CUTE O.o' Sakske better not try anything *raises fists in anger*
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  • From ANON - Shadow2007 on November 13, 2006
    OHHHH MANN I
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on November 13, 2006
    Thanks for the shout out! Whoot whoot! Anywayz, awwwwwww Naru and Gaara are engaged *wipes tear* How cute and very fitting. I hope Naruto sweeps Gaara off of his feet. You know i think alot of people like writing Gaara as maintaining his aloof exterior at all times even in love, but i'm all for the notion that he secretly wants true love and a family and stuff. I wonder how Gaara and Naruto will react to Sasuke hanging around on the "mission" and now that i think of it, has Naruto even mentioned to him what had happened between him and the Teme that one time? Hmmm...It'll be interesting to see everyone's reaction to the engagement. Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Carla on November 13, 2006
    I am in a very hard position right now concerning Sasuke's partner. I just cant get my head around the fact that they are together even if in this story it kind of makes sense. I want Naruto and Gaara to be happy but I hate any Sasuke pairing that is not Naruto. Am very selfish in that regard. I kind of skipped the Kaka/Sasu lemons as I couldnt bring myself to read them. Am very weird and particular in this matter. Sorry, I really understand why you are doing it but I dont like it. Oh well, at least Naruto is going to be happy with Gaara. Yay for that! I loved the proposing scene between Gaara and Naruto. Thanks again for the fast updates and hope to hear soon from you! Take care for now!

    Carla
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  • From ANON - Stagoya on November 13, 2006
    *Does a happy dance*

    It's depressing about Sasuke's sucky luck, but I'm just so happy with the development of Naruto and Gaara. ^^ I can just imagine little versions of Gaara running around, that would be hilarious. Especially depending on who the surrogate mother would be. XD But I am hoping that some things work out for Sasuke as well. I hate the KakaSasu pairing normally, but I think you've done it very well. I'm actually hoping it works out for them. And of course Sakura and Kankuro. I'll be definitely looking forward for the next chaptre. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kay-san on November 13, 2006
    Awwwwwwwwwwwww! How friggin' cute are Naruto and Gaara??!!! *sigh* My little fangirl heart is squealing in happiness. And Sasuke better not mess it up! I'm usually all for a little NaruSasu lovin', but I absolutely ADORE Gaara no matter who he's with. So, as long as Gaara's happy then everything's super! Eagerly awaiting the next update! Hugs & Kisses!

    Oh, and thanks for being a regular updater. You have no idea how many stories I've been pulled into and then they get abandoned. Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - firestarburst on November 13, 2006
    *comes out of hiding* Yay back to the Gaara/Naruto pairing. This was such a sweet chapter. I was dying from the not knowing if Gaara would say yes to going with Naruto to Konoha. They are such a sweet pairing. Wonderful chapter!
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  • From ANON - Hestia on November 13, 2006
    Another great chapter and the personal responses to everybody--wow, you are dedicated! I just wanted to make clear that I really like the Sasuke/Kakashi (or Kakashi/Sasuke, I suppose) subplot a lot--I love the way you are writing Sasuke--I like lovers that feel conflicted and confused inside. The new scene in Tsunade's office is awesome! It's great to see Sai involved too. Hmmm--I can sort of see Kakashi sleeping with Sai to try to forget Sasuke, but that does seem excessively cruel. I can't see a motive for Sasuke to sleep with Sai, but it sure would be fun to read . . . Actually I don't care if Sai is just there for comic relief and nothing else--I have complete faith in your plotting ability.

    Oh my--Naruto is going to come up with a romantic proposal--that one should be fun! By the way, thanks for the complement on my stories--I'm in total writing funk--I kept having everyone depressed and stabbing each other and other ridiculously morbid plot developments, so I've stopped writing for a while. It's impressive to me how you stick with your writing schedule and keep coming out with chapter after chapter--thanks--you're an inspiration!
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  • From ANON - mako-chan on November 13, 2006
    Awwwwwww! This new chapter was so good! The way you handled the issue of Gaara moving to Konoha was just perfect! And the proposal! One word: SQUEEEE! Oh and the doujinshi is going to be sooooo good! I've had one planned for ages myself, but I've been putting it off for stupid reasons. I should really start working on it. ^^; If you want a peek at my NarutoGaara art, just go to mako80 at deviantart dot com. ^___^

    Thanks for the great story and keep up the good work! *skips away happily*
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  • From Fourthiv on November 13, 2006
    This chapter was so cute. I love how you portray Gaara. I feel bad for Sasuke, though. I hope Kakashi doesnt hurt him. And as weird as it is [I'm an avid yaoi fan] I can't wait to read more Kank/Saku. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 13, 2006
    OMG!!! Gaara agreed!!!! OMG!!!! :) I'm so so happy for them! Engaged to boot as well. I'm sure that they would make each other very happy during their time together! WOw~ :) I'm pretty sad that Sasuke didn't make it to Anbu captain. Yet I'm glad that you wrote it that way. It just makes it more realistic. That Sasuke could get affected by a night without sleep and the emotional upheaval that he experienced regarding the Kakashi incident. And I can't believe that Kakashi slept with Tsunade!!! Yucks!!!! I wonder if a threesome between Gaara, Sasuke and Naruto would work. Afterall you did mention that the council is highly unlikely to let their bloodline die out. Couldn't Sasuke do the same? Can't wait til the next chapter. Another wonderful chapter from you as usual. Keep up the fantastic work! *grins*
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  • From ANON - hopelesslyinlove on November 13, 2006
    OMG!! your are the best by far! beautifully writen, i just love gaara and naruto pairings. now sasuke and kakashi that blew me away. if anybody i always liked sasuke and neji but you pulled it off really well. please keep up the great work and up date soon.
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 13, 2006
    That was another great update!!
    This time you did it on a Sunday night!!! No class!!!
    Yeah!!
    Hope you update soon.
    Thanks for your comments at the end of your last update.
    It shows that you care!!

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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 11, 2006
    Oh. I just had a thought... a scary thought. O_O Is the sugggestion for Garra to give up his title and let Temari take over going to start a fight between Naruto and Gaara.
    *is VERY scared of your "plot twists"*
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 11, 2006
    WOOT! I'm back! I was ripped away from my computer for a few days and only just read chapters 12 and 13! =_=
    ._.
    THOSE WERE AWSOME! XD
    12 was HOT! XD (tee hee) The part where Sasuke offered Kakashi his hand (in marriage!! XD kidding! couldn't resist ;p) to help him up made me want to draw a picture of the scene (with sparkles and everything! XD --no, no. Seriously, that would make a good picture.).
    13 made me cry a little ...though it could have been because I hadn't blinked for five minutes strait... -either way, it was due to your story. ^_^
    Thank you for writing!! *glomps you to death*
    ~Yuri-san *still spazzing over awsomeness of story*
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