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Reviews for Hot Sand

By : promise2003
  • From ANON - Donedin on November 28, 2006
    Wow, this is a GREAT fic, I just started reading it. Im just curious about what you mean about heart strings... does this mean you are going t break Naru and Gaara up?! Cause if it does I think that i'll happily stop reading right here. But if the drama starts with Sasuke and Kakashi then I will GLADLY continue reading.. im kinda into the fluffy endings and stuff. Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
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  • From ANON - staplersbreak on November 28, 2006
    *sniff* grabs hankie. I wish Naru-kun was MY boyfriend!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
    update soon ^^ great story
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  • From ANON - Stagoya on November 28, 2006
    Awwww, that's so cute!!! I do feel bad for Sasuke, as much as I dislike him at times. Poor fella. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next, even if I will get my heartstrings ripped out.
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 28, 2006
    OMG OMG OMG! that was so cheesy and loveable! i love your fanfics you know exactly what to write and the perfect time to write them!

    i really love your work and i´m getting addicted to this! yaya i´m so happy!please post soon i need to know what will happen to kkashi and sasuke and what is in that note!

    luv and inspiration is what i wish for you!! keep the good work!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on November 28, 2006
    Girl, if you let Sasuke mess this up... :( Besides 'Kashi needs someone to heal his heart (I can't believe you killed Iruka! Did some missing nin storm the school or what? ;)

    angst, angst, angst


    Wonderful chapter~! - in the snow and how Naruto uses the sites in Konoha to tell Gaara how much he means to him. *sigh*



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  • From Fourthiv on November 28, 2006
    Yes! A new chapter! It was so cute! I hope things get better for Sasuke, I really feel bad for him. [stupid kakashi]
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  • From ANON - Kay-san on November 28, 2006
    So...so...so freakin' sweet!!! I loved it! Gaara and Naruto are just too cute together. But, I do feel for poor Sasuke. If Kakashi would quit being such an idiot everyone could be happy. (Seriously, I love Kakashi and all, but geesh! In this the guy's a cad.)

    And now a request. I know you said you're going to mess with people's hearts and then there'll be a happy ending, but PLEASE don't have lemons with switched-up couples! It'll take away from the sweetness of their relationships. I mean I'm sure whatever you have planned will work out wonderfully, but I can't see any switched lemons working well.

    Anyway, enough rambling. Please forgive Kay-san, she babbles incoherently when tired. Eagerly awaiting the next installment! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From ANON - lilithwolf on November 28, 2006
    ahhhh... sweet sweet love... I LOVED IT! this is such an awesome, well thought out, well DRAWN out story and i simply cannot wait for more.
    lilithwolf@excite.com
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 27, 2006
    ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    You can't do that to me!!!!
    NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Why the twists?!?!
    Why am I really happy for Gaara/Naruto but secretly want Sasu/Naru?
    Damnit!!!
    I am torn!?!?
    ~sniff sniff~
    I can't wait until tomorrow or Thursday!!!!
    Damnit.........but I'll wait anyways................
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  • From ANON - KT on November 27, 2006
    Poor, poor Sasuke. I don't find the appropriate words to say what I feel, but I'm so sad for him. I hope you'll make things better for him. At least he deserves some love. Well it's your story. I love it!
    KT
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  • From ANON - Hestia on November 27, 2006
    Hey, I agree no need for excessive lemons--the plot is so good, we don't need them. Plus this is romantic! Thanks for the update and the info on the earlier edits!

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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 27, 2006
    OMG. *lightbulb* O_O Are Sasuke and Kakashi going to have a little lovers spat at the get together Naruto has planned for his proposal to Gaara! (Wow. That was a mouthful. ^^;) I'm guessing they are among "the important members of Kohoha" that Saskura is supposed to gather.
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 27, 2006
    XD *has been laughing non-stop for the last 2 1/2 minutes*
    I agree with you; that chapter was very funny! Your non-smut chapters always entertain me ...well, so do your smut chapters, but that's beside the point... Oh! I just like all of your writing! XP
    Anyways... Temari's reaction at the end was, by far, my favorite paragraph in the whole chapter. I could just see her face when she said that. ^^
    Second favorite thing was the way you wrote Gaara. I'm sure I've mentioned how much I like the way you portray him--probably...can't remember. I'll say it again/for the first time *curses memory*: I freakin' love the way you write him! XD The blunt way he puts everything is endearing (?)...or something. I dunno, I just like it! =P
    ^^
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  • From ANON - MistressMuse on November 27, 2006
    I'm a little weirded out by the fact that I've managed not to review this story until now. I feel kind of bad, sorry. I love this story, it's definitely one of my favorites. I have to say that I've never been a big fan of GaaraNaru (I'm a LeeGaara fan) but I like this story nonetheless. You write Gaara so well. And I love the KakaSasu plotline, a personal favorite pairing of mine that I will write one of these days. I can't wait to see how you manage to wrap all of this up.
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