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Reviews for Hot Sand

By : promise2003
  • From ANON - TonTon on November 29, 2006
    really hope there is a kakashi/sasuke lemon soon. people who say they dont like that pairing dont know what they are missing
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  • From ANON - Mako-chan on November 29, 2006
    Oooooh! Another great chapter! I loved the little snowfight, it was so cute and funny! The smex was hawt as usual, no surprises there. (Keep it up!!)XP

    I don't know what you've got planned for future chapters, but I just wanted to say that I agree with one of the reviwers above. I think that switching 'lemons' or partners would be a bad idea. (Yeah yeah, I'm biased, but it's still true! @__@)But whatever you do, I'll keep reading!(duh)

    Anyway, wonderful chapter. Gave me lots of ideas. *wink*
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 29, 2006
    omg they really love each other! i never liked the pairing gaara/naruto but you completly made me change my mind! i love them!

    please kankuro/sakura lemons please!!!! i won´t stop reading this fic!

    UPDATES PLEASE! lol
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  • From ANON - firestarburst on November 29, 2006
    EEEEEEEEEE!!! Yay Gara/Naruto action. That was such a sweet chapter and the Hot sex was definitely a plus. Felt a bit sorry for Sasuke and yet not in the last chapter. I mean can he seriously be saddened over losing Naruto when he had just finished getting it on with Kakashi. It just doesn't add up to me. If I finally admitted to myself I was in love with some one I doubt I would jump in bed with the next available person, just because the one I want was taken. He must still be confused about his feelings and needs to get it together. Wonderful chapter by the way!
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 29, 2006
    Ohhhh... that was the sweetest sex I read in a while!

    I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on November 29, 2006
    Definitely too cute and extremely smexy~! You have like 5 of the best stories running right now. How do you do it???? Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - Donedin on November 29, 2006
    MY fave line in this post was “Not if I douse your happy pants with a fistful of winter as well,” It was just so well placed and said that I couldn't stop laughing. Your such a good writer. Can't wait for the next post! And just BTW im still wondering about the whole Sasuke and Kakashi thing... *sniff sniff* I want fluff... ~_~ please? ^_^
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  • From ANON - lilithwolf on November 29, 2006
    i can just see naruto lying there... "i'll be uke for a month!" gawds, that is priceless...
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  • From Fourthiv on November 29, 2006
    YEES! Lemons! That was awesome. I'm so glad you updated again. Oh, and that quote about the dick and the snowman was absolutely hilarious. Great work!
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  • From ANON - kiss_me_deadly on November 28, 2006
    Also known as MistressMuse, which is my username, not my pen name. So you're going to break my heart, huh? You sadist. Don't hurt Naruto. He's such a sweetheart and everything is going so well. Uggh. Oh well. Loved the snowman line. Classic!!
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  • From ANON - Stagoya on November 28, 2006
    So adorable!! ^^ And that was so funny, poor Naru though. I can imagine the pain of getting pants full of snow. *shudder* Oh, and the image of Gaara standing at the stove alone is enough to make me laugh aloud. Maybe the reason he doesn't have eyebrows is because he burnt them off. ^^ Anyway, another great job, can't wait til the next update!
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  • From ANON - Shadow2008 on November 28, 2006
    Wooo Yeah! Updates ROCK! :D I love this story.... but dont you dare break up Naruto and Gaara its TO CUTE ! ill hunt choo down >:D Just kidden. Anyway cant WAIT till next update!
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on November 28, 2006
    Awwww maaaaaaaan. I've never felt so happy and yet so heartbroken at the same time reading a fic before! This is wonderful/terrible lol. I feel so happy for Gaara and Naruto, yet boy do i feel bad for the teme. It's his own fault for being so damn obstinate for so long! Sigh. Anyway, i am bracing myself for the heart strings to be torn at, tattered, and then rebuilt again. Hit me!
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 28, 2006
    You said you wanted my opinion and that is what you'll get!

    This chapter was very sweet, sweet enough to make me make an appointment with my dentist! Don't worry, I'm not complaining at all, as a matter of fact I could care less if I get a cavity, because it was well worth it.

    Naruto's tour and proposal was great, I liked it very much!

    The only thing I have to say is that I feel VERY sorry for Sasuke, that was the part that actually got a tear rolling on my cheek, I just love the bastard very much!

    So update soon if you can!
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  • From GoldenSensei on November 28, 2006
    Awww, nice and fuzzy.

    Can't you just feel the warmth.
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