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Reviews for This can't be happening!

By : nekochannya
  • From ANON - dut on December 04, 2006
    I love this chapter... Its so cute and funny! The part where Sasuke was saying all that crap and Naruto just agreed to it ha ha! Sasuke has definately turned a new leaf eh? He was even willing to seek Kakashi for help.. So sweet.. I am excited for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lo on December 04, 2006
    Nicely done, you really have my attention. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mikkie on December 03, 2006
    Whatever ppl say about yoru fic I LOVE it.. ^^- (i've seen complete naruto and sasuke makeovers .. sooo) I love it and I hope you go on (y) please don let us down ... and good luck *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Gold Silk on December 03, 2006
    This has got to be my most favorite fic! I love an over possessive Sasuke, and the mpreg part makes it even better. You're doing such an awesome job and I can't wait until the next real chapter =D
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  • From ANON - hello on December 02, 2006
    Please update soon. :p
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on December 02, 2006
    hey, i love ur story1 so write and ignore everyone else!
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  • From ANON - LJ on December 02, 2006
    I loved the essay; while I didn't have any questions, specifically, about your authoring, it still did clear some things up about your topic and style.

    Also, it was very well-played, love, and I enjoyed reading it. It was an extrodinary piece of literature.
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  • From ANON - KeairaxSeiaa on December 02, 2006
    x.x Urg... I hate leaving even semi-bad reviews, but I've got to say this. I couldn't even get through this whole chapter. I've loved everything before this, but Naruto in this chapter was just... too much. I got to the part where Sasuke was trying to explain, and Naruto just flips out and starts insisting that Sasuke was using him no matter what Sasuke says. ^^; It was all so very... over-dramatic and out of character for Naruto. I just had to stop at that part. He was just... ranting about how Sasuke had used him and all and it wasn't NARUTO... it was a bitchy girl. ^^; But not Naruto at all. I'm sorry, I just... maybe it's that it's late. I'll try reading this again in the morning, and maybe I'll be able to get past the way Naruto is acting, but... I can't right now.

    Gyah, I know this isn't very coherent. When I leave reviews with real criticism, I like to make it at least somewhat helpful to the author, instead of just tossing things I didn't like at them and not giving reasons why or ways to improve it. It's really late, so I'm having difficulty doing this, but I'll try anyway. Ah... I guess Naruto was just over uke-fied, something a lot of authors do. Some readers like it, so I guess it's a matter of preference. I can handle him being uke, but what I CAN'T handle is him being a girl, which is what he was in the parts of this chapter that I actually read. He was acting like a bitchy girl, as I said before, and being overly dramatic.

    As for giving suggestions, I'm not quite sure what to say. I'd tell you to try to tone down the way Naruto was acting a bit, but that would mostly require him to believe Sasuke when Sasuke told him that he wasn't using him, and that might screw up the rest of your plot. I don't know, since I didn't finish reading the chapter. Anyway, I'm sorry, and please don't take this badly. Just trying to be a helpful reader. I DID love the rest of the fic that came before this, and wish you good luck in future writing!
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  • From ANON - Ack_wTF on December 01, 2006
    I love it.....Had to read the complete one though. Orginally found this on FF.net and decided that I had to come here and read the whole thng. So Yeah, I laughter really hard about the whole "velcro human complex" thing....really funny. So yeah, can't wait for the next chapther....so yah for now.
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on December 01, 2006
    Ack!(uses hand to shield keyboard from blood and drool)tissues where are my tissues?!(tissue comes flying out of nowhere to hit T.W. in the head) Gee Thanks Itachi that's so sweet of you, bastard. Man talk about a nosebleed. The first sex scene was excellent but this was even better amazingly so. And I love the awkward Sasuke moment with Naruto being so stubborn. You're dang good.
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on December 01, 2006
    This update was sweet! Maybe i'm just evil but it's always a trip for me to read about a pregnant Naruto, Sasuke made sure he gave it to him lol. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. Tight work! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - antilogicgirl on December 01, 2006
    Nice. This is intelligently written, with some nice images. Sasuke's got emotion without being out of character, and Naruto's amazing thus far. I'm only on Chapter 3, but it looks wonderful. Thanks for writing this. Keep up the good work.

    a;/j
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 01, 2006
    Oh, I forgot to metion, sometimes, you don't use contractions where it's really needed. Naruto wouldn't really say 'I am' 'I would not' The lack of contractions makes it seem like he's speaking slowly and seriously. Also, it kinda curbs the overall flow. Just as a general rule, don't use contractions in speech unless the speaker is trying to emphasize something.

    Heh, just some constructive criticism there. I really love your style of writing and the fact that you have minimal grammar and spelling errors. The contraction thing is just a suggestion to help out with the characterization, since speech is so important for that aspect^.^
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 01, 2006
    Great chapter. I think the length was perfect. I was checking how far through the chapter I was every couple of paragraphs because I was so scared it would be over. You can't imagine how happy I was to see that I wasn't even close to being done. Also, I'm normally left unsatisfied when the chapter is done, but that didn't happen here. You ended the chapter perfectly and I feel like I could wait a while for the next long chapter.

    I love how possessive Sasuke is and the general plot. I'm also happy about the mpreg 'cause I love it when Naruto's a mommy^.^
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on November 30, 2006
    Still enjoying this fic. Also like how you handled the seal. keep going!
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