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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From smint45 on January 15, 2017

    I just reread this story again!!! And as always when I do that I leave a review in the hope that it might motivate you to continue this story!!!! So I'm here again begging on my knees for you to pick this story back up!!! It is absoloutly one of my favorites and always when I reread it I'm very sad to see it not finished!!!! I still keep my hope up that you will come back some day and continue this fantastic story!!! It is one of the most thought out of the Naruto fandome I've ever read and it makes me sad to only see the beginning of this great story!!! We only started on the realy story with Nruto only recently becoming an ANBU and there ist still so much that will happen and we eill never get to know what..... Thats seriously driving me crazy :( Anyway I adore this story and hope to hear from you again!!!!!


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  • From ANON - Tarrasen Kitten on April 28, 2016
    Love this story, been following it for a while. I think id cry if it gets abandoned! Love the way it progressess naturaly an IC. I really hope to see the point where it comes to an end! Definately will continue to check for updates and follow this work of yours particularly.

    You are an aazing writer, i've been reading through some of your other fanfics!

    Just, amazing! Keep up the splendid work!
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  • From ANON - Jazmin on July 10, 2015
    Is this the same story that used to be about the Akatsuki capturing Naruto? I'm so confused I read the first 4 chapters and my Brian took me back to a fic I had read years ago....if so why did you change it???
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  • From smint45 on June 15, 2015
    Are you still writing this? I really like this story and it would be sad to see it abandoned!!!! Hope to hear from you!!! If you have the time it would be great if you could mail me under my address listed in my Profile to let me know if you plan to continue!! Hope to see an update again soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Conartist643 on December 22, 2014
    While I find some of the story to be overly descriptive it's still really good. You keep the characters in character while also adding in development that gives you room to operate. I'm loving how this is all going and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Chloe on October 10, 2014
    Great story! I am sad that it stops there. Hope you choose to update some day.
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  • From ANON - Quittie on October 09, 2014
    I love this story so much! I like that it's not being rushed, and events come in a realistic way. I am definitely keeping tabs on this story and your works dear author. ;) keep up the good work I am loving it!
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  • From ANON - cat on October 01, 2014
    I would really like it if you could continue this story it's a really good one. Thank you for your time.
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  • From ANON - Smint45 on July 16, 2014
    I really hope you are still going to continue this absoloutly wonderfull story!!!! I'm really sad you haven't updated in so long!!! I hope I will hear from you again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - smint45 on October 26, 2013
    I just reread this story for the 20th time!!! And i can still say that I just adore it!!!! I'm so sad for not hearing from you for such a long time!!! I really hope you will continue this story soon!!!!
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  • From smint45 on January 27, 2013
    Are you still there?? I'm really sad that I havebt heard from you in such a long time :( But I'm still keeping my hope up that there will be another chappy!!! To encourage you to update soon I will tell you everything I like so much about this story!!! Maybe if you see how much I love this you will feel obliged to update *wishing upon a star*

    I really like the way you pace this story it is not as hurryed as most other storys. You really take your time with the plot and I love that, it gived the story more depth. It is not so important for me that we get fast to the smexx I rather want to lose myself in your storytelling and that is something you acomplish perfectly. I find it fascinating how much you think about hte charakters and their feelings and motivations, that is something not many authors do^^ And with the whole Anbu training you show how much knowledge you have about the narutoverse and I find that really amazing. And then the small tidbits about politics you put in there shows how much you think about everything that happens in you story!!! All in all I can say that this story is worth publishing!!! Not many authors can work so well with words and give the story such a great pace as you do. If some people think you are to slow don't let it bother you!! They are simply not used to this magnitude of storytelling you are doing. It is not often found this way in the naruto fandome or any fanfiction fandome cause the storys are not normally this long. Not that I mind I love epic and long storys and yours falls into both categorys!!!

    Now I really hope this review is long enough to encourage you to update^^ I really hope to hear from you again when you are ready!!!!
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  • From ANON - TimeFlys on September 15, 2012
    Its been a while since I was in the mood for a good Naruto fic... So of course I came to you to reread some of my favorites! ^_^ You have no clue how happy I was to find that you had updated Colourless Vanity! And with a chapter that has Gaara in it too! (Gaara's my 2nd favorite character in Naruto so I was thrilled to see him) Loved the seen of Naruto & Gaara interacting and Naruto telling him he could use his first name cause they were friends. Made me want to run up to Gaara and give him a big hug. Also the way you discribed naruto trying to practice while being quite made me giggle. Very well done.

    I hope you update again soon! PLEASE?!! I promise more (and this time, timely) reviews!!!
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  • From ANON - Ivy Rose on September 09, 2012
    I love this story! I just wanted you to know and ask if there will be anymore updates for this? If not, i will be sad but i can understand.
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  • From ANON - Smint45 on July 27, 2012
    Please tell me you didn't abandon this story!!!! I'm beggin you to continue!!! This is by far my favorite story!!!! Please!!! Or write me an mail when you will continue ( my mail address is kuraitenschi@web.de
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  • From smint45 on March 29, 2012
    Do you still continue this?? I really hope so because I really adore this story!!!! I hope you will pick up posting this story!!! Please update soon!!!!
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