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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - itachiuchiha on July 09, 2007
    I'm not seeing Naruto & Itachi's relationship progressing to anything intimate. I really can't wait for that to happen.
    I wonder who Sasuke is going to pair up with.
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  • From ANON - KTH on July 09, 2007
    i'm so excited about this story. it's so hard to wait for the next chapter. i'm so impatient because this is just so good. it's really hard for me to get interested in a story but i find myself reading like i want to find out how it ends but not wanting it to end because it's just so beautiful.
    thank you. hopefully you update soon.
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  • From ANON - kitty on July 09, 2007
    FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    SOMETHING WORTH READING.
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  • From ANON - hplien on July 09, 2007
    You are the greatest Ita/Naru writter.
    I really love you for writing this.
    I'm really loving the plot of the story.


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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on July 08, 2007
    Please write more.. I think this is one of the most inventive stories I've seen. Thank you!!!
    Slave
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  • From Auroawinter on July 04, 2007
    A wonderful chapter as always Ceph ^_^ Brilliant, and I look forward to your next one.. There aren't many good itachi/naru-chan fic goodness so I am really looking forward to seeing how this story works out and where you plan to take it ^_^

    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 03, 2007
    OMG, a new chapter! It seems as if I have been waiting for a centry! I really liked the development of this chapter. The characterization of Naruto, Itachi, sasuke,and everyone else; was beautifully done. I look forward to the next chapter, and I hope you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Darkness_Immortal on July 03, 2007
    I love it!! ^_^ It is really good, but you desperately need a beta-reader. I would love to volunteer for the job, this story has tons of potential, and it is a great read, but some parts are a bit slow. I find it really fascinating how you go through the training and...I don't know...I guess no one really writes like that. Every one seems to just say "And they trained and Naruto got tired, and then POOF the training is done." But you go into detail, and it makes it really interesting. It almost sounds like you have some experience it ninjutsu yourself ^_^
    Neways, all in all, great story, but please do e-mail someone about being a beta-reader. It will just make it flow more smoothly. Have a great day/night, and I hope the muses stay with you! Keep those chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 28, 2007
    Cepheus! It´s so good to see you working so hard (??). I´m glad to here that you are currently working on Silent Observer and also are working on a new story, one where it´s Naruto MPreg...I can´t wait!! I lost those stories.

    I´m such a lare bloomer, I feel bad for not reviewing earlier/reading this fic.

    -Damp *Guilt is eating at my conscience.*
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  • From MasterofPie on June 28, 2007
    Yay review

    This chapter seem so 'deep', with Hyoo's view on Itachi and naruto; and then Itachi's view on naruto and lastly, naruto's view on killing and stuff - lots of growth in this chapter ^^ Loved it
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  • From MasterofPie on June 28, 2007
    Yay i loved it - not too sure if i reviewed before ...

    Anywho, i am loving your fic ^^ And can't wait to read the next chapter

    I loved the shower sence (that was a chapter or go ... oh well)
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  • From Bouji on June 27, 2007
    I don't Review(Mostly since I am really bad at it). But since you gave me the most detailed and I must say helpful review I ever got on AFF I had to return the favor. Colourless Vanity happens to be the most beautiful Naruto work I have read on AFF. The details and the characterization have constantly been fantastic.

    I adore the concept of Itachi and Naruto healing each other. The idea of Iruka as ANBU has also always made me happy. I would have never guessed that English was not your first language.

    I'm always so excited to see the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Eriza on June 27, 2007
    What a good fic!^^ I'm too much addicted to it! I'm even dreaming of this story!XD I hope to read the next chapter soon!^^
    Great job! ++
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  • From sasunaru89 on June 27, 2007
    Ciao!! Tata sono Lolly giusto nel caso tu ti chieda chi sono anche se penso ke l'avrai già capito dal commento in italiano! Te lo scrivo in italiano x il semplice fatto che sono immensamente pigra e scrivere in inglese mi deprime! Ok x quelche riguarda la ficcy non c'è ke dire è fantastica! è molto ben scritta tranne qualche errore di grammatica qua e là ma questi sono davvero pochi! Poi vediamo la trama è molto curata ed è molto interessante e poi il pairing è semplicemente divino! Ok dopo tutti questi complimenti ti volevo chiedere ma hai davvero intenzione di fare tutti e tre gli anni di addestramento?! Se si ti dico solo buona fortuna visto che di solito gli allenamenti sono una mazzata per tutti! X il resto ciao e ci sentiamo su msn! Bye bye!
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  • From ANON - Memphis Atari on June 27, 2007
    I am absolutely in LOVE with this story. It's simply breathtaking how you've managed to take the Narutoverse and spin it into something your own. I admit, i'm anxious for the loving but i like the slow and steady pace you've set for the story.. i keep wanting more more more.. but i don't want it to be bad :P i await patiently for more! especially anxious to know the thoughts of others when its confirmed that Sasuke did indeed try to kill Naruto.. at least i hope its revealed.. a whole new set of drama i imagine because it seems Naruto isn't quite over it just yet.
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