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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Rie on August 22, 2007
    I really love your stories. and this one is by far the most interesting! Keep going with it!
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  • From morbiDreamscape on August 18, 2007
    This is an awesome story! I really like how it balances seriousness and humor, and makes you think. I think the plot could probably progress a bit faster, although I like the care you take in describing the various steps of Naruto's journey into ANBU. I really like how you made Iruka an ANBU, and how Itachi isn't evil, and also describing the ANBU masks in detail. Thank you for writing!
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  • From Rosebud on August 13, 2007
    YAY! I love this story, it's soooo awesome! And this was a great chapter! I hope that you'll update again soon, cause I can't wait to read more! ^^
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  • From anapana83 on August 13, 2007
    I didn't think the training would get more intense. Wow. You are doing very well with this. I applaud you. And while i like the training, and it IS very interesting i can't wait to see what'll happen when the OTHER stuff happens lol. May the writing gods be with you.
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  • From sesshoumaru4me on August 09, 2007
    great story so far, i really like where the plot is going, and i enjoy the chapters you spent on his training. Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Damp on August 08, 2007
    Even though I´m a bit late to say how excited I am for the coming out of this chapter, I sure you won´t mind that I reveiw. ^^

    Wow, I´m kind of learning a few things from this, everytime you post up a new chapter I get happy because I know I´m gong to learn something for sure. Just like from More Than I Appear´s stories. I´m so happy that Naruto now has a home of sorts and a family of sorts he can count on. So very, very for him ^^

    I love how involved Anko is going to be to this fic, I a huge fan of Anko and you don´t really see her in most fic, so I can´t wait to read more of Anko!!

    -Damp *Hurray!!*
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 08, 2007
    i just love the way you describe his training sessions. shoot even i feel like im learning stuff too. ^_^ anyway, i look foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - akinohanun on August 07, 2007
    this is really good!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nah-nah on August 06, 2007
    I read this story some time ago, but I wanted to read it again. I somehow managed to find it without remembering the title or author. Yesterday I read it all, I was wondernig when you will update. Can you imagine how happy I was when I found new chapter? ^^ Thaaank youuuuu :D

    The more chapters you're adding, the more interesting the stroy is. I like the style of your writing and the plot. Naruto is getting a hard training, I can't wait to know how he will change after it.
    I'll be waiting for next chapters!

    (If I made misteakes I'm sorry, but english isn't my first language.)
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  • From NexusW on August 06, 2007
    I love your style of writing as, I have expressed previously. It's really fluid and quite easy to follow, and your scenes flow so well together that you get a great contrast and believeablity.

    By the way: I just got Diamond too! We can be poke nerds together! I miss first gen. pokemon though but some of the new additions are just plain awesome. Shinx as you said, I think is really cool.
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  • From ANON - BiLlIe on August 05, 2007
    WOW... ANKO IS EVEN SCARIER THAN ITACHI. SHE IS A CRAZY SADISTIC BITCH BUT I'M GLAD SHE'S TRAINING NARUTO. I REALLY WANT HIM TO BECOME REALLY STRONG. THAT WAS PRETTY INTERESTING ABOUT KISAME. HE'S IN THE LION'S DEN RIGHT NOW.
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  • From ANON - hpn on August 05, 2007
    I love every chapter of this story. It's so detailed. That was cool how you explained how you can emanate a killing intent.
    Thanks for the update. Hopefully we'll see another one soon.
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  • From darktoy on August 05, 2007
    YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I was starting to worry when I got no news about you. But as usual, you have succeded and delivered a very interesting and well made chapter.

    KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP!

    (BTW: Lovely Anko)
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  • From ANON - Lily on July 11, 2007
    You are simply amazing.
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  • From ANON - Cythia on July 09, 2007
    I THINK YOU'RE ONE OF THE GREATEST WRITER SO I WANT TO ASK YOU IF YOU COULD WRITE AN ARASHI/ITACHI STORY. I PERSONALLY HAVE NEVER READ ANY ON THAT PAIR. I SAW SOME PICTURE'S OF ARASHI ON PHOTOBUCKET.COM SO NOW I'M ALWAYS ON A LOOKOUT ON A STORY WITH HIM ON IT.
    SOMETHING WHERE HE IS ALIVE AFTER SEALING THE KYUUBI INSIDE OF NARUTO. ITACHI'S CLAN IS STILL ALIVE. MAKE IT INTO A "FORBIDDEN FRUIT" TYPE OF THING. I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I LOVE STORIES WHERE THERE IS A DRAMATIC AGE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVERS (OKAY MAYBE NOT SO DRAMATIC). IT CAN BE ARASHI/ITACHI, NARU/SASU (SEME NARUTO PLEASE)& KAKA/IRU.

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