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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 21, 2007
    Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!
    More please?
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Seld on October 21, 2007
    Wow, creepy. I made a guess at what weapon he would pick at the beginning of the chapter...and I was right. :D

    Great chapter as usual, it's so wonderful to have a story that acknowledges the idea that Naruto wasn't really taught that well at the academy. Additionally, this is about the only story from which I can tolerate Kakashi/Iruka, because you tie in the fact that every time they've ever had canon interaction Kakashi has humiliated Iruka. THANK YOU.
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 21, 2007
    Yawn!! Ok, I want you to know I just spent the entire evening reading this fic and LOVED IT!!!! Will you marry me? Kidding! Anyway, my fave part was when Iruke humiliates Kakashi .. priceless! And I also enjoyed watching Naruto blossom into a real person who feels loved and appreciated, oh and gets the training he deserves. I've read doujinshi where Naruto is an ANBU and wondered how that happened. Now I know.

    Well, you are definitely in my top 5 fave authors on this site. Thanks for letting us nonjoining lurkers review your work. Can't wait to see wait happens next.

    See ya!

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  • From ANON - Kayla on October 20, 2007
    You go Iruka. Kakashi definitely deserved it, not just because of how annoying he's been but because of how poorly he's treated Naruto. Okay maybe not poorly but come on he only trained Sasuke when he also knew how to use the Rasengan. Finally someone put him on his place.

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  • From ANON - Ellie on October 20, 2007
    I actually went to Photobucket.com to see what Naruto's weapon looks like. I think that's interesting & unique for him.

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  • From LadyLaran on October 20, 2007
    *bounces* You updated! OMG...you have no idea how much I was looking forward to this. It's an odd but fitting taste in weapons for Naru-chan.

    The only helpful hint I have for you is to watch your pacing. It does seem a little rushed in places, like you're trying to get to one point sooner. It didn't detract at all from the chapter but is something you might want to watch out for.

    *grins* I LOVE what Iruka did to Kakashi. TRUE JUSTICE!!! lololol!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 20, 2007
    Nice chapter. I was wondering what kind of weapon Naruto would pick up. Interesting choice.
    update!
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  • From ANON - Damp on October 20, 2007
    EEEP!! Naruto got a weapon of his choice! YAY! And I absolutely love the choice he made, so original. I couldn't even remember if I'd even remember if I'd seen that weapon or not in the series.

    -Damp *I guess not!!*
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  • From ANON - Kitsune13 on September 28, 2007
    that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Slytherinsexaddict on September 26, 2007
    YAY!!! I really like this so far ^_^ I hope you update soon!

    Oh... and I was wondering... didn't you used to have a story called
    Poisoned Lullaby??

    ~*~VIVA*LA*SMUT~*~
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  • From ANON - Ella on September 25, 2007
    I hope that you are aware of the masterpiece you have created here. This is actually a real full blown story! With mood and feeling and character development and suspense and oh so much more. This is not just yaoi thrown around like confetti where the characters are flamboyantly gay and pubescent. I can't believe what a great story this is, it's like...at the end of my day i can't wait to get home settle down with my green tea and read this aha. But one problem.... where's the rest! I want more.. keep it coming!
    I simply can't wait to see a Naruto and Itachi romance starting. Were getting there soon right?
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  • From morbidsockpuppet on September 23, 2007
    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - boredwithlifeandlove on September 22, 2007
    Great story I love it!
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  • From ANON - jess on September 21, 2007
    p.s.

    whoever left you that review about the japanese is stupid and should be ignored! i like it when you use japanese (even if it isn't perfect... which i wouldn't be able to tell anyways... ^_^) and i think it adds to the story. that kid sounds like a snob and you should definately not listen to her!!! *HUG* i think the story is perfect the way it is and stupid flames like that are just... STUPID! ahhh! i love you! XD
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  • From ANON - jess on September 21, 2007
    thank you! yes i love it! you are amazing! i love the detail that you go into with the traiing... we really get to feel naruto's pain! the whole iruka/kakashi thing is adorable as well... i can just see naruto sneeking into kakashi's room at night in his anbu uniform to threaten kakashi into being a good boyfriend to iruka! so cute! naruto is all protective... speaking of naruto... I can't wait for he itachi to get together! this fic is amazing, thank you so much! *HUG* i love you!!!!! please write more soon! *kiss*
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