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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From LadyLaran on April 11, 2009
    OMG OMG OMG...you updated! And Kei, a traitor? Is he part of the test or really a betrayer?
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  • From Ikippiki on April 11, 2009
    Hey! Great chapter! Althought you left us with a cliffie... meanie. I hope Kei is not really bad but it's Naruto's test for Anbu! I kinda liked him... Well even if he is "bad" I'm sure Naru will change him lol.
    Please write more the more quickly possible!!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on April 10, 2009
    OMG!!!! POor naruto!!! I never expected that!!!
    But I also LOVED this new chapter!!! Thank you sooo much for writing it!!! I hope you are able to update soon again!!!! I lo ve this story!!!!!

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  • From ANON - kylie on April 10, 2009
    thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you.
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  • From Daydreamer79 on April 10, 2009
    I love you so much for continuing this. The ending of the chapter had me screaming in frustration, "What will happen next!" I really look forward to the next chapter. You are one of my heroes for this story. Happy Writing.

    ~Daydreamer
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  • From AngeliaJr on March 02, 2009
    This, I think is a really, really good way to portray Naruto getting better and overcoming his troubles. In some stories he just seems to understand everything and gets better immidiatly. Here i think you have portrayed how he was undermined at a young age perfectly. I am really looking forward to the next update.
    The choice of weapon was intresting too.
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  • From MasterofPie on January 13, 2009
    has this story been discontinued? Or just delayed?
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  • From Gwyllion on January 11, 2009
    I'm re-reading this fic again and enjoyed everything once more. i'm also happy to see that you're still active and re-writing the chapters. Can't wait to read more. Thanks so much for sharing! And keep up the great work! :D
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  • From Ikippiki on January 06, 2009
    Oh my... I'm addicted to this story, I hope you haven't forgotten about it...
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  • From Daydreamer79 on December 24, 2008
    Thank you for taking your time with this story. It is wonderful how you are slowly building the bonds of Naruto to his teammates and at the same time not letting the story lag. I have to say that this is one of the best fan fiction i have read in a while. I look forward to updates. Please continue and finish this story. (^-^)y
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  • From KansouAme on October 30, 2008
    I really enjoy this fiction. I know you haven't updated it in a long time until recently but I read it again and thought I would try a plea of hope... that you might be bitten by a muse to continue on. It's such a wonderful story!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 17, 2008
    hey there! since i thought the other version was pretty cool, i'd have to say this one was kinda goshdarn awesome! thanks for working on this ... glad to see you haven't abandoned it.
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  • From LadyLaran on October 16, 2008
    *shrieks happily* You worked on this! Omg, I have been stalking some of your stories in hopes you'd start working with them again. I love the new chapter you worked on. Fantastic. MORE MORE MORE!!!!
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on October 16, 2008
    Been waiting for an update to this story for a long time even if it's only an rewrite, its still an awesome chapter. This story is one of the few reasons I still come to this site anymore. Please, continue to write and update.

    ~Kenya
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  • From kira123456 on October 16, 2008
    Hi I love your story and can't wait till the next chapter is posted, you sooo rock.

    P.S.
    The Rasengan is not a Wind Chakra Nature Type it is completly Shape Chakra Manipulation and has no
    Nature that was the next step that even the Yondaime was unable to do, though this could be because of the Kyuubi attack. The only one who has been able to combind the Rasengan with a Chakra Nature has been Naruto.
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