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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Hestia on September 24, 2006
    Your Naruto is so loveable. I hope he gets some physical love from the Panther at some point. I don't know when you are going to find time to work in all the relationships promised in the summary, but I'd be happy to read chapter after chapter until you manage to fit them all in! I like Raidou in a fiction!

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  • From ANON - it's 4 in the morning, so why an i awake? on September 24, 2006
    good story! i can't wait to see how it will play out.

    update soon!
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  • From ANON - Fallen on September 23, 2006
    I love This Story PLEASE PLEASE Update soon!
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  • From ANON - LonelyDove on September 23, 2006
    No...i thought this was a good way to cut it off..like it so far..keep it up ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on September 23, 2006
    I don't belive anything bad happened. It could have been worse. UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Zrina on September 23, 2006
    Can't wait to see his training :) Excellent story so far!
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  • From ANON - Lonely Dove on September 23, 2006
    yes i think u should continue....i likes i likes hehe
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  • From ANON - Red Crayon Aristocrat on September 21, 2006
    Wow, this is simply amazing. *___* I seriously teared up while reading the second chapter. That nurse deserves a good bitch slapping.

    Pleeeeeeeeeeeease write more. -begbeg-
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  • From ANON - Shiva Ice on September 21, 2006
    Me like........now...........plz get typing.............plz?! .......plz? ~pouts + lip quiver~ plz?
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 20, 2006
    Man, that anbu captain moves fast. I wasn't expecting him to ask so soon. But if it helps get naru to itachi faster then I'm all for it. ^_^ j/k. I appreciate sakura's thoughtfulness towards naruto. it sure would've made made him feel a hella lot worse if she did bring a gift for sasuke. Anyway, nice chapter. I can't wait to hear naruto's decision. (Even though I'm pretty sure I know what he's going to pick) I just wanna know what gonna give him the push he needs to decide. See ya next time!

    ~Devious
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  • From BrucesGirl on September 20, 2006
    Ah, Cepheus. Always a pleasure to read your work. You have a wonderful, simple style of writing that is informative and draws the reader into your world.

    One theme I've noticed here definitely is the fact that Naruto seems to be avoiding his bitterness over how the village treats him, and I am very pleased with how you wrote his reaction. It's very him. He smiles when he's hurting.

    Excellente!

    I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - t on September 20, 2006
    i like this story so far please keep going

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  • From ANON - TsukiRed on September 20, 2006
    I liked it i didn't think i would from the description, there are a few errors that could befixed with betaing such at using the word "will" when the word "should" is correct, and a few acqwardly phrased areas. But the overall plot was fairly good, I do hope (and it seems to be set up that way) that Naruto chooses ANBU.

    If you need a proof-reader feel free to email me, I'm kind of buzy with school and work, but it wouldn't take too long the chapters aren't epic after all (you know the crazy long chapters...) I could get them done in a reasonable length of time.

    It was interesting.
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on September 19, 2006
    As usual, you are beating your own record of excelity.
    I'll be waiting for more.
    UPDATE SOON! (although, you really brain-washed me with "Winter Release". And I'm waiting for more fo it!!!!)
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  • From ANON - Fallen on September 19, 2006
    Good story please update soon
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