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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - blueinu on October 18, 2006
    I love this story keep up the good work.You are a damn good writer i can't even compete...Sniffles...

    By the way,I was wondering if all the stuff from aff is also on ff.net too,or is it only the mature content?

    Anyway,hope to see some more chapters soon!

    blueinu
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  • From ANON - Kuroy on October 18, 2006
    nice story hope you update soon^^
    can't wait to read Naruto's reaction
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  • From ANON - tortilla lady on October 17, 2006
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hate cliffhangers!!!! will kakashi ever find out about naruto becoming anbu? was he charged to protect naruto too or is he more like the other villagers?? please update soon!!! i really really love this story and i want to see it continued!!
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  • From ANON - Awyr on October 17, 2006
    This is great! I hate those Naruto fanfics that has Naruto just be a badass holding back, instead of getting better. I anticipate when you bring Kakashi into this.
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on October 17, 2006
    i luv this story god my favorites list is getting so full i mean i have like 30 naruto stories alone on it an now this one is one it. pls update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LonelyDove on October 17, 2006
    YAY!!! u updated...i love this story so far
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on October 17, 2006
    Awesome chapter. I'm so glad Naruto was received so well! He's gonna bug out in the next chap i'm sure when he sees who it is. Itachi as his captain...interesting indeed!
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on October 17, 2006
    I belive (firmly) that Naruto will fall from his chair!!!!

    Something like:

    silence...

    silence...

    snikers...

    scream: WTF??????????????

    fall...

    silence...

    silence...

    more snikers...

    Laughing out loud...

    I'll be waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - Lilith on October 17, 2006
    -drool- you make me want to beg for more. i can't wait to see what mask naruto turns out to have and i cannot wait for more of this story! it is beautiful and filled with true emotions. Love it! Do you have a mailing list?
    lilithwolf@excite.com
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  • From ANON - HellKat on October 17, 2006
    Please update real soon, I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Even though I'm a hardcore Sasuke/Naruto pairing, I am getting into Itachi/Naruto pairings. Anyway, will be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on October 17, 2006
    I can't wait to see how the interaction between Naruto and Itachi is going to pan out. I love this pairing and there are so few of these around. Plus, I'm really glad that Naruto has a chance to be the shinobi that he can be. Love this plot. Good job on the writing! :)
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on October 17, 2006
    I can't wait to see how the interaction between Naruto and Itachi is going to pan out. I love this pairing and there are so few of these around. Plus, I'm really glad that Naruto has a chance to be the shinobi that he can be. Love this plot. Good job on the writing! :)
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  • From ANON - Rez on October 17, 2006
    I refuse to write "more" or "please" twenty times, despite the fact that I was chanting those same words after only the second chapter. However, that is what I am asking for: More Please!

    I absolutely love this story. Simple fact for a complicated story. I am enamoured with your writing style, with your characterization, with your respect for the reader(which is so seldom forgotten in this technological age.) The way the thought processes are articulated make perfect sense when the reader compares it to how those same characters have acted in the cannon series.

    I sincerely want to thank you for not ruining the characters. While I am not offended, like many a fan, with any attempt an author makes at impressing their own ideas on established characters, I do not appreciate a full-turn around. You have made the characters act in a, for lack of a better word, characteristic manner. With the situation you are building, that is a very difficult feat to manage. Once more, thank you!

    I'm also impressed and intrigued by your original characters. I enjoy both the names, and the effort spent into their logic, and mannerisms. I cannot express how happy I am that you have fashioned Iruka into a retired ANBU looking to once more take up the lofty title. I think it fits perfectly within the context of the story. I would like to think that the reason for his return to the Force will be revealed, and am silently hope it, in one way or another, revolves around Naruto.

    I also (reverts to fan girl mode) can't wait to see how Iruka and Kakashi come together. I am dying to see how Kakashi will react once he sees Iruka's ANBU tattoo! I know that chances are that Kakashi knows Iruka was once ANBU, seeing as how he himself was once a part of the select team, but I still can't help but wait for the reaction. Whether it will be surprise, momentary shock and remembrance, or increased lust after such a strong and convincing actor. Then again, I am just a screaming fan-girl, so who am I to say?

    Well, I think that's all the praise I have for now! Trust, if you write more, I will review more. Now that most of the gushing is out of the way on how absolutely wonderful your writing is, more oft then not my reviews will focus around plot, and not writing, characterization, and mechanics. (Though I still have yet to properly thank you spell-checking)

    'Till then, keep typin'
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  • From ANON - Lilith on October 10, 2006
    more... please? -give you puppy eyes- Simply wonderful. I love the plot twists especially with Iruka and Naruto deciding to join the ANBU... I can't wait to see him grow and what mask he takes...
    lilithwolf@excite.com
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on October 08, 2006
    O_O... That was so cool. I've never read a story like this before. People always say that the ANBU is a group anyone can get into you know? But you make them seem really special... (Which makes me feel special for some reason! ^_^) I'm like so excited... *must feel like Naruto does!* YAY!! Oh my gosh! lol... it's just so great! I'm gonna READ ALL OF YOUR STORIES NOW! Also, I LOVE THE PAIRINGS!! I've read very few GOOD Itachi/Naruto fanfics. *besides Changes.. or something like that by Agni. - wanna read a great story? Read that!* but yep... your story has given me something to look forward. Also, like... *can you tell me what Naruto's final mask is gonna be? Or his permanent one? I LOVE HYOO!!! He has such a great personality. Can you draw a pic of him and send it to me?* If you want to... ANYWAY... GREAT JOB!! UPDATE SOON KOI! Also, this is the FIRST story I've read where Iruka is an ANBU member. I'm actually working on a story like that myself. But it's centered on Iru's pov... it's a Kakashi/Iruka... Yep, I LOVE THAT PAIRING! And anyway... it's really sad, but loving, lot's of sex... and yep! ^_^ update soon love!
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