Click Here!

Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - liza on November 07, 2006
    i love you! I absolutetly love your stories. The story was written very good and paced well. This chapter was great, I liked Naruto's reaction to meeting his new teamates. Anko ROCKS! she is a scary person, and to now have her as a teacher... oh... poor naruto. Yes a little emotional but it fit. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Are you going to update Silent Observer one day? Its a very good story!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - tortilla lady on November 07, 2006
    another great chapter!!!!! i really like where this story is progressing! please update soon!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rez on November 07, 2006
    There you are!! I hadn't bookmarked the fic and couldn't, for the life of me, remember what the title was. Here we are though...yay!

    Aww, what an emotional upheaval this was. Poor Itachi, poor Naruto...poor poor Naruto. To think you are sticking him with Anko as his teacher. *shudders* Poor kid. Oh well, her "in your face" style will surely help Naruto get to the level he needs in order to become an Anbu. Afterall, she's more into action than words, which is just Naruto's style. Hehe, can't wait.

    And hey, what's going to happen now with Sasuke. Eventually he's gonna be confronted again by Oto nins, right? If that happens, then what? Is he going to follow Orochimaru? Or is he going to hang around Konoha for a bit longer. Oh goodness, and what will happen if Itachi's Akatsuki cape is found. Worse yet, if Sasuke finds out that Itachi isn't in Akatsuki anymore. I think he'd go stir crazy trying to find him. That's no good. Oh well.

    Can't wait for the next chappie to come out....wee. Keep typin'
    Report Review

  • From ANON - LonelyDove89 on November 07, 2006
    you put the story together so well..cant wait 4 the whole thing to be finished!! ^_^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - HellKat on November 07, 2006
    I think that was a brilliant chapter, the emotional stuff was just right. It even made me upset, Naruto's reaction was spot on. And at the end, with Anko, just priceless. Loved this chapter, and I'm looking forwards to the next one, please make it soon, there isn't that many good stories around at the moment. So hope to see you soon, ja ne.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on November 07, 2006
    god, that was great! i, so, wouldn't want to be in naruto's shoes right now. he's gonna have a hell of a time with anko as his teacher. i like how you picked raido as the other team member. nobody ever really pays any attention to him in fanfics and now you'll get to have free reign over his personality and everything. anyway, looking foward to your next update.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nyuchan on November 07, 2006
    Love you.

    Good chapter *sighs* MORE! :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - haruka hikari on October 30, 2006
    I LOVEEE YOUUUUU....this is the first time i ever review to any of fanfics that i have read...i read almost every naruto fics that u wrote...n i'm a die hard fan of itanaru..can't believe there actually sumone who could make itanaru a posssible thing..i mean u made ita not so OOC...especially in ur other fic winter release...i kinda luv how you make naruto char looks like..n about all those anbu...cool...ur one of my fav author...i juz read one of ur stories...n i got stuck...hahaha...thanx anyway for writing this kinda story...i'll wait 4 ur update...jya..^_^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mrs Heero Yuy on October 25, 2006
    Saying that I like this idea for a fic is an understatement. I Love it. Finally Iruka has been made as a strong Ninja; I've read so many fics where he is weak and ends up dying and stuff. Also, I like how naruto's thoughts when deciding which path to take are very clear and gives him credit for his mental abilities. I can't wait to read the next chapter; please post it soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Broken on October 23, 2006
    Oh WOW! THis is awesome!! I can hardly wait to read what's next!! I can barely... if at all find the words for my excitment to this story! Very awesome work! I love you writing style too! Wow! Keep the chapters coming!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Dawn on October 23, 2006
    Wow!
    This is coming along so well.
    I'm really enjoying it! I can't wait for poor Naruto to start his training! The idea of him being in that group is amazing, even though I am a little nervous of some of the types of jobs he would have to do for them when his training was complete.
    I think he would make an excellent ANBU!
    Being in ANBU didn't seem to mess up someone as warm hearted as Iruka and I don't think it would scar Naruto to badly either.
    Oh boy, I'm so excited! Off to read ch.4!XD
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Dawn on October 23, 2006
    Okay, so chapter 1 complete!
    I love how your stories are so orininal.
    You always seem to take the characters in directions that most people have yet to think of!
    The ANBU are such an interesting and mysterious group, I hope that will make for an interesting story here!
    Really looking forward to the next chapter, so here I go!
    Keep up the great work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aoi-sama on October 19, 2006
    yaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!
    dont do cliffhanger!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeee update soon...............
    i beg you................
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MasterLenx on October 18, 2006
    *Stares* - rereads - ....O_O.... AWESOME!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!!! It makes me feel so... so.... HAPPY! It's ENTHRALLING!! If you ever publish a book, (or already have) I WILL READ IT!! YAY!!! lol... anyway... your story makes me happy! *squeals in delight* The power, the raw sheerness of it! The roar of emotions! (I'm getting a little excited!) - not, I'm SUPER-EXCITED!! YAY!!! UPDATE SOON AGAIN OKAY??!! Also.. Karasu means crow, (as you said,) but does that mean Naruto's teammates are Itachi, Iruka, and Kakashi? 'Cause I've read somewhere that Kakashi means Scarecrow, but you know..... *whispers dejectedly..* but... I wanted Iruka to be secretly stronger than Kakashi.... I've never read a story like that.... *sigh* oh well. I love the pairings though! *On a brighter note* Itachi/Naruto yumminess... And the loveable, perverted pairing of Kakashi/Iruka. (I don't care much for Iruka being seme though) and also... if you want to IM me at anytime.. my yahoo messenger is MasterLenx, and so is my AOL.. ^_^ Well, good luck on the next chapter! (I can be your beta... if u don't have one..) ^_^

    Sincerely,
    MasterLenx... ^_^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady Kio-tye on October 18, 2006
    OMG!! This story rocks. Me and my friend just love it and can't wait to see the next chapter. *bounces up and down in atticipation*
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!