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Reviews for Colourless Vanity

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - sam on December 17, 2006
    hiya! can you pleeeease continue the story affective desire?_? i liked it and i don't know why you stopped!
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  • From ANON - Hello on December 16, 2006
    I like this story... can't wait for next update. :)
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  • From ANON - LonelyDove89 on December 15, 2006
    MORE MORE MORE!!! i loooove this story ^_^
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on December 15, 2006
    This is a great story. I can see you are working up to some interesting confrontations in the future as well as developing relationships. I like your look into Itachi. I'm especially looking forward to more Iruka and Raidou, they're both wonderful with Naruto. Are you going to tell us (eventually) who Hyoo is? I can wait. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on December 15, 2006
    Man, i was waiting for this chapter foreeeever!! Anyway, it was worth the wait. So Itachi is acting as Naruto's sensei of sorts...that is interesting lol. Poor Naruto. Though it does make sense to me. Whereas Kakashi and Jiraiya lost thier patience over teaching him the basics, now that a real sadist has come to teach him, he'll learn effectively i think lol. So i'm guessing there will be an interesting amount of interaction between them during this, which is damn fine by me. Nice job on the seal invention too! Well researched. I wonder though, hopefully if Naruto passes the test and he becomes Anbu, how the hell are they gonna hide that blond hair of his? I mean there aren't too many male blonds around. Anyway, it's nice to see that in his own bastard way Sasuke misses Naruto. The feelings in this story are gonna be overflowing i'm sure and i can't wait. Now, get to writing so you can update soon!
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  • From ANON - LonelyDove89 on December 10, 2006
    UPDATE!!!! i need to read this!! i love it so far and you have yet to update
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  • From ANON - yumemi on December 05, 2006
    I REALLY REALLY REALLLY want to see more of this!! i love your characterization. It is pretty realistic and IC; Itachi and his story etc,. Especially regarding Sasuke being weak. and i love the idea of Iruka-sensei and Randou(sp)

    Keep up the good work!! (and updates!!) ^__^
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  • From ANON - kiss_me_deadly on December 01, 2006
    That is a completely new take on the Itachi saga, one I've never seen before. You managed to tie up every loose end. I love it. Wish I had thought of it.
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on November 29, 2006
    Your story is really great and original even if this theme was treated again and again.
    I can't wait to see Kakashis reaction from Iruka being an ANBU and what relationship Naruto and Itachi will have !
    Hope you will update soon !!! ^^
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  • From ANON - dace on November 26, 2006
    AWESOME! OMG if it was a novel I would so buy it! cant wait for more!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiba on November 20, 2006
    That was great. I haven'r read manga, but I'm eagerly waiting for Itachi to appear in TV. Actually You made it so smooth that I even suspected that Itachi really didn't betray Konoha. But again, he hurted Sasuke so much. When are you going to update?
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  • From ANON - Sploooooooooooooosh on November 16, 2006
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sm on November 08, 2006
    This has to be one of the most thought out ideas I have ever seen.
    If it wasn't then, who cares? Your writing is amazing, and this is
    the most original idea I have seen in a long time.
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000 on November 07, 2006
    Bloody fantastic....ur not going to make Naruto a wussy are you? Love your story so far looking for the next update!!! Ladybug452000@Gmail. feel free to e-mail me and annoy me, I like it when people annoy me :)
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on November 07, 2006
    *Whines* nothing happened!! Oh well... it was still good and VERY informative! lol... well, I hope you update soon, cause I am SERIOUSLY looking forward to the next chapter my great one! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOOHOOOO!!!! ^_^

    Sincerely,

    MasterLenx
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