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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei
  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2007
    that was too cute, I love shino and kiba!!
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  • From Lucia on May 16, 2007
    Hiyas!!!!!!!! ^______^
    Glad to see you back!
    OH Gods! Their day at the mall was just AWESOME!!!!!!!!! xD
    Kiba dragging Shino all around, but most of all: the emo/traffic cone discussion!!!! XD It made me crack ;D
    And the last scene between dog-boy and bug-man was SO very MUCH sweet ^.^ It made me squeal! ^_^ [wich got me some wired looks from the people in the cyber-cafe... oh well, they're the ones that are missing this amazing story ;D and when Sakura appeared... just, wow... I couldn't hold in the crazy laugh anymore xD
    So, wishes for next chapie... mmmhhhh.... fluff!!! xD lots and lots of fluff! ^____^
    Hope see you soon
    Ja nE
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  • From BishounenKrazed on May 16, 2007
    yay! an update! i must say, i did feel kiba was overstepping his bounds with the whole 'drag shino out and change him.' so i'm glad shino stood up for himself. i look forward to their relationship blossoming. see you next chapter!
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  • From MagicKnightofthesky on May 16, 2007
    ATTACK OF THE CRAZY FAN GIRLS!!!!!!! AHHHHH! Hehehe!
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  • From emp78 on May 16, 2007
    Hilarious! Loved the argument between Sasuke and Naruto. And the ending, how Naruto was terrified of Sakura, and knocked Kiba into Shino trying to make his escape. lol. Update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2007
    That Sakura is one crazy bitch!!
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  • From ANON - bloodyrose on May 16, 2007
    sweetheart, i love it! but really... you could've upadated it earlier... *pout* any way it's a nice plot with shino and Kiba. they way Kiba reaches out to shino is a good way to make a love blossom and it'd be nice to give Shino a little OOC by acting all fluffy with Kiba like holding his hands while no one's looking and saying a kind word, even a small peck on the cheek would be cute while Kiba is embarassed to death by shino showing his affections. shino after all is experimenting with having someone to love who else to experiment on but kiba and it's nice to see the out come either way I love your story and i cnt wait for more ^^
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  • From ANON - devil child on May 16, 2007
    “Why the hell does everyone assume I’m emo!? I had this style before emos were even emo!!”, was my favorite line.I liked that whole thing where Kiba talks to shino about why he wanted to help them. Also the classic scene where kiba falls on shino is great because it's one step closer till kiba jumps shino.
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  • From ANON - Donedin on May 16, 2007
    WAH HAHAHAHAHA I am back and reading again! Im sorry that I stoped reviewing but I didn't barly have enough time to read the chappys, let alone type a response. So your in that didgital media class or somthing right? I have 2 friends in that course ^_^. One is a genious, never goes to class and still mamages to get top grades. All his classmates want to kill him and eat his brain ^_^. Good luck and keep on truckin! P.S. I think that shino has cute grey eyes too.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on May 16, 2007
    Welcome back! Man, real life is such a drag isn't it? All the stuff we got to do just always seems to get in the way of the things we want to do . . . good luck by the way on your schooling hope you pass with flying colors! Game designing that's very neat. I hope to some day buy one of your games you have created! The chapter was very funny. Loved how Kiba reached out to Shino especially at the end, it was a situation I could see in the anime/manga explaining how they made a connection as friends. Naruto and Sasuke interaction is always fun to read . . . just what did Naruto do this time? Wait maybe I don't want to know. . . but I'm sure it will be fun to read! Well thank you for the update, stay strong and keep up the great work. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on May 16, 2007
    *Does happy dance* (smiles cutely) i love you! you know that?? you made a happy ending to an otherwise utterly depressing day! As always i love your updates! and sasuke getting kiba back after all his comments about him and naruto...cheeky cheeky!

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  • From ANON - anki on May 14, 2007
    ARTEMIS SENSEIIII~~~~~~~ WHERE ARE YOU? T____T argh this my favourite story on AFF and yet, and yet your still gone! UPdate please! I beggg you! I'll even sell, no GIVE you FOR FREE my kid brother! take him! just update please! I miss sunshine Naruto and cute Sasuke!!! (oh my, looking back, i realised....what a drama queen I've become....)
    By the way, your story rocks! I love it's happy feeling and well plotted plot. And Kaka sensei, who cannot love the man? lol but you know who my fav coupling after Naru&Sasu? BugMan and FleaBoy! What an interesting life they must lead! In the red corner: Boy who loves bugs, in the blue corner: Boy who kills bugs. teehehehe Oh i think its cute how everything is still very cute and innocent between our fav duo. So~~when's all the action between angel boy and the living dead boy going to start huh? *wiggles eyebrows like a man* XD
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on May 13, 2007
    Oops... spelled two words wrong:
    classification
    &
    recognition
    Normally I wouldn't correct them, but it's a little hypocritical of me, being that I was correcting your spelling/grammar and all. ^^;
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on May 13, 2007
    *3* Shino/Kiba!!! KYAA!!!! *mad huggles for you* omgomgomgomg I LOVE that pair!! Shino's story is saaaad. ;_; *sniffle*

    Haku breaking Zabuza out of jail is awesome!! (pfft-- Kakashi, you--completely obvious--sly dog. XD)

    Holy cra-- Iruka REALLY got Kakashi arrested!? (What did he do, grope him? XD;;;)Is there no hope for mutual Kaka/Iru love?? ;_; Ah well... Maybe if Kakashi stops acting like a hentai (Just WHAT were they teaching Kakashi in Heaven? o_O) Iruka will give him the time of day. ^^;

    Hahaha! The card-game! XD Poor Lee...

    I noticed a couple of grammar (or spelling? not sure how to classify it...) mistakes:
    “Uh…Gaara-san…have you never partook in a game of Go Fish?”
    That should be partaken. Don't ask me to explain why, 'cause I wouldn't know how; I hated studying English because I sucked at remembering the names and clasiffications of things. (Me: "third-person?? What third person? And what is this "predicate" you speak of?" *confoosled*) ^.^;;; But I got really good grades because I was a total bookworm (like, 100 novels a year ^^;). My entire mastery of written language is based on on-sight regognition, so I can look and tell if something is wrong...most of the time. >>;;; heh...
    Also, you often use "then" where you should be using "than". (eg. "More then you" should be "More than you".) That is one of the most common mistakes in english, so don't be too down about it. ^^

    Thank you for the lovely new chapter!! Oh-- *wild shot in the dark* This "seven-tailed beast" you speak of, could it be Sai? (I know you said you don't know Sai's character well, but maybe you changed your stance on writing him?) Otherwise, I have no clue--but I'll probably kick myself when you reveal who it is. =_=;
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  • From Gwyllion on April 25, 2007
    This fic is absolutely adorable! I can't wait till the next update. Good storyline here...but when is the smut coming? Heheheh....yay for sasunaru!
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