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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei

From ANON - Rame_Lover_Forever on May 16, 2008
OO you cant drop this story cause its COOL! and funny! and i'll be sad if you do! SO PLEASE DON'T DROP IT!
if i beg and brib do you think you could count me as 10 people please!ill beg and brib with fan art! ^-^ *gets on knees and begs*
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From ANON - Damp on May 16, 2008
You are not dropping this story, you can't just leave your fans hanging on a limb like that!! :(

-Damp *PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US!!*
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From SDRR on May 16, 2008
At least you have a good excuse for not updating, though I would be eternally gratefull if you continued.
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From ANON - redtatsu on May 16, 2008
Sequel? Sequel? I would be extremely happy if you were to finish this. After all, isn't it best to finish what you start?
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From ANON - Ougon no Ryuu on May 16, 2008
Please continue this.

Its such an amazing story that it would be a shame to go to waste. =(

-Ougon
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From kagomegirl on December 09, 2007
aww you have to write more!!! i wanna see naru-chan and sasuke get closer!! so cute!! update again soon!!
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From ANON - Kitt_Griffen on December 03, 2007
O_O . . .
This story ROCKS! I liked the idea of Naruto being an angel... In fact this more or less reminds me of a manga called 'Soul Rescue'... I'm also working on my own Angel naruto fic. ^^; The holiday specials are what really got me laughing(or killed me), and the occasional fluffy parts in the begining. Such as 'burnt' cereal............
Just to be informative...
>.>
,< Speaking of Holiday specials, I know it wasn't really nessicry, but St. Whites Day comes after Valentine's day... I think. But could you use it in your story? I think it would fit with the angel thing and even though the story isn't churchy *snickers* I think it should be used because of the 'Saint' in the Holiday name.

Interesting/Speculation parts:
My favorite couples are in there! Yay! *bows* Arigato! I loved your fight scenes, they flowed smoothly and fit all together so well... ^^; Its mainly because I cannot write scenes like that myself... (I'm a fellow fanfic writer, but sadly I don't have an account on here.) Mainly I'm interested on seeing how Sasuke developes, who the other Saint Beast is and more or less find an understanding for why in the world my respect for Shino and myself deminished when I read that he had camera's installed. o.o; Later Sasuke explained and then my reaction that was equal to Kiba's felt like it got smacked. -,- Another interesting part was Haku. I was waiting for a little parody moment, the whole 'ZOMG you're dude?!' thing, between Naruto and Haku... Sadly it never came. D: Lee's history made me a bit sad, but that's okay since I had my Yuki neko with me...(my kittie :3) Hmmm... Lessee... Being able to relate to Sasuke was fun because you captured my personality. O.o; Or at least my morning one... ^^; Kakashi's affection for Iruka... Seemed a bit off. I don't see where the connection comes from and no one hits on someone like that until a crush forms... Course this IS Kakashi I'm talking about so... >,> The fourth Saint Beast is getting on my nerves and Gai still scares me to no end... I still have the Gai-sensei from the story 'My Demon's'...(He was a drama teacher in a High School... Quote: 'Be a flower or you fail!')I think you did a splended job with all of the characters... None of them seemed out of place, 'cept maybe Haku... I can understand why he was needed to be that way and it was okay. I love how Naruto has a feeling that he has to save everyone or make anyone happy. He's the perfect 'angel' for the job, but secretly Sasuke gets him all to himself. Wouldn't their love be a bit on the forbidin side? Such as Human + Angel = Punishment? THe only reason I could think of is because God wouldn't want Naruto to be hurt by Sasuke at some point. Naruto will live an immortal life, but Sasuke WILL eventually die and continue to grow older. I think that would need a bit of quick thinking... Course Sasuke could die and then be Naru's angel buddy, seeing as Kakashi says that they revert to their 21 year-old selfs... But what would suck even more is if as soon as Naruto is a full fledged angel that he'd get a chance at a second life? Leaving Sasuke and then having a major age difference? Sorry if that was a bit lengthy... ^^; All and all this is a good story, please keep updating cause for some reason whenever I review on a story it dies. O.o

Questions(If you're accepting them):
1.) Sasuke... What do you think of Sasuke cosplayers?
2.) Naruto... Meh cover his ears up if you want. e.e But(again on the cosplaying line only different) What do you think of Narusasu/Sasunaru cosplayers?
3.) Kakashi... May I steal your book?
4.) Gaara(this is a bit personal) But out of all the people that you've taken blood from... Who's blood was your favorite?
5.) Finally the entire cast... How do you all put up with fanfiction authors that can bend you to their will through blackmail? X3
Requests:
My friend wants Sasuke to get drunk(for SOME reason she loves the 'drunk Sasuke' thing e.e) and confess his love(affetion e.e) for Naruto through tiny hints, then a kiss.
Meh own request... Can I get a free hug(one that ensures no death from Sasuke or Neji?) from Naruto and a 'cyber' cookie from him? ^^; I wish to compare my cooking with his. o.o I can burn anything... Cept for cookies. Those come out unsacthed. *gives Naruto a chocolate chip cookie* ^w^

Ja ne,
Kitt
PS Sorry if this was too long! ^^; And if you do another special again don't make me into a cardbord cut out. If I'm mentioned at all... *raises her hand guiltily* I'm a Sasuke cosplayer, therefore I wish to have rights to getting free hugs from Naruto! *glomps Naruto* Kyaaa! >,< *then runs before the real Sasuke and Neji can react* o,o I have my own Naruto cosplayer too... Actually two, Shippuden and younger Naru... *huggles her cosplayers* Course my koi plays as younger Naru and my best friend who pretends to flirt with me to make my koi mad is the Shippiden. O.o; And some advice to Sasuke(I've no shame from saything this as its being typed by my koi) 'Just go ahead and molest Naruto. You'll pat yourself on the back for it later AND... Its not rape if he likes it.'
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From kotikiz on August 08, 2007
WAW!!!! wanderful story!! please, update!!!!
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From Gwyllion on July 07, 2007
YUUSSSSSSSSS! A new and wonderful chappie! I love your version of Lee's story here. So sad, but strong. Can't wait to read more! Keep it up! :D
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From ANON - angeloffire015 on July 06, 2007
so good! I love This story! Neji need to be taught a lesson by Hinata! also -kun = is also used to refer to a male that is your boyfriend (or so I've heard/read)
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From Lucia on July 01, 2007
OH My God...
I am absolutely in love with this chapter!!
Lee's death really got to me... he's so adorable you just can't NOT like him ^-^ and when he said that when he woke up, he was already dead, oh dear so sad!!!!!!!! T.T
But oh so beautiful!!
And so much GaaLee!!!!!!! I can't stop smiling! ^_______^
Can't wait to see what comes next ;D And where the hell did Kakashi go????? but most importantly... did Naruto, Sasuke, Kiba and Shino survived the wrath of the pink haired creature? o.O
Hope see you soon
Ja!!
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From ANON - Shadow on June 30, 2007
I agree with you about Sasuke. -nods- Emo is a goth's excuse to wear girl clothes.

Personally, I think Lee's story is just as sad as Gaara's, but in a more bittersweet sort of way. If that made any sense at all.
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From MissMayumi on June 29, 2007
i'm curious..artemis-sensei..this story seems kinda fluffy, no offense, in a good way..but do Naruto and Sasuke ever have sex? if so what chapter? it said in the summary, that there was yaoi..(i think, forgive me if i'm wrong)..and i'm curious..
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From ANON - Yuri-san on June 28, 2007
LEEEEEEEEEEE-KUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_; *sniffle/sob/weep* Augh, THE SAD!!! T_T

And yet, somehow, I slipped right back into pervert-mode when Lee offered his neck to Gaara. o_o||| It was pretty sweet though~ ^3^

(Then who is the seven-tailed beast!!?? *curses the reality of having to wait*)
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From ANON - niguara_chic on June 28, 2007
Yeah you're right. Anyway Lee's past was so sad!*sniffles* I'm here for you Lee!! *Hugs Lee* Good chapter though. Your emo talk made me laugh, it makes sense though, we all get cuts and bruises and all the other stuff, so that makes everyone emo!! *gasp* We're all emo!! The world has come to an end!! Oh, update soon please!!

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