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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei
  • From ANON - wendyghost on October 22, 2006
    good story!
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on October 22, 2006
    Bleh, I don't know where I was that I missed the last 3 chapters! Aww, I love this story, it's squishy like Charmin toilet paper. I also love a jealous!Sasuke so that was uber cute. I like the idea of Naruto as an angel. The last chapter seemed sort of unexpected, but I suppose you're moving toward more of a plot. I'm excited to read more about Naruto's past! And oh I squeed so much about Naruto being the ramen and Sasuke his ramen bowl. It was sooo sweet. And I loved this line from earlier: A good hint was the cereal bowl in front of him. It contained perfect, unburnt cereal. LOL I can see Naruto burning cereal even in this. And don't worry about the yaoi part. I think it makes sense to take your time what with Naruto being an innocent angel and all and Sasuke not ready to come to terms with his feelings of jealousy! Pressure for some booty can sort of hamper your writing, I think. It's just fine at this pace. XD
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  • From ANON - TimeFlys on October 22, 2006
    So cute!! I love a scared/panicy naruto!!!! XD But i must say I'm mad! A cliff hanger?! Why did you do it!! that was mean! There for- you must update soon or else no candy for you! Please?
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  • From ANON - Kira on October 18, 2006
    Heh, I really likie your story!! it has a really good plot to it, and seems like it could go really far!!

    I support yas 100%!! okays??

    If you need anything, lemme know, Ok??

    ^^ Kira
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  • From ANON - eepmonster on October 18, 2006
    cute! but um...yeast? in cake? *sweatdrops* i'll just pretend you said baking powder...lol! thanks, please continue!
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  • From ANON - koyote on October 17, 2006
    "He supposed he could not shower or comb his hair, and wear scruffy wrinkled clothing, but he was a Uchiha. Uchiha’s DON’T wear scruffy clothes and allow their hair to go to hell. And they most certainly don’t shower."

    Ah yes, the Uchiha. The smelliest clan of them all. (laughs)
    Seriously though, I know that someone has already mentioned this in a previous review, but you REALLY need a beta. I've only read the first chapter and have already noticed numerous spelling/grammar mistakes.
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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 17, 2006
    i'm so sorry that i didn't review before. i thought i did. gah, i've got a crap memory. anywho, it's a sick day for me! yeah, i get to stay out of school. hm, anyway, this chapter was really cute. i love how sasuke gets jealous of naruto hugging everybody. it's sweet, and i could care less if they're in or out of character. i don't know too many ppl that can keep them in character during any kind of story. plus, its nice to see them act differently sometimes.

    hope u update soon, and good luck in ur class,
    inc
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  • From ANON - alia den on October 16, 2006
    ok first things first i am loving the story. it is so light and fluffy, maybe even frothy? or better yet like punken makadamia nut fluff with a brownie and some vanilla icecream (yeah i missed dinner today) anyway i am really enjoying this story and i cant wait for the smut! (which i totally agree tastes better with a bit of plot)
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  • From ANON - donedin on October 16, 2006
    Ths is an awesome fic, I really enjoy it. I really like what is going on with Sasuke and Naruto, can't wait to see how you get the nookie going ^_^. Post soon!
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  • From ANON - Miko hanyou on October 16, 2006
    Kawaii!!! I can still imagine Pita-ten style art of them while reading and it's adorable. Please continue soon! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 16, 2006
    Aww! But Naruto seemed a little stupid in this one, rather than just innocent. A bit slow on the uptake...but he is pretty cute. And damn, I wish my fridge had what I wanted in it every time I opened it...
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 16, 2006
    I was laughing so hard when I pictured Naruto's apartment completely covered with cooking stuff! It was an awesome chapter, I was starting to wonder where you where, but you updated and it was great! Keep them coming!
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  • From mirandler43 on October 16, 2006
    Hey hey! See, I told you I'd get around to reviewing! Sorry it took me so long...This chapter was fun. I liked seeing Sasuke forced to realize what was going on internally. He could only deny it so long. I liked seeing Sasuke as a more responsible figure in the scene with Hinata and Naruto. He's not bossy, but still firm, like he's more grown up than them. I also love the reasoning you showed behind Sasuke's compulsive need to clean. With Sasuke, he doesn't say much, so you have to find a way to show the reader what's going on without using dialogue, and you did well. I laughed when Naruto was finally understanding about ramen and cake not mixing. Sasuke? Ramen bowl?? I can just see Sasuke's face if he could have heard Naruto's thoughts...All around, good story, good concepts. I caught a few errors (since I'm anal like that). If you're interested, I can let you know what they are. Just email me. And if you are ever in need of someone to proof, or even just bounce ideas off of, I'd love to hear from you.

    ps: thanks for the review at TTF! :D
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on October 16, 2006
    OH! *hugs this story* Fluffy-luffiness ^^ *squee*
    I kind of like it when they're OC (but really, you never get very far off. In fact, for the setting they're in, it seems rather acurate. ^_^b)
    Sasuke is SO jelous. *giggle* XD

    Update faster! ^^Kidding, kidding. You update faster than some. Ha, ha. Every reader wants faster updates -we're so greedy. ;P (When people ask you to update, it just means they like your story. ^^)

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  • From ANON - Suki on October 16, 2006
    This is an absoulte joy to be reading! Naruto being Sasuke's angel is just too precious for words and so intaining that I'm now dying to read the next chapter. So, with amazing speed, the quickest you've ever gone, post that next chapter for all your adoring fans. Like me!
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