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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei

From ANON - commgonn on November 01, 2006
very nice, I LOVE YOUr sense of humor :D
also very good story + halloween special
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From ANON - bloodyrose on November 01, 2006
my dear i know that you enjoyed making the halloween special and honsetly, it made me smile but i really wished you'd continue on your updates *smiles softy*
now lets see, about Naruto being 'innocent' it cute and reminds me of Chi from chobits and that girl from angel tales (even Ginji when he glomps Ban)(10/10)
Sasuke all jealous and that is also cute (8/10)
Action scene (10/10)
Kakashi and Iruka Paring? i'm a little biased because i simple LOVE that paring id give you a 100. a slight request please don't make kakashi TOO much of a pervert. i'd feel sorry for poor Iruka, he's always considered as the Uke *pats Iruka's shoulder* It simply isn't fair.
And i also adore Shino/Kiba pairing.
Sakura and Ino can just F@%#$ Off. unless they get killed slowly and painfully *smiles innocently*
All in All a very wonderfully put story, keep up the good work and please update soon for your readers
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From ANON - Donedin on November 01, 2006
O.o! Im sorry Kakshi!!! We all know that you love Iruka but you just had some kind of chem, with Michale ^_^. Don't be mad! At least you get makeup sex xD. I like the fact that you respond to our reviews but post STORY damnit! ^_^ ill be waiting... and yes it was cheesy.
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From ANON - innerchild on October 31, 2006
awe, the last two chapters were so cute. and i really loved how u described the action in the fight between naruto and neji. this story is so cool. i love the folklore, demon/angle stuff, and now you've got things i've never heard about before. but it's all good, cause u explained it to my simple self. i really hope u update soon!

-inc
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From ANON - miko spirit on October 31, 2006
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! the halloween special was so funny !!!!!!!!!!!! well keep updating i really want to see what happens next!!!!!!!
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From ANON - DaedricFire on October 31, 2006
I like this story, a angel naruto is something i can see clearly. Sasuke sleeping with a crowbar i can see also, i love how naruto burns cerial. It reminds me of the sims 2 where my sim tryed making a toaster pastry and destroyed the whole house in a fire. (The sim also died)
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From ANON - Carla on October 31, 2006
Wow! I like the Holloween Special! It was awesome! The hole scene is so real and I loved it! Just update the story soon please! However, now that you mention a certain someone am very curious as to who could be the other potential candidate for Naruto other than Sasuke and Neji. As you explained that most of the boys are gay...and Gaara has yet to make an appearence...Could it be him and that is why both boys cool down because they dont want him in the scene? 'Cause even if Hinata kind of shows liking towards Naruto it would have to be another guy, right? Anyway, love the story and the way Sasuke is transforming with the help of a certain beautiful angel. Naruto is just so cute!!!

Carla
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From ANON - Yuri-san on October 31, 2006
OMG! YOU ARE THE BEST AUTHOR EVER!!!! XD *smothers with huggles*
O_O`*feels bad for killing Sasuke*"Heh, sorry..."*is SO not sorry; that was hilarious!* ^^;
I was dying from laughter at the answers to my questions! XXDD The shower scene had me laughing like a maniac! XXDDDDDDDD Herbal Essence!? XXDD *cracks up all over again*
Though I thought it was awsome fun for Neji to want Naruto (any reason to evoke Sasuke's jelousy is o.k. in my book XD)I had to wonder, "when the hell did that happen? O_o" But, since this is like a total crack, RP, Halloween special chapter, I really don't care. XD
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From ANON - Nomme de Plume on October 31, 2006
jesus, that was hilarious! i had completely forgotten that i'd asked that! ahahaha this was a great little "behind the scenes" keep up the great work!
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From mirandler43 on October 31, 2006
Hi hun! I know, I'm really really horrible. I'm so sorry. I don't want to make any excuses and sound lame, but I do want you to know that I am soo swamped right now. So here is a super awesome review to hopefully help make up for my horribleness.

I can't remember if I reviewed for ch 6 or not, or even 5? Gah, my brain is...nonexistent. ::scuttles back to check:: Okay I did review for 5. So, onwards to ch. 6. I can't remember if I emailed you about that one or not? I know I have the edits written down somewhere... ::scuttles again:: Okay, no I did not. So I will email you those hopefully today. Chapter 6 was a fun read. You did a good job setting up the cliff hanger, what with the beginning being so calm and seemingly innocent. I really noticed your descriptions, too; you do an excellent job identifying all the elements surrounding your characters. That's always something I struggle with.

Okay that was ch. 6. Chapter 7: I read this one with my mouth hanging open the whole time. It was so fantabulous! I hardly noticed any errors, too, so way to go! I'll email you those as well. Awww, the closet scene! And when Naruto's anger transformed him, I think I may have squee'ed. Not out loud, but inside my head. (I was at work...I'm doing my best to convince my coworkers that I am, in fact, sane. Squeeing would not have helped.) Thank God for Kakashi and Michael showing up. I was actually waiting for Kakashi from the beginning, because to me it didn't make sense that he wouldn't be keeping an eye on Naruto since it's Naruto's first job. Kakashi makes me laugh, too. It's refreshing to see an angel that is not necessarily "angelic" in every sense of the word.

Chapter 8: YOU HAD ME ROLLING. God I loved it. I shall proceed to point out what exactly I enjoyed.

~Kakashi adjusting his white gloves
~Sasuke: In your face, snake bait.
~Naruto...stay out of my book collection.
~when Naruto randomly shouts RAMEN! I laughed so hard, because my eye was twitching as I read it.
~yay! Shino gets matched?! (super excited) I love Shino a little too much...
~Sasuke: Yeah...sex educational...

Please bring in Lee! Lee is my baby. Yes, he's annoying, and obnoxious, and cries far too much. But that's why it's so much fun to write him!

Okay, I believe that brings me up to date. I will email you hopefully today (will try my absolute hardest!).
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From ANON - Anna on October 31, 2006
Candies!!
I made Sasuke die! *cries*
But I wasn't the only one so I'm ok!
It was hilarious, geez my stomach hurts.
So Kyuubi, ok!!
*glomps* love you!
And loved the special *grins*
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From ANON - TimeFlys on October 31, 2006
lol. That was really cute. At first I wasn't really sure what you were doing- I must have missed the memo. It was really cute and I enjoyed meetting/talking to all the characters. However I do have a question now: Is 'you know who' Gaara? Please let it be Gaara!!!! I'm a big Gaara/Naruto fan and nothing would make me happier then seeing Gaara poof in and give Sasuke a run for his money. (meaning fighting for a certain blonds affection.) XD I get all dreammy eyed just from the thought! 'heart Another question: Does Neji like Naruto now? Because with the innterview it seemed like it but in the story there hasn't been a hint up till now. (or are you dropping clues?) Either way I can't wait till the next chapter- please let there be Gaara!!!!!!( TimeFlys attempts to brieb author by sending candy to capnets) lol
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From ANON - Schala on October 31, 2006
Oh this story is awesome!
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Will Hinata be ok with that she had seen or is Kakashi going to wipe her memories?
Naruto being a Saint Beast is cool too. Will Sasuke remember any of this either?
Also are the Saint Beasts going to all be relevant to the jinchuuriki in the manga as well?
So many questions my mind is racing, keep up your good work!
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From ANON - Kajia on October 29, 2006
aaaah being an angel just fit Naruto so weeelllll
I can imagine him in white with two big white wings so kawaaiiiiiiiii
well your fic is really cute I love all these story with angels demon etc
and it was really a good idea to explain the hierarchy in heaven and explain some things on the japanese folklore
the last part reminded me of Tokyo babylon a lot ^^(I like this manga...well except for the end )

a few questions for your characters
to sasuke : where does that obession for cleanng come from? and do by any any hasards have a sweet tooth? if not how come you know so much how to cook desserts when you have no one to cook them for??"
to naruto : "do you angels get old with time or are you going to remain an adorable little blond angel all your (after)life? oh and...could you possibly send me a full cupboard of chocolate with your magic? ^^"
to kakashi "exactly who have you paid to be accepted as an angel? don't tell me that no-one has caught you reading yur perverted book yet..."
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From ANON - Yuri-san on October 28, 2006
Whoo, hoo!! That was awsome/well written! Yay for angel/demon battles XD *cough*andhugginginclosets*cough*
While I was reading about the Saint-Beast thing I couldn't help but squeal in my mind "OMFG Gaara's gonna be a saint-beast!!!" ...he is, right? O_O;

Okay, I know this might seem like a stupid question to ask him -since this is a shonen-ai fic- but since nothing has really "happened" yet I think it could be really funny to ask Sasuke: "Are you gay?" Other than that (or more like INCLUDING that lol) I can only think of really strange/dumb (XD) questions like:"Neji, how do you keep your hair so silky smooth?"(lmao) or:"Naruto, what would you do if all the ramen in the universe dissapeared?" *Naruto commits seppuku at the mere thought*
I don't know about the Sasuke one, but the Neji one I DEFINATELY want to know! XXDD;;;;; The Naruto one is just a joke XD
So, to clarify, I want to ask Neji ^that^ question. :D

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