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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei

From ANON - CommGonn on November 13, 2006
Kakashi... school nurse.... *shudders*
Anyways, KakaIruka scene was good, Kakashi was perfect.
Good job once again =P
-Kenneth (expects a 1 day update xP j/k)
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From ANON - Passing Reader on November 13, 2006
Read your note at the top about not being able to get Gaara into character and I have a recomendation! I really hope you havent read this yet b/c I had to go all the way threw 22 pages of fics to find this *laughs* I really love this auther, she/he does Gaara/Lee fics and has them both in PERFECT charater!!! *squee* It might help you out a bit its here
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544200885
Just throw that in your address bar and it should take you right to it, the auther is Maldoror if this dosent work, they even have sequils *mad squees* Really great auther, definatly a must read for GaaraXLee fans ;p Now im going to read the next chapter since my mission is complet, sorry if you have already read these fics ^^' Though I hoope I helped just a little ^^'''
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From ANON - Donedin on November 13, 2006
drama/fluff/action/humor rollercoaster?? But I love rollercoasters, and I love storys... so logicly putting the two together should make somthing AMAZING right?! And I love how you made Kakashi try and be so inocent with the whole evil pervert thing. Awesome. And how is that Sasuke cough ^_^! :D What is this about no info on everyones fave green beast jr.?! Im dying to know about him and what you have planned. Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
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From ANON - Splooosh in a Ramen bowl!!! on November 13, 2006
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! your not updating too fast your updating too SLOW!!!! fluff! fluff!! fluff!!! FLUUUUUUUUUUUFFFF!!! and story BUT FLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!!!!! *hugs your leg* fluffiness pweeeeez...*puppy eyes* pweeeeeeeez!!!!
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From ANON - innerchild on November 12, 2006
yeah, sasuke grew his balls back! makes me happy now that naruto is happy. gaara is so cute in this... which is not something i'd usually say. i've never really had the urge to hug him as much as i do with this story. and he just arrived! oh well, great job. can't wait until the next chapter.

-inc
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From ANON - Yuri-san on November 11, 2006
I'm TOTALLY okay with this fic doing the roller-coaster. The darkness/drama just makes the fluff-- um... fluffier.(?) ^^;;
Oh man! I freakin luff Gaara!! *why did I just say that?* can you believe I've never read a gaara/lee fic! O.O
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From ANON - Passing Reader on November 11, 2006
Thanks, though I dont think I'll be passing where your storys concerned lol ;p
Who would have thought that Naruto would be needy for attention, must be used to getting it all the time ne? *giggle* Cant wait to see what happends next, Ja!
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From ANON - BrokenSouledPoetess (NSI) on November 11, 2006
*squishes Gaara* Nope! And he's just SO damned cute!
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From on November 11, 2006
*sqeals like the fan girl she is* I'm just totally in love with this story. I've read Pita Ten and this was a must. It's very well written, easy to understand, and proporly proportioned in my opinion. Not too much fluff but enough to make me happy.^o^ It's really good. Really looking forward to the next update.
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From ANON - Miko hanyou on November 11, 2006
Yay! Problem fixed and the tensions are raising. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - MissMayumi on November 11, 2006
That was awesome! Gaara isn't as much of a bad boy as he is in the real Naruto..but I like his personality so far! This story reminds me of Ah! My goddess!..It's in a way kinda like it haha..update fast!
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From ANON - bloodyrose on November 11, 2006
You are soo right seto/joey are great!!! maybe after this you might decide to write one ::hint:: ::hint:: ^_~. anyway about the story, yes it is getting a little depressing but the cuties are making up for it. *glomps you* you're the greatest! and i soooo can not wait for the Iruka/kakashi thing! and LEE!!! *holds up a sign board that says if sasuke can get jelous y not Naruto hehehe!
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From ANON - CommGonn on November 11, 2006
How is updating fast bad? x_x
anyways, another awesome chapter. *hugs xD*
-Kenneth
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From ANON - Tati on November 11, 2006
Alright, to answer your question, a little drama can't hurt. It just adds a little flavor to the fluff. As long as there is a happy ending, I'm all for a little melodrama. (I'm a sucker for happy endings!) So just keep going, I believe your headed in the right direction. But I have a question for you? Is there going to be any Iruka in this story. I have to confess I'm a KakashixIruka fangirl (Bigtime!). I would love to see it. But it is your story, and you make the call. Keep up the great job. You have a great story developing. Just make sure you finish it. Please.
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From ANON - Anna on November 11, 2006
I certainly don't mind the rollercoaster, as long as you keep writting!
Mmmm... this is very interesting, now Kakashi is going to teach the three of them, I can't wait to see how that is going to turn out!
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